Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 2: Ch 21 (Pg 134) - Page 90

Originally posted by: pankhudi_TiaRa

Hello kat  🤗

Awesome updates deary😳 

I wanna apologies i didn't comment on you superb Fiction actually when my exams were going on from that time i started reading your fiction and 1 more ff offline so didn't commented 

Actually i was trying to keep my self away from I.F. during exam but just can't resist reading the updates and read it offline and it became habit *sorry *

BTW i will comment from now onwards on every update Dil Jaanta Hai really worth likes and good comments 😳😳. Loving this journey 😳😳

Yash came in with Ansh and whistled at Arti, making her blush even more. He put the packages away and then carried her to the mirror. The man in blue jeans and white shirt, carrying the woman in green-and-white, with her hair falling undone over his arms. They made a pretty picture and Ansh came around and sat in front of them, completing the family portrait.

Aww don't kill me loved it ❤️☺️..😳

Originally posted by: billieberry

awesome update kat dear❤️

am loving their peaceful and simple atmostsphere😃

continue soon, thanx for d PM😳

Originally posted by: AntaresVega

Please continue...

I'm loving the way their relationship is growing.

Originally posted by: RA17

Hey kat so 17 c) aarya confrontation thanks for not stretching it

😆 i am not Ekta Maiyya yaar!! Sort out misunderstandings asap. Waise, Arti made it pretty dramatic - bachpan mein dramebaaz rahi hogi 😉.

N ansh my chotu nawab oh n aarti inside pains just winch you directly n here comes aarya saviours ahemed love how you do not forget him n bring him

How can i forget Ahmed?? Dr. Ahmer Ansari in Dhoop Kinare introduced me to fan-dom😆.

N then worried parents n their pain of not just seeing ansh in this conditions but their loss as aarti unborn n yash of not touching aarti

Thoda zyaada ho gaya? Sowee. Had to show their self-thoughts. Personally i think Yash was assuming too much - gadha 😆.

N then how they always with their khamoshi n iss their silent statement said it all beautiful kat you remind me one of scene of show where aarti in yellow sari sitting n having mangalsutra in her hand n yash coming from bathroom but what i love more is extension of your thoughts n yesh now atleast the mist is clear to see what wind will bring nect in yash and aarti life while oing thru journey of aarya

There was a scene like that? Kab?? Now i got to see that - any idea when? How do i track down this one scene yaar?

Can you help me understand this i dint get it

it felt as if she had been about to fall off a precipice and was pulled back in the nick of time.

Arti ko laga ki woh gehre khayi mei girne waali thi - but last minute mein bach gayi. Basically, the relationship with Yash - and by extension Ansh was going to end and she saved herself - and the relationship in the nick of time. 

Originally posted by: kdsubs

Thank you my friend. I am glad you enjoyed it. Abhi wait - twists and turns toh ab ayenge 😉.

Thanks Sharmeen 🤗.

Originally posted by: mjht_admirer

giving both the chapters' updates together.

U have beautifully and naturally handled the whole barsi episode and then the after episodes too. Thank god u have not shown romantic track or too many sympathy track. thanks for keeping it subtle and simple and natural.

Romance, pyaar, mohabbat - too early for that yaar. They barely acknowledged each other's existenece - it was all about Ansh till now. Pehle ek doosre ka ehsaas hoga, janenge, and then the love-shove will come 😉.


Yash finally breaking down was way too emotional scene. Going to sanchi stupa, Making the clay portray and finally breaking down in the arms of Aarti, which was very much needed, was beauuutiful!!
Thank you. It was necessary for him to grieve so he could let go. And it was necessary for Arti to see him grieve - she had to realize that he is human and his past hurts him too. 

& very interesting part, the morning chai on the jhula. Really appreciate Aarti for the choice of her topic for the morning conversation. Glad she is sooo sensibly shown. 😊😊😊
Lol - she needed something unconnected to him, something that had no way of hurting him or reminding him of the previous night and his vulnerability. She managed to get a laugh out of him - bonus. 

expensive DAILY clothes???? Really Yash, u need to learn a looot from ur Aartijiii. 😆😉
Seekh raha hai 😉. Note that he did not buy designer clothes for her 😆.

and u r back with the coffee. U finally gave Aarti... THE Coffee 😆Loved that coffee scene. I think that even if Aarti wants to convert, she will not. Let her be the chai drinker... 😆😆😆
Well but of course! Coffee toh aana hi tha. Yash ne promise jo kiya tha 😊. 

The last white, green and blue scene was something unusual but special. I know, I know, there was nothing much in that scene but as Aarti mentioned in the previous lines, it felt special! + Yash whistling at her and then carrying her and Ansh finally completing their picture... it was special.
😆 unusual because i generally don't write scenes like that, or unusual because aisa kaun karega?? In my view - both 😆. I just needed to show a scene where Yash appreciates Arti in non-traditional clothes - a first step in helping her overcome the low self-esteem that Prashant fostered in her. Par phir end kaise karoon - toh chalo aina hi sahi. Lots of symbolism there if you want to dig deep - but i hadn't intended it that way - bas ho gaya. 

thanks for the updates and the pm
🤗
loads of love

vinu