My OS thread- New OS for Anniversary....Yaadhein on pt 1,2 pg 23 apr 5 - Page 6

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Geet made him confess finally...
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cute story of maan & geet
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geet with her love brought maan out of his shell
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posting this on Maneet Jrs b'day...
happy b'day Jr...😉
Mere papa...

Maan is busy in his work as always and Geet is busy with junior Khurana, let his name be Shaan rhyming with Maan...

So Geet wants to go shopping with Maan for the functions...

But Maan is too busy...

Geet goes to KC with Shaan...

She waits for Maan but he is with some client...

Geet tells Adi to go and inform Maan that a VIP client is here waiting for him for ages...

If Maan doesn't meet the client within 2 minutes then he will loose them for ever...

Adi: Geet, ye kya hai? Mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai, Maan sir andar koi naya project ke barein mein baat kar arhe hai

Geet: unse kahiye ki pehle apne purani projects pe dhyaan de phir naye projects ke barein mein soche, haina Shaan?

Shaan: haan

Adi is so scared...

Adi looks at Geet desperately...but Geet is stubborn...

Geet: jao Adi sir

Adi: par Geet, mein iss waqt Maan sir ko kaise disturb kar saktha?

Geet: aap jaa rahe ho ya hum andar chalein?

Geet andar gayi toh Maan bahut gussa karega, Maan is always concerned that the clients are given utmost priority...jab koi client Maan ke saath ho toh unkke jaane ke badh hi Maan kissi aur ko milega, chahe woh koi aur important client bhi ho...

Adi andar jaatha...

Maan: Adi, presentation tayaar hai?

Adi goes speechless...

Presentation ki CD toh Geet ke paas hai...

Geet refused to give it till Maan comes to meet her...

Adi: he he he he he...

Adi blinks...

Maan gets angry...

Maan: Adiii, presentation shuru karo

Adi: presentation?

Maan: haan, hammare Noidawale project ki presentation

Adi: shuru karthe haina

Maan: jaldhi karo Adi, hum tummare liye pure zindagi wait nahi kar sakthe

Adi: sir, koi paurane client bahar aapka intrezaar kar rahe hai

Maan gets angry again...aaise kaise sabke samne kissi aur se milne jaa saktha, aur iss Adi ki dimag toh kabhi kaam hi nahi kartha...

Maan: pehle inkka kaam katam hone do, phir dekhthe hai

Adi: par ye bahut khaas client hai

Maan: ye bhi toh khaas hi hai, hummare liye har client khaas hi hothe hai, samjhe tum ?

Adi ke paas toh Geet ke diye hue CD hi hai...

Maan snatches it from him and runs it...

Geet comes on the screen...

Maan is shocked...

Maan turns back to Adi and stares...

The video is playing...

Geet: Maan sir wahan kya dekhthe ho? yahan dekho, picture shuru honewali hai

The clients are also excited ...seems to be interesting...

Geet: sorry gentlemen, I had no other choice but to steal a few minutes of our Maan sir's precious time like this...

Everyone looks at Maan...Maan is embarrassed...

So Mrs.Khurana wants to convey a message ...

Maan tries to stop the video...

Geet: hare Maan sir, band kyun karthe ho? picture abhi bakhi hai

Adi: ha ha ha ha ha ha

Maan pauses it...turns to his clients...

Maan: sorry for the trouble, lets continue tomorrow

Clients: no problem Mr.Khurana, hum bhi family men hi hai

They leave...Maan stares the screen...

Adi: sir

Maan: what?

Adi: picture abhi bakhi hai

Maan: what?

Adi: woh...Geeet

Maan: Adi, jao apna kaam karo

Adi escapes...

Maan plays the video...he doesn't know that Geet is here...

Dekhthe hai ki Geet kya kehna chahathi...

Geet: toh Maan sir shayad aap apne ek purane client ko bhool gaye

A flashback of Maneet runs on the screen with some old photographs...

Geet continues: aapko yaad hai ki ye aapki bahut khaas client hua karthe the aur aap inke saath zindagi bar chalne ka wada khiye the, aur bas theen saal mein apna wada bhool gaye?

Then there is Shaan's photo on the screen...

Geet: issko yaad hai? Aapke basha mein kahe toh ye hummari donno companies ki joint project hai jo ab hummare company akhele handle kar rahi hai, aap toh isske zamedari utane ke liye tayaar nahi ho, toh humne faisla kiya hai ki aaj se isske zamedari aapki aur hummare company isse aapke hawale karkke kuch aur zaroori kaam pe dhyaan dene ki faisla kiya hai, toh ab se aap apne naye projects ke saath issko bhi sambalo, good bye Maan sir

Maan: Geeet

Adi: sir, apne bhulaya?

