My OS thread- New OS for Anniversary....Yaadhein on pt 1,2 pg 23 apr 5 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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sameera aur vicky milke yeh sab kar rahe hai...maan ko phasane k liye...maan ko badbaad karne k liye aur bechari geet phans gayi iss mein...

awesome n wonderful...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
OS Raavan
part 1
awesome...
interesting...
Maan liked Geet for her attitude and nature...
but Geet got him arrested and has damaged his reputation...
complete misunderstanding between them...
when they will come to know about the truth what will Maan do?
did he really do that to her?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so much misunderstanding...
jab maan ko pura sach pata chalega tab kya hoga
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 2

After Maan leaves Geet keeps staring the open door for a while...

She can't believe what has happpened with her just a few minutes ago...

It takes a few minutes for her to gather herself up and come to terms with reality ...

And she is yet to come out of that...

She knew that this man is unpredictable and can do anything he wants anytime...

But Geet never expected this from him...

Neither did she expect that she would become his victim atlast...

She is still thinking about Maan's words...

His words have hurt her much more than his actions...

They keep lingering in her mind confusing her all the more...

But she won't keep mum...

She needs to bring the truth out in the open...

She is not the one to shy away from the truth no matter how bad it is...

She won't go and hide as Maan believes...

She will fight till the end...

She is not afraid of the consequences ...

Now she knows the MSK very well...uska sacha chera kal raat dekhne ko milgaya...

Now Maan can run away fron the truth, he may be the one who is scared...

But Geet is not such a coward, she will face the truth with courage...

She is rady to accept the truth, yes, she is not going to let MSK escape...

He has to pay for his deeds...

This time he has no escape...Geet Handa se bachne ki sawaal hi nahi uttha...

And Maan knows it very well...

This Geet is not some ordinary girl, she is unique...

Yes, she is unique, Maan knows from the last night's experience...

She is different, but Maan never expected her to be so different...

Maan knows that she will not keep quiet...

She will corner him now...she knows much more about him than before...

She knows the real MSK...she will dig deep now...

She has all the reasons to finish him off ...

Maan is also ready to face the truth...

He is ready to accept any punishment...

He is ready to confess his crime, he doesn't want to trouble her more...

She need not prove anything, she need not look out for proof...

He is willing to accept the crime and go to jail...

Maan waits for her to taje action against him...

He is expecting the police to come and take him anytime...

But there si no action from Geet's side...

It's noon and Maan is still sitting idle in his room...

He has not moved from his place for the past three hours...

He kept thinking about Geet and Geet only...

He had never felt so bad in his life before...

Someone is at the door...

He hears Nakul speaking ...

Maan knows it's the police...

He moves to the balcony to see what's happening ...

He is surprised to see Adi instead...

Adi is Maan's friend and the only one who knows everything about Maan, Adi is his right hand...

Maan: ye yahn kya kar raha hai?

Adi: Nakul, Maan sir kahan hai?

Nakuk: apne kamre mein hi hai

Adi: teek hai mien chalkke miltha hoon

Maan thinks that Adi may have heard about Geet...

Maybe he is here to warn Maan ...

Adi: tum iss waqt yahan?

Maan: pehle tum bathao, tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Adi: kyun? Tum kissi aur ko expect kar rahe the?

Maan: aur ye tummare haath mein kya hai?

Adi shows the money...

Maan is confused...

Adi: kyun? Kuch yaad aaya?

This is the same amount he gave to Geet last night...

Ye Adi ke paas kaise aaya?

Aur ye ladhki kya samajkke issko yahan bhejhi hai?

Ye toh mujhe pagal kardhegi...

Maan: tumme ye paise kahan se mila?

Adi: Maan, ye sab kya hai?

Maan is nervous...

Issko lya jawan dhoon?

Maan tries to shut him with his anger...

Maan: Adiii

Adi: kya yaar? Tumne ussko paise kyun dhiya? Pehle hi woh tummare khilaaf proof hone ki dawa karthi hai aur tum kudh hummare khilaaf proof chodkke aathe ho?

Maan: what?

Adi: mujhe patha nahi ki usske paas pehle hummare khilaaf koi bhi saboot hoga ya nahi, par ab tumne toh ussko saboot dedhi, dekho

Adi shows a CD...

Maan is afraid that it could be something about last night...

Maan is embarrassed...

Ye kaise ho saktha? Nahi...ye toh galat hai...

Maan is ashamed of himself...

He never wanted to see Geet in that condition himself, he himself can't see Geet like that, how could he let others see it?

