FF: Amour by -ChocoPie- and aroma.arsha|UP1 pg12 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Its nice👏 Please continue


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thanx 😊
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thanx
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#54

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Maaann! This collab is fantastic! xD


And yeah! Asad and Zoe are already together, and that seems fun, seeing the sensuality they both are already sharing.

Hayye! It's so damn dreamy, and whilst you need to update this one, FAST, and longer, please! Humble request, it is. 😳

Keep em coming, sooner!



Thanx dear :)

Sorry but I and aro, both are busy so no fast updates 😳
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Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Hey ...

That was Amazing !!!


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Chapter 1 – Pure Bliss

The later days were bliss for them. A pinch of teasing, a bucket full of romance and the college days were of-so-perfect for them. They spend time teasing the other; sometimes in fire exit, while sometimes in Asad's place or to be prescribed, in his farmhouse. How the days went, none of them knew. They were so engrossed in each other that they never knew when their college was over. They never got a chance to even know it.

For Zoya, the days she spends with Asad were like heaven. She loved being with him, teasing him and sometimes fighting with him. The days were just perfect for her. But no one has control over destiny right? Well, that was the sole case here. None of them knew what their destiny had stored in for them.

Well if we got to talk about Asad, he was indeed planning up something in his mind. And yup, for his plan he was highly bent on ignoring Zoya. Well after all he had a surprise up his sleeves for his special one; special one named Zoya.

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Zoya was highly irritated with the fact that she is not getting time to spend with Asad. It was kind of eating her from inside. Negative thoughts were one which haunted her. Some like – What if he is over with her? What if he does not love her now? And there were more. The more she thought about them, the more she felt like losing him up. Well at-least that was what she thought.

A day, Asad knocked Zoya's house door. Zoya was first shocked to see him as he had not turned up from a week. Anger, well that was quite visible on her face. He smiled at her sheepishly but she just turned and went to her room. Zainab entered from the other side to see Asad standing near the doorstep ruffling his hairs thinking what to do – his signature action. She smiled and went to him as he looked at her with pleading eyes. She chuckled seeing him like that. Oh boy, this was going to be hard.

"Aunty wo…" he didn't have proper words to speak as he fidgeted with his hands. "Since when did it become Aunty? I thought it was mom" Zainab spoke out with a smirk and put more emphasis on the word 'mom'. "Mom, help karo na please. Aap toh jaante ho na what I was planning" Asad spoke out with a pout. "Haan pata hai, isiliye gussa nahi hun. Kay I will see to it. Lekin abhi leke jaayega kya?" Zainab asked raising her eyebrows. "Uh? Kay will come later." Asad spoke out and left.

It was going to be hell difficult for him. "Damn why did I ignored her for the whole week?" thought Asad and he felt like killing himself for this. Arhh what had he done?

He spends the rest of the day preparing up something.

Later that evening, someone rang the doorbell of Zoya's place. She opened it to find no one. Thinking it probably would be one of the pranks by Asad, she was just going to close the door when he eyes fell on the box kept on the floor. It was perfectly wrapped in a black wrapping paper and red ribbon perfectly suiting it giving it a perfect look. She picked it up and saw that below the box, there was a paper too. She picked that up too and started to read it up.

"I love you not only for what you are, but for what I am when I am with you. I love you not only for what you have made of yourself, but for what you are making of me. I love you for the part of me that you bring out. If a hug represented how much I loved you, I would hold you in my arms forever."

The words just touched her heart. It was him. He would do anything to make her feel special; anything to make her feel that she belongs to him and that's what he did today by just writing these words up. A smile lit her face as she walked out to see if he was around but didn't found anyone near the home.

She pouted and went in her room. She sat on her bed pouting as she opened the box and found a beautiful red prom dress inside with a small note. She again started to read it up. "Be ready by 8. Waiting for you, my Zoe." She smiled seeing it.

Picking up the dress she adored it keeping it in-front of her in the mirror. The dress was just perfect. She twirled in the room with the dress still in her hands. Soon she remembers that she had to get ready and started to do the latter; getting herself ready. She wore the dress and a pair of high pencil heel of the matching color. She did some light make-up and some jewellery.

She looked like an angel. An angel sent by heaven for Asad; her Asad. She grinned seeing herself in the mirror. Well, that was one effect he had on her. She would grin like a mad girl and do what not. But she love doing those things for him. At-least when they made him happy.

In all the time she had still not realized that he had asked her for a date.

Just as the realization dawn upon her, her cheeks turned crimson red. She was looking everywhere but at mirror. Well she knew, a look at herself in the mirror and she will blush so hard that her cheeks will hurt due to the continuous blushing.

A honk of the car brought her back to the present. She looked down her window as he slide down the glass of the car and flashed her his dimples. She smiled and rushed down. "Bye ma!" she said and not waiting for the reply she went out of the house. Zainab shook her head and mumbled "paagal".

There, outside, Asad was leaning on his car waiting for her. As soon as she saw him, her pace slowed down as started to take small steps. Just the instance she reached him, he pulled her closer to his by her waist and kissed on her nape and whispered in her ear "Gorgeous" making her blush deep red.

He backed off and opened the door for her as she stepped in and he closed the door behind her. As soon as he entered in, he blindfolded her. "Asad what are you doing?" she spoke out with a pout. "It's a surprise honey." Asad replied and started off the car. Asad opened Zoya's window as she felt cool and fresh air hitting her face. It calmed her already flushed face. She rested her head back at the seat as Asad took small glances of her every now and then. He was actually checking her out all over again.

The dress fitted her perfectly highlighting her curves. The jewellery just gave a glow to her already glowing skin. The slight make-up which makes her looks beautiful. Her long hairs which flow with the wind, making her look gorgeous. The pout that plays on her lips making her look cute.

He loved her not because she is beautiful. He loves her because she was beautiful from inside and that what matters to him.

Zoya felt car stopping at a place but alas, she can't see anything. Asad parked the car and went to her side, opening the door for her. Taking her hand in his, he made her step out of the car and gently kissed her palm. She smiled and he guided her in. soon he made her step at a place and left. Zoya was scared to the shell. She can't look at anything. Soon she felt a pair of hand circling her stomach and him hugging her from behind. She heaved a sigh of relief and he rested his chin on her bare shoulder. This small act of his send shivers down her spine.

They stayed like that for a few moments. Then Asad guided her inside and opened her blindfold. The scene infront of her was beautiful the whole room was decorated with balloons, flowers and all what she like. She looked at him and hugged him tightly. "I love you Asad! Don't ever heave me." She spoke out. "I love you too Zoya. But tell me one thing. How can I ever leave you when my heart belongs to you?" he asked pressing his forehead on hers. She smiled and kissed on his cheek while he smiled in return.

"Now come… aise hi nahi leke aaya hun main yahan tