We Belong Together - LAST CHAPTER pg. 51 - Page 29 | Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Marzii

@Marzii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Aww such a heart clenching update...the whole story is so awesomely written..you have portrayed theyre emotions so perfectly kays.. It looks so real to me, like everytime i read this SS i feel like everything is happening in front of my eyes, thats how real your story is for me. n everytime i read it i get goosebumps and makes me cry 😔 the bestest SS i have ever read! hatts off to you and to your writing karina..your the bestest of the best 👏 loved the update, specially the way they hugged eachother, and the way your showing jeevika in this SS is just mind-blowing..i really wish we had all this in the show..please please dont end it so soon, give us more updates, i just love this SS and ill miss it soo much, dont end it yet soon pleassee keeni meany ❤️

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Navya

@shobrakapooor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Wow yaar, how many times should i keep saying that ur writing skills are getting better day by day!👏

I guess no one can beat u when it comes to dealing with human emotions... How beautifully ur described Viren's love and helpessness... Way to go buddy, just perfect!

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kryanvirika05

@kryanvirika05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

OMG this is the most emotional thing i have ever read!

so jeevika is doing all this because of the abortion? AWWW!!!

i loved how you described jeevika's pain and virens plight!

IT was heart-touching!

I really cant wait to hear jeevika telling viren herself about why she did so!

UPDATE SOON!

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Nishtha Relan

@Nishtha.Relan

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Awesome update karina di... Love this story aloot plsh dont discontinue it plllshhh... The update was awesome finly virika were together... I hope virika gets more better wen they leave the hospital and jeevika gets better... Thanks for ipdating and really eagerly for the next part,... Thanks for the PM... Plshhh dobt stop this storyyy plshhh karina di

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Jennifer

@jenna_p

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Brilliant update...👏

Loved every bit of it..😊

I say this all the time but u are a wonderful writer..

Loved the way u wrote about how virika held onto each other..truly they are inseparable..

The emotions were spot on...

And liked the way neha didnt speak to Jeevs first but rather chose to speak to viren...

thanks for the PM..

Cant wait for the next update😃

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

poor jeevs she missed viren so much n she hurt herself...

whatever happen viren will always b by her side

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vishwa patel

@-vish-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

such an emotional n heart touching update

very well written

when virika hugged each other tightly...such a lovely moment

feel sorry for jeevika..amount of pain she went thru after abortion

u described virika's feelings superbly

n don't u dare end this story in this next chapter😛

i want to read more..so continue soon n thanx for pm

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Mehak

@MehakGera

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Awww

Hats off karina

D way u potrayed every emotion was superb

It was beyond anything

So touching update

Perfectly elaborated n executed update

D way viren concoled jeevika was so nice

Jeevs emotions

Luvd d update

Each n every bit of it was out of d world

Update asap

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karankrysle

@karankrysle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Well,what better are you gonna get with your writing Karina?

i am not gonna praise you this time coz I haven't any words left!

But yes i am gonna tell you my favourite bits from the story!

And for the First time.it is not 1 but many lines that I have loved in your updaye!

It was intense,showing their love for each other!

And you know what our Virika are like!

Viren would do just all this that you wrote in the update if this would have had really happened to our Jeevs!😭

Okay enough talking!

here i go with my fave bits from the update!

Viren couldn't get his eyes of her. He missed seeing that beautiful smile on that face. That smile that made him go crazy for her. That smile that just made him feel warm and loved.

He rested his eyes and she rested her body on him.

He placed his head on hers, making their every body part touch each other. Viren shuddered a bit, as he hadn't remembered when they were this close last. It made him feel bad, that their distances were lessened in this hospital, with Jeevika on the verge of killing herself.

Hatss-off to you my writer!

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urmil

@urmil

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#290

brilliant...how beautifully u expressed virika's relation by their body language...loved the way u described their sleeping position...both feeling safe in each other's company...thnx for pm.update soon

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