Adi enters Maan's cabin with Shaan...

Shaan heads to Maan's chair and the little prince takes over the crown...

Yahi toh KC ka agla crowning prince haina?

Maan: Adi, ye sab kya hai?

Adi: sir Shaan

Shaan grabs the paper weight from the table and starts playing with it...

Maan tries to get it back from him...

Maan: Shaan yahan aao, papa ke paas

He climbs the table and crawls towards Maan...

Shaan goes and hugs Maan...: papa...

Maan lifts him and kisses him...Shaan kisses back...

Maan: mama kahan hai?

Shann: papa papa, aaj mein aapke saath kheloonga

Maan: Adi, Geet kahan hai?

Adi: Geet Pinky ke saath bahar gayi hai sir

Maan: what? Shaan ko yahan chodkke?

Adi: sir Geet ne kaha ki Shaan aaj yahi rahega

Maan: what?

Shaan: haan papa, mama ne kaha ki aaj mein aapke saath kheloonga, aao papa

Maan: par Shaan, papa ko bahut kaam hai, aap ghar kyun nahi jaathe, apne mama ke paas

Shaan: nahi mujhe yahi rehna hai

Maan: teek hai, aap yaha beitiye, aur ye lo sketches, aap kuch draw karo

Shaan: par mujhe drawing nahi aatha

Maan: try karo, aajayega

Shaan: papa aap sikao

Maan tries to draw a skyscraper...

Shaan: ye kya hai?

Shaan makes a face...

Maan: kyun? Ye achcha nahi hai?

Shaan: nahi, mujhe pasand nahi hai

Maan: teek hai, aapko kya pasand hai?

Shaan: lion, deer, elephant, peacock

Maan: what? Mama tumme jungle book ki mogli banana chchathi hai? MSK ke beta jungli tarzan banega?

Shann: papa, mujhe yahi pasand hai, aap sikhao

Maan: haan haan

Maan tries to draw an elephant, but it turns out to be a disaster...he is used to lines aud cuts and arches and not animal figures...

Shaan: papa, ye koi naye animal hai kya?

Maan: ye elephant hai

Shann laughs...

Shann: papa elephant aaise nahi dikhtha

Maan: mujhe patha hai, elephant aaise hi hotha

Shaan: nahi, ye elephant nahi hai

Maan: Shaaan, I'm telling you this is an elephant

Shann: nahi, papa ko elephant banana nahi aatha, papa ko elephant banana nahi aatha

Maan: ssshhh chup, bilkul chup

Shaan starts crying...

Adi comes running...

Adi: kya hua sir? Apne Shaan ko kya kiya?

Maan: what? Adi, meinne kuch nahi kiya

Adi: Shaan kyun ro raha hai?

Maan: usse hi pooch

Adi: junior, aap kyun rothe ho?

Maan: bilkul apne mama ki tarah har waqt rothe rehtha hai, aane do Geet ko, MSK ke bte ko kaise crying baby banake rakha hai usne

Shaan: mujhe elephant chahiye

Adi: hathi? Sir, mein jaake hathi lekhe aaoon?

Maan: Adi, pagal ho gaye ho kya?

Adi: ha ha ha ha ha, mera matlab toy elephant

Maan: kuch bhi karo, jaldhi isska muh band karo

Adi: yes sir

Adi gets a toy elephant...

He gives it to Shaan...

Shaan throws it away...

Maan gets angry...

Maan: ye kya hai? Tumne elephant manga aura b kya hua?

Shaan: ye nahi woh

He shows the paper...

Maan: Adi, tum ek chote bache ko sambal nahi sakthe

Maan is frustrated,,,,how many times has he got angry with Geet that she couldn't handle a little boy whenever she complained...

"Geet stop whinning , mujhe chain se apna kaam karne do, issilye mein ghar aane se dartha"

Now he knows that it's not child's play to take care of a kid...

He is angry with himself for treating Geet like that...

She should have felt bad...mein kya se kya ban gaya hoon?

Aajkal mujhe apne Mishti ki fikar hi nahi...

Meinne kabhi nahi socha ki Geet kaise issko dinbar sambalkke tak jaathi hogi?

Mujhe sirf apna kaam ki padhi hai, jaise mein koi pahaad apne shir pe uttakke aaaya hoon...

Har raat Geet jab thode dher Shaan ko apne paas chodkke jaathi toh Maan kitna gussa kartha ki Geet ghar pe pura din aaram karthi hai aur phir bhi mujhe hi disturb kyun karthi?