Maan snatches the CD from Adi...

Maan: tumme ye kaise mila?

Adi: ussi ladhki ne dhiya tha, woh aayi thi mera ghar

Maan: tumne issko dekha?

Maan is so scared and ashamed...

Adi: nahi, kyun iss mein aaise kya hai?

Maan: mujhe kya patha?

Adi: lekhin tum itne pareshaan kyun hothe ho?

Maan: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Adi: par uss ladhki ne kaha ki tumme issko zaroor dekhna hoga

Maan: what?

Adi: aur jaldhi hi issko sabko dikhayegi

Maan: pagal ho gayi hai kya? Mujhe patha hai ki woh himmatwali hai, lekhin itna himmat?

Adi: chalo, hum bhi dekhteh hai ki iss mein aaisa kya proof hai?

Maan hides it behind his back...

Maan: nahi

Adi is surprised...

Adi: tumme kya ho gaya? Tum iss ladhki se itna darthe ho?

Maan: what? Adiii

Adi: mujeh bhi dekhna hai ki aaisa kya hai iss mein

Maan: nahi, tum jao, hum badh mein baat kar sakthe

Maan forces Adi to leave...

Maan locks the room first...

He has gone mad...

He never thought that someone could scare him like this ...

Now he can see the CD...

What? Maan is so embarrassed...

But he has to know why she sent this to him? What she wanted to convey?

He was not so scared when he actually committed that crime...

But now it's horrific...and Maan is terrorized ...

Even a professional murdered would resent his acts when he sees the recording of his crime later...

Maan turns on his lappy...

Maan could easily destroy this but Geet would have another copy of this, haina?

Maan turns on the CD ...

Maan is stunned to see sameera on the vdeo intead of Geet...

Maan is relieved now...

Maybe this the proof Geet was talking about...

Sam walks and knocks a door...

But instead of Maan Geet opens the door...

Geet lets her in and Sam takes out the cash from her bag...

Geet: ye kya hai?

Sam starts crying...

Geet: kya hua? Tum kyun ro rahi ho?

Sam: yahi hai mere izzat ki keemat

Geet: what?

Sam: haan, MSK has fixed it

Geet: woh kaun hotha hai tummare izzat ke saath khelne ki?

Sam: MSK ne ye paise bheja hai mujhe

Geet: kyun? Tumme chup karne ki

Sam: usske khilaaf ki case ko wapas lene ki

Geet: hum case kissi bhi haal mein wapas nahi lenge, samji tum

Sam: mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai Geet, humme ye sab band karna hoga

Geet: kyun? Tumme ye paise chahiye hai kya?

Sam: nahi, hum usske saath lad nahi sakthe, hum zaroor har jayenge

Geet: hare, ab toh hummare paas ek aur solid proof milgaya

Sam: what?

Geet: haan, ye paise

Sam: isse kya karoge? Judge ko bribe karegi?

Geet: tum toh MSK ke saath rehkke ussi ki tarah sochne lagi ho

Sam: phir isse kya hoga?

Geet smiles and snatches it from sam...

Geet: yahi khaafi hai MSK ko barbad karne ki

Maan is shocked...

Ye toh wahi video hai jo Maan ke paas aaya, par sirf aada, ye toh full picture hai...

This is the same video that Maan had seen but only the later half...

So, someone is trying to fool him...but why?

And what has he got from it? Geet's destruction?

Toh koi Maan ko Geet ke khilaaf kadhe karna chahatha hai?

Or someone is trying to turn them against each other?

But, who could be the commom enemy? Sameera?

Sameera aaise kyun karegi?

She is against Maan, but Geet is supporting her, why would she harm geet?

Then who is behind all this?

It's Vicky...yes, Vicky wanted Maan's downfall and he used Geet for that...

Sameera helped him for she wanted Maan for herself...

When Maan rejected her she sought Vicky's help...

Vicky wanted her to help him get Maan's tenders...

Sam disclosed KC's secrets...

And that last project slipped from Vicky's hands...

Geet unknowingly helped him get it but later she turned against him...

And Vicky wanted to get rid of the trouble making Geet Handa out of his way...

He used Maan aginst Geet , his trick has worked...

And what had Maan done?

He can't forgive himself for what he had done to Geet last night...

Maan's weakness has been his anger and Vicky has wisely used it against himself...

There is no way to punish Maan more than this...this is his ultimate punishment...

He has spoiled an innocent girl's life...

He is really a r***st now, he has to be punished...

Maan is ready to go and surrender on his own...

But Geet has not gone to the police...

