Will read and comment!
Done, read and re read and read again...loved it, so worth the wait...you stories do make a farak to me for sure!
So they get caught, Loved how matter of factly he says that is me Arnav on explaining the "Arna" bit of the jalebi...
Loved how NK gets ever so confused...loved his wild imagination and conversation with HP! Ha ha...he thinks bua is stalking him as with her use of his name as her pet phrase!,
Loved how buaji will not let either of them explain...not that there was much explaining to do...loved the entire family turning up for the Shagun in the middle of the night! Only in this story...
Loved how neither of them actually take any steps towards breaking off their fake relationship and now fake formal relationship...love their silent conversation ...
Loved their farak conversation ...please let him answer all those faraks one at a time...
Loved now he does not like it when his fake (fianc ) says this shaadi cannot happen...he feels the farak alright with that one sentence!
Love your dedication and notes on and after each chapter too, I don't know most of those people but thanks to your dedication have been reading their stories ( the ones who write) and the notes after...love those too!
Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago
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