Ab Maan ko apni galthi ka ehsaas hua...

Adi tries all the tricks to stop Shaan crying...

But he insists that Adi made an elephant on the paper...

Poor Adi, however hard he tried he ended up with something else...

Shaan: ye chua hai hathi nahi, ye bimar elephant hai, dekho kitna pathla hai

Maan: Adi, iss office mein kissi ko bhi achche pictures banana nahi aatha?

Adi: haina sir, Mr.Kumar bahut acheche plans banathe haina

Maan: Adi, humme hathi ki picture banana hai

Adi: par mujhe kaise patha hoga sir?

Maan: itne saal yahan kaam karkke ye bhi nahi jaanthe?

Adi: apne pehle bar aaise kaam diya haina sir? Humne pehle kabhi kissi zoo ki construction nahi kiya hai sir

Maan: Adi, kuch toh karo

Adi: sir hum net se download karthe hai

Maan: teek hai

Maan downloads a beautiful elephant picture...from the National Geographic site...

Shaan: ye photo hai, isse dekhkke mein kaise draw kar saktha hoon?

Maan: kyun? Ye toh asli hai, isse dekhkke tum teek se seekh sakthe

Shaan: par mein kaise draw kar saktha?

Maan: ye tummari problem hai

Shaan: aaise nahi, pehle aap isse dekhkke ek elephant banao

Maan tries to recreate it...

Btu it was too real and he couldn't convert it into a picture...

Maan koi artist nahi haina?

Shaan is disappointed...he starts crying...

Maan: Adi, tum isske copies banakke sabko distribute kaor, ada gante mein mujhe isski drawing chahiye, jaldhi

Adi takes copies and gives it to the staff...

It's already noon and Geet returns to take Shaan for lunch...

Geet is surprised to see that KC is so silent inspite of Shaan's presence...

Ye kaise ho saktha? Kahin Maan Shaan ko bahar thodi nahi le jaye?

Achcha hai, ab mein aur shopping kar sakthi...

Geet finds everyone busy with some serious work...

What's this? Koi naye project ke plan bana rahe hai kya?

Geet:Adi sir, yahan kya ho raha hai?

Adi: Geet, humme disturb mat karo, hum bahut important kaam mein lage hue hai

Geet looks at Adi's desk...

Adi is drawing an elephant...

She looks at the others, they are also doing the same...

Geet: what? KC kab se art school bana?

Adi: Geet, ye Maan sir ke orders hai'

Geet goes to find what Maan is upto?

She finds Maan sleeping in his chair after struggling all day with his son...

Bechare Maan sir, office mein sorahe hai?

Geet finds Shaan watching cartoon on Maan's lappy sipping his drink...

She finds a big ice cream tub and chocolate wrapers scattered around...

Geet: Shaan, ye sab apne khaya?

Geet is worried that he will get throat infection eating all this at a time...

She snatches the cold drink from his hands and he starts crying...

Maan wakes up...

Maan: Adiii, kya hua?

Geet: Maan, ye sab kya hai?

Maan: Geet, woh mein so nahi raha tha, bas soch raha tha

Geet: achcha?

Maan: haan

Geet: kya soch rahe the aap? Agla issko pizza order karein ya burger...

Just then Adi enters with the Pizza...

Shaan: pizza

Geet stops him...he cries louder...

Geet: Maan, ye kya hai?

Maan: pizza Geet

Geet: meinne poocha ki aapne itne sare cheez order kyun kiya?

Maan: mujhe kyun poochthe ho? Tum roz issko aaise khilathe rehthi toh aaisa hi hoga

Geet: aapko kissne kaha hum roz pizza order karthe hai?

Maan: phir ye pizza ke liye itna zidd kyun kar raha tha?

Geet: issiliye kyunki mein issko kabhi pizza khareedhke nahi dethi

Maan: kya?

Geet: aapko patha hai ki ye aaise hi kathe rehtha toh bimar hojayega

Maan: par Geet

Geet: Maan, aapko ek chote bachche ko sambalna nahi aatha?

Maan: what?

Geet: abhi dekho

Geet takes away all the goodies from him...

" Shaan good boy haina? Ye sab bad boys hi kathe hai, haina?"

He keeps silent...he doesn't cry...

Maan' s surprised...

Ye kaise jadu hai?

Geet just lifts him and pats him on the back...

He falls asleep on her shoulder...

So he needed to sleep?

She puts him on the couch...

Maan is relieved...

Geet feels pity on him...

Poor Maan, itne bade KC ko apne ungliyon pe nachatha aur apne hi bte ko sambal nahi patha...