There must be a reason behind that...

Moreover Maan can't expose it before everyone, that would spoil Geet's life...

He won't trouble her anymore...

He had done enough to punish her for life for no mistake of her's ...

Maan feels very guilty...

Someone knocks...

Maybe it's Adi...

Maan is not in a mood to meet anyone...

Maan hears Nakul's voice...

He is trying to stop someone...

Nakul: har, rukh jayiye, aap aaise andar nahi jaa sakthe

Maan rushes to the door...

Nakul: m'am...rukh jayiye m'am

Maan hears the word m'am and opens the door...

Yes, it's Geet...

Maan is shocked...

He is not able to meet her eyes...

He bends his head as he is ashamed of himself...

Nakul: woh...Maan sir, humne inko rokhne ki koshish ki

Maan signals him to leave...

Maan keeps avoiding eye contact...

He tries to look away from her...

But he wants to see her once, what's her reactions?

How much does it affect her?

Btu she seems very comfortable confronting him...

She just enters inside his room as if it ws her room and starts searching...

She just ignores him completely...she acts as if she is the only person standing there...

Maan is shocked and surprised...

Itna sab kuch hone ke badh bhi ye yahan kaise aasakthi?

Aur aaise behave karthi jaise kuch hua hi nahi?

Aakhir ye kya chahathi hai?

Maan koi bhi saza ko manletha par ye toh Maan ko aur pareshaan kar rahi hai...

Maan couldn't bear this, he wants to know what's in her mind...

He wants her to punish him...

He wants her to speak...he wants to hear her out...

He wants to tell her everything...

No no, he doesn't want her to forgive him...he wants his punishment...

And he wants to confess something...

Maan asks her in a weak tone...

Maan: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Geet seems to be normal...

She is not nervous...

Neither is she feeling bad, why woukd she feel bad? She has not done anything wrong...

There is nothing to regret...it's not her fault...haina?

Geet is busy with her work...she doesn't reply...

Maan tries to get her attention, but she keeps ignoring him...

After a while Maan looses his patience...he shouts...

Maan: Geeet, tum kya karne aayi aao?

And she is not afraid of him now...

Band comes th reply...

Geet: aapko dikhayi nahi dethi? Mein kuch dhoondh rahi hoon

Maan is shocked...

Ye sach mein pagal ho gayi hai...

Itne sab kuch hone ke badh bhi ye aaise kaise ho sakthi?

Maan keeps staring her...

Geet: aap kade kade kya sochthe ho? ab sochne se kya faida? Jo ho gaya so ho gaya

Maan almost faints...

Maan: ye mein kya dekh raha hoon? Ye sapna hai ya sach?

Ye jaan boochke ye sab kar rahi hai kya?

Ye mujhe kaise saza dena chahthi?

Geet: chalo, ab bhi dhoondo

Maan looks confused...

Geet looks at him...

Maan feels very ashamed...

But Geet doesn't react...

She continues searching...

Geet: meinna? Saboot dhoond rahi hoon, aapkke khilaaf, woh kya haina? Ab aapke khilaaf complaint karna haina? Toh police saboot mangenge, haina?

Maan ye sab bardaast nahi kar patha...

Ye chahe toh mujhe jaan se mar sakthi par aaise mujhe pal pal kyun sathathi hai

Maan: tummare paas pehle hi bahut sare saboot haina? Mere khilaaf

Geet: haan lekhin woh bhi aapke video ke tarah faltu hotha toh?

Maan: kya?

Geet: aada sach toh joot hi hotha, haina?

Maan ko apni galthi ki ehsaas hothi...

Maan: haan, tumne sahi kaha, meinne hi tumme galat samja tha

Geet: mujeh solid proof chahiye, tabhi to hiss bar meri jeet hogi

Maan: tumme koi proof ki zaroorat nahi, mein apne guna ko accept kartha hoon, haan mein gunegar hoon

Geet: par mein nahi manthi

Maan is shocked...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
but rly ye geet bohat confusing hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Geet kitni smart h I love geet in this one!!❤️
Are mujhe to laga 2nd part me ye khatam hojayega!!
Acha h nahi hua..😆😉
Waiting for the next !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Nice update!!!
Geet is this update... was awesome...
Oh good it didn't finish in this update,...
Will be waiting for the next update eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NICE BUT CONFUSING
WHAT IS GEET LOOKING FOR
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2
nice...
poor Geet...
i dont think she would leave him this easily...
and Maan is regretting so much now...
stupid man...
how could he...
and Geet is searching for more proofs...
cont soon dear...

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