Maan: Geet, tumne lunch khaya?

Geet: nahi, mein Shaan ko ghar lekhe jaathi hoon

Maan stops her...

Maan: tum abhi bhi mujhse naraaz ho?

Maan gets closer...

Geet : nahi

Maan: toh chalo hum saath mein lunch karthe hai

Geet: par Shaan

Maan calls Adi...

Adi comes in...

Maan: Adi, hum bahar jaa rahe hai, you take care of Shaan

Adi is scared...

Adi: lekhin sir?

Maan: Adi, aaj yahi tummara boss hai, so don't mess with him

Adi: ha ha ha ha ha ...babaji mujhe bachao

Maan: chalo Geet

Geet is confused...

Geet: kahan?

Geet is happy to go out with Maan after a long time...

She is excited and she keeps chatting with him about Shaan's b'day and what all they have to do this time to make it special...

Maan just enjoys this ride with his Mishti and keeps driving without knowind where they are heading...

It's almost 3' pm and they have come a lond distance away from the city...

Geet batein karthe karthe tak jaathi...she is hungry...

Geet looks out and they are in the middle of nowhere...

Geet: Maan, hum kahan aagaye hai?

Maan looks out...

He has no clue where they are now...

Geet: Maan, mujhe bahut bhook lagthi hi

Maan: haan Geet, hum lunch karthe haina? Yahan ek bahut achcha restaurant hai

Geet: yahan?

Maan: haan, tum dekhthe hi raho, yahi hai, paas

Luckily they find some place to eat...

Maan manages to take her to her favourite eatout...koi punjabhi daba...iss waqt toh yahi khana milega...lunch time has passed long back...

After lunch he takes her to their farm house...

They have come so close to their farmhouse na...

Geet: Maan, hum yahan kyun aaye hai?

Maan: Geet, tum Shaan ki b'day ko yahi celebrate karna chahthi haina?

Geet: aapko kaise patha?

Geet forgot that she had told him just now...

She thinks that Maan is still not aware of Shaan's b'day plans...

She had been planning on her own...waise Maan ke paas time kahan tha Geet se aaise beitkke baat karne ki...ya phir Maan ab Geet se baat karna bhi nahi chahatha...

Geet looks at him and Maan knows that he had disappointed her all these days...

He can see the longing in her eyes...she wished this evening never ended...

She just wanted to be with her Maan just like this...

Maan: tumme kya lagtha mein apne biwi ki itna bhi parwa nahi kartha?

Geet: aaise nahi

Maan looks into her eyes...Maneet eyelock...

Geet swimmimg pool ki tarafh jaathi...

She is thinking of setting the dinner tables around the pool, moonlight dinner...

Maan apne mishit ko hi dekhthe rehtha...

Aaj bhi ktini khoobsurat hai...

Geet keeps telling her plan...

Maan ko kuch sunayi nahi detha...

He just keeps staring her...

Geet then enters the hall...

She looks at the walls...and the curtains...

Everything looks dull...Maan ke pasand ke soft colors lage hai...white and grey...

This is no fun and the kids would feel like they are is some boring class room...

She wants it to be repainted...with some exciting cartoon pictures...

She keeps chatting...

Geet: Maan, hum yahan ek chote se dance floor banayenge, aur yahan sare toys honge, aur ek magic show bhi hona chahiye, Shaan ko magic shows bahut pasand hai

Maan is in no mood to listen...he is admiring his pyaari Mishti...

Geet looks at him and has this starnge feeling that Maan has got other plans for her now...

Geet: Maaan?

He closes her mouth with his hands...

Maan: chup...bilkul chup...

Geet pushes him and steps back...

Maan gets closer...Geet steps back till she is cornered...

Maan locks her in his arms...

Geet: Maaan? Ye kaise mazak hai, aap bahut bhure ho

Maan: toh Geet, mein bahut bhura hoon, haina?

Geet: mujhe bas yahi shikayaat thi ki aap apne bachche ko hi bhool gaye

Maan: bache ko bhool gaya ya apni pyaari Mishti ko?

Geet : Maan, chodo mujhe

Geet bends down and escapes...

She goes near the window and looks at the pool...

She could see the moon's reflection on the water...

Geet: Maan, ye chandh kitna sundar hai dekho

Maan: tumse sundar nahi Geet

Geet: Maan, hum party yahi karenge, pool side, teek hai, aur pool ke centre ek shaandar stage banayenge, with all the kids around, Shaan will be in the centre with a huge cake...

Maan: nahi hum party yahi karenge, andar, pool mein abhi nahi, kissi aur din,raat ko, jab koi nahi hoga, sirf tum mein aur

Geet: aur chand

Maan: nahi, Geet, chand nahi

Geet: Maan, chandini raat hai toh kaise hoga?

Maan: nahi nahi, amavaas ka din teek hoga, mein tum aur hummare beech koi nahi, chand ki roshni bhi nahi, jo humme disturb kare

Geet: mujhe andere se dar lagtha

Maan: mein bhi wahi chahatha

Geet: kya? Aap mujhe darana chahathe ho?

Maan: tabhi toh tum mere paas hogi, warna aaise hi dhoor bhaagthe rahogi, haina?

Geet: Maaan?

Maan: aur abhi party shuru karein?

Maan winks...

Geet: ye aapko kya ho gaya?

Maan gets near and hugs her from behind...

Geet: Maaan?

Maan pushes her choti aside and makes room for a hot kiss...

He places a warm kiss on her back...

Geet swoons...the warmth of his lips sets the fire inside her...

She is engulfed by his fiery passion...she is ready to melt in his arms...

Maan lifts her and takes her in...

Geet: Maaan?

Maan: ssshhh aaj mujhe rokho mat Geet

Geet bhi rokhna kahan chahathi? Mahiii...

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awesome dear...
excellent...
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lovely...
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This OS is for the Maneet marriage anniversary celebrations...

Happy Maneet anniversary guys...

This is a little different from my style...

Hope you enjoy reading this version too...

Raavan...

Maan Singh Khurana - leading builder, very efficient, very successful and has a strong hold on the real estate field, he is lie the king, no one can compete with him...

He has the power to take any site that he wants and this image of a greedy monster swallowing evry inch of land he comes across.

It is almost impossible to stop him.

No one knows when his quest for land end, maybe when there is no more land left.

He is on a roll and has several projects going on simultaneously.

He is on the top and he wants that position for himself.

He hates losing, even if it is some tiny project, if he is interested he would let someone to snatch it, and who dares to face MSK's popular rage. He is the perfectionist with a flawless reputation and impeccable business skills.

Success comes with a lot of hardwork and many hurdles. His story is nothing different, he has achieved this status with his determination and perseverance.

Now he knows his business so well that he can handle any problem sitting at his home at the snap of his fingers.

As the winners put it "nothing is impossible" , he can make thing work for him without much struggle.

But there is always an exception, and here is one such project. He had recently accepted a contract to build a multiplex at Delhi's prime location, a job he wants to stand out from the rest. He had his plans for this project to be the bench mark for the builders not only in India but the world over. He has been waiting for such an opportunity and has no problem grabing this.

Evrerything seemed to be perfect until he had trouble evacuating the people from there.

They are stubborn and won't leave their homes where they have been living for decades.

Maan has dealt with such people in many occasions and they usualy tried to blackmail like this for money. And maney is not a matter for him and he easily settles the probem with his wallet.

This time he had more trouble than he expected. For the first time in his life he had met people who don't value the money more than their place of living, which they don't even own, but have just rented.

They can't be lured with an alternative luxurious apartment either.

They have been living together there as a family for years , and most importantly they love each other and stick to each other during trying times like this. Initially Maan gets frustrated by his inability to buy them with his money or threaten them with his power. He gets angry with himself for letting his stake holders down as this endless problem got blown ito huge proprtions by the media when a young social activist Geet Handa got the attention of the media revolting against MSK in support of those poor helpless people.

The shares of KC plummeted immediately as there was speculation about Maan's chances of a win, he had to face the anger of his stake holders who questioned his abilities for the first time.

Maan is desperate to put an end to this ever growing problem which has badly hurt his reputation as a successful builder.

He sends his team with a different proposal everyday to woo those people but that girl would not budge even if the others were showing signs of retreat. She convinced them that this is only one of his tricks to fool them.

Maan is fed up with this and he decides to meet the people himself.

He wanted to meet this Geet Handa.

Geet is a middle class girl who is interested in law and also helps the needy to fight for justice, she wants to get them justice in any form, court order or out of court, bhook hartal and anything for that matter.

She is not afraid of anyone and her father stands by her like a pillar.

He knows that her daughter is always right and supports all her decisions, his only problem is that she is not interested in love or family, she is remaining single even at 28.

She studied law and joined as a junior but she can't digest the corrupt system and she started revolting against the seniors, she was thrown out of the bar council for no reason at all and she has decided to fight on her own, she has turned into a social activist and here she is the boss, no one to control her.

She likes it as it gives her immense pleasure and satisfaction when she sees a smile on those hopeless people and she instills faith in them to fight against all odds.

She has a few friends in the court to help her.

Maan instantly likes her and her tireless speeches, she speaks non - stop and there is this bunch of fans following her always, it's hard to meet her alone which he would love to.

She argues with him even before he could start a conversation and he is always happy to be a listener when she is on a roll. Rather he loved to watch her expressive eyes that dance to the tune of her volatile nature, they are the source of his entertainment when she keeps her heated auguments before him.

She finds it hard to meet his eyes but she is not ready to bow and tries to afce them with a fake anger lingering in her eyes always, Maan can see thru those aggressive eyes a pair of beautiful eys searching for something in his eyes...maybe they are demanding justice, or maybe they are trying to threaten him, anyway he loves her attitude and her courage. No girl had the guts to face in ono on one and had the courage to point his mistakes.

Maan learns from her dramatic stories that he has been deceived by the owner of that pace, who is actually not the real owner but had grabbed it from the poor oldman who is the actual owner by threatening that he would spoil the life of his only granddaughter who lost her parents and lives with her grandpa...

the people are not bothered about their homes but they are not ready to leave the oldman alone to suffer...

He had rentad the place for them for very little money as he needs the money for his pothi's ecucation. His only wish is to get her married to a gentleman who would take care of her just like him...

Geet is determined to getback his land...

He is not alone but the whole chawl is with him...

Maan withdraws from the project asit is against his principles too...

And meoreover he is impressed with Geet and wants to gain her trust...

He has better plans for her...for that he had to be a gentleman...

People have changed their mind and this turns him a hero overnight...

Even Geet thinks that he is not such a bad guy...

Geet is impressed...and she likes his honest and straightforward acts...

And he nearly succeeds in his plans till another problem arises...

This time it's all b'coz of Vicky...

Vicky's company has taken over the project now...

Vicky is Maan's ex-partner and he runs his own business now...

Geet comes to know that Vicky is none other than Maan's shadow...

His underground business partner whom he uses for his illegal dealings...

This she comes to know from none other than Maan's own secretary sameera who knows all his secrets...

He is actually Maan's benaami...

So Mr.Khurana pretented to be this nice guy in front of the media and has back stabbed them in the back...

Geet is very angry, she is not going to let him go without punishment, if he can buy the law she will make him pay for this the other way...

He can't fool them and walk away with this goody goody faltu image...

Now no one is ready to believe her...she is alone in this fight against this MSK...

Geet usska asli chera sab ke samne lakhe rahegi...

Maan is closely following her activities...'

she is back agitating against this new builder...

Maan is glued to the news channels just to watch this sweet girl and her voice...

Maan is fond of her and he admires her never give up attitude ...

Maan is also known for his zidd and he always wants to be the winner no matter what it takes...

Geet goes to warn him...

She goes and meets him at KC...

She is not the one to be afraid, she is ready to meet the lion at his den...

Maan is pleasantly surprised to see that beauty in his office standing in front of him...

He is smitten by her looks...

Ladhki ho toh aaise, jaise MSK ke liye hi bani hui hai...

Kya adayen? Kya khobsoorti? Aur iss bole bale chehre ke peeche ek bandit queen , matching this kalnayak...full is attitude and always ready pumped up to give a tough fight no matter whom she is against...

Maan was waiting all these years just for this, an equal fighter ..."MSK...my foot...", haina bbaji?

He had not even faced men who are this tough ...

He is liking this very much...

Maan falls in love with that attitude of Geet...

And here she is fuming and burning like wild fire ready to burn him to ashes...

She looks hotter in this avatar...

Maan: welcome to my place

Geet: Mr.Khurana

Geet is very angry...she is breathing heavily...pressure keeps mounting as Maan keeps looking at her with a evil mind...she finds it creepy...

Maan: relax Ms.Handa, how can I help you?

Maan gets closer and tries to offer her a seat...

Geet gets back...she is nervous...

Geet: mein yahan beitkke aapke saath coffee peene nahi aayi hoon

Maan: that's a good idea...

Geet stares him...

Maan gets back to his seat...

Geet: don't try to act smart Mr.Khurana, I know th truth

Maan: yes, that you always do

Geet: baat meri nahi hai, you cunning fox, cheater,

Geet: you can fool the others but not Geet Handa

Maan: I know that very well

Maan thinks, and you can't fool me either Ms.Geet, you have already fallen in love...

Who can resist MSK...you have been trapped and there is no escape...

Geet: you cheat, back stabber, you think you can get away with this?

Maan: have you gone mad?

Geet: mein pagal dikhthi hoon?

Maan: aur nahi toh kya?

Geet: haaan?

Maan: I don't know what's wrong with you?

Geet: but I know what's wrong with you?

Maan: achcha?

Geet: I'm not going to let anyone harm the poor people

Maan: you are too young and inexperienced for all this

Geet: what?

Maan: tum kamakaam iss mein kyun fasthi?

Maan thinks...tumme toh mere paas hona chahiye...mere hokke mere bahon mein...

That's the right place for you...

Geet: aap mujhe kya samajthe ho? mein kuch bhi kar sakthi, samje aap?

Maan: I'm just warning you Geet, this is not for you, this is too dangerous

Geet: aapka advice aapke paas hi rakho, ayr yaad rakho MSK, abhi se tummari barbadi shuru ho gayi

Maan gets off his seat...he is very angry...

He stares her...Geet stares back...

Maan: how dare you?

Geet: ye damki na? kissi aur ko jaake do, mein darthi nahi, get ready for your downfall...

She threatens MSK and leaves...

Maan is speechless and he keeps staring her as she leaves...

Ek do hindi filmein dekhke yahan aakke dialogue marthi hai?

Kuch ko koi maharani samajthi hai...silly girl...

The following week Maan's secretary Sameera blames him of misbehaving with her...

Sameera says that he has sexually harassed her...

Maan fires her and files a case against her for trying to spoil his reputation...

Geet goes to see her, after all she had helped her so much...

And she is being punished for helping Geet...for standing by the truth...

Somehow Geet feels guilty...

Maybe she is also one of the reasons for Sameera's plight...

But how would she know that the greedy MSK would be a pevert...

Sameera breaks down and says that she is being harassed for voicing agaist MSK...

And that's why he has punished her and spoilt her life...

She syas she has been victimized...she has become a victim of MSK's money and power...

Geet feels pity for poor Sameera...

She remembers Maan's nasty looks when she met him at KC...

She beieves Sameera, that man is a criminal...

Maan has crossed all the limits...

Geet offers to help Sameera...

Sameera trusts Geet and she gives her the proof she has against him...

MSK with Sameera, cruel than a filmi vilian...

Who will believe that the MSK is such a badass ...

Geet can't tolerate this at all, he can't get away from this brutal sin...

Geet is back in action...

This time she has discovered the very ugly side of MSK...

Geet helps Sam file a case against Maan...

But as usual the police take little action as it is MSK...

Geet leads in the front the war aginst MSK, agitating and revolting for justice ...

She wants MSK to be arrested...

She wants justice for Sameera...

She gathers her supporters in front of KC...

Geet calls Maan a womeniser and syas that it's not safe for women to work under him...

She calls for the mass resignation of the women staff...

Next day the whole bunch of finitefemale worker resign to support Geet and the men announce an indefinite demanding acion against MSK...

They want him arrested and put behind the bars so that women could feel safe and return to work...

The police finally had no choice but to take stern action...

They arrest MSK and put him behind the bars...

The lion is hurt and is also caged...

He is waiting to pounce on Geet and finish her...

How dare she did this to the Maan Singh khurana?

Maan ka apmaan? That too by a stupid girl from nowhere...

Who is she afterall? She gained all this fame b'coz of her so called stunts against the MSK...

And now she thinks she can conquer MSK?

No, not even in her dreams could she win gainst MSK...

If Maan had wished to take up that project no one could have stopped him...

So it's her mistake to have taken it as her victory, actually Maan himself gave up that project...

He thought he would easily win her trust that way...

But she doesn't like that MSK, she wants to see the other side of MSK...haina?

She has not seen the bad side of MSK yet...toh tayaar raho Ms.Handa, to meet the devil...

She has asked for this and this is the beginning of her end...

But Geet doesn't know about him much...

She always makes hasty decisions and regrets later...

This time she has made a grave mistake...

She had to pay for it...

It's payback time...

Geet goes to meet him in the cell triumphant...

She wanted to see his face now...

Where will he go hide his face now?

Geet: Khurana, khel abhi abhi shuru hui hai, tum dekhthe jao aage kya hotha? Tum jaise rapist ko bahar goomne kaise de sakthe?

Maan can't believe it! She just called him a rapist?

How dare she? Usski itni himmat?

Maan is really pissed off...

This is not right Geet, you will suffer later...

I'm not going to stay here forever...

Be ready to meet the real MSK...

Abhi tak toh tumne mera achcha side dekha, but you know what?

Every coin has two sides...and you have asked for it...

Maan would have killed her if he was free...

Next day Maan comes out in bail...

Paisa hai toh jail mein kyun rehna?

Maan knows about Sameera but this girl has no business to interfere in his life...

He can't digest the fact that he had been to jail b'coz of this Geet Handa...

And that too Maan had never harmed her and had always treated her with respect...

Why is she after him?

Maan comes to know that she is doing this for money!

If she wanted money she could have asked him, he would have paid her more than what she wished...

He can't afford to lose his hard earned power and position b'coz of this stupid girl...

Had she been wise enough she would have made Maan her friend not foe...

Maan is the best friend and also the worst enemy...

She has to pay for her deeds...it's payback time Ms.Geet...

Maan has lost his patience...

He had been letting her do whatever she wished just b'coz he had a liking for her...

He wanted her, he needed her very much...

He was patiently waiting for the right time...to fulfil his wish...

But Geet had turned things from bad to worse...

It's revenge time...MSK has changed his mind...

It's no use staying goody goody...

Some people always like to see him as the bad bad man...

And Geet happens to be one of them...

That night Maan enters Geet's room...

She is sleeping...

"mere neendh udakke tum chain se kaise so sakthi?"

Maan gets into action...

He plasters her mouth and ties her hands to the cot...

Geet is taken aback ...she is horrified...

What is he doing here?

And why is he here at this time?

Geet is so scared...

"tum toh kehthi rehthi haina ki mere khilaaf proof hai tummare paas, ab ye dekho mera proof, meinne kabhi nahi socha ki tum paison ke liye ye sab karoge"

"paise toh mere paas bhi hai, par tumne galat admi se paise liya hai, aur iss ke liye tum bahut pachthayegi Geet"

Maan shows her a video...

Sameera is holding a bundle of cash...

She gives it to Geet...

Geet takes it and has a mischievous smile on her face...

Geet: yahi khaafi hai uss Khurana ko barbad karne ki, tum dekhthe raho inn paison ka kamaal, a buss MSK ko koi bhi mujhse bacha nahi saktha, kal hi press meet bhulthe, aur sabke samne MSK ka har hoga, zindagi mein pehle bar MSK iss Geet Handa se har gaya"

Geet laughs...

There ends the video...

Geet dar jaathi...

Ye isske paas kahan se aaya?

Ab toh issko lagega ki mein Sameera se paise lekhe iss ke khilaaf kaam kar rahi hoon!

Babaji, ye kya ho gaya?

Meinne kya socha aur ye kya ho gaya?

Sameera ne jab ye paise mujhe diya ye kehkke MSK ne paise bheja hai sameera ko, case wapas lene ke liye...

Jab sameera woh paise lekhe Geet ke paas aayi toh Geet ne socha ki yahi paison ko MSK ke khilaaf use kar sakthe hai...

Issiliye toh Geet ne sameera se paise liya tha...

Ab toh sab gadbad ho gaya...aur mein iss rapist ke haath fusgayi?

Ab kya hoga?

Geet ka dar sach ho jaatha...

Maan: tum toh paison ke liye kuch bhi kar sakthi haina? Ussne tumme kitne paise diye? 2 lakh ? 5 lakh?

Ye lo 10 lakh

Maan throws the money...

Geet tries to get off the bed...

Maan holds her down...

Maan: kyun? Itne paise khaafi nahi hai kya?

Geet tries to stop him...

Maan: toh mera bhi ek kaam karna, tumme toh mujhe r***st bhulane ki bahut shok haina? Toh teek hai, mein toh tummare liye woh bhi banjaane ke liye tayaar hoon, par tumme bhi mere madat karna padega, mere victim banke

So saying Maan gets into action...

Maan: ab tum chila chilakke keh sakthi ki mein r***st hoon,mein inkaar nahi karoonga, aur tummare sare media walon ke samne bhi manne ke liye tayaar hoon, aur iss ke liye mujhe koi bhi saza mille toh mujhe manzoor hai, mein iss bar kissi bhi saza ke liye tayaar hoon'

Geet goes speechless...

He turns mad and finishes his job with ease... he leaves her room thru the front door...

He is not afraid this time...he knows she won't open her mouth this time...

He has taught her a bitter lesson ...one she could never forget for the rest of her life...

Never play with the devil...the devil has nothing to loose and you loose everything in that game...

to be continued...
Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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their misunderstanding used by other in bad way ,but geet get bad lesson from maan , he just blind in revenge and false video ,that sameera i kill her , but don't stop in this point update next part please waiting


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MAAN TURNED INTO A VILLAIN
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Amazing OS... OMG Maan changed from a sweet, crazy person into an evil person... I am sure he will regret his deed.. Update soon!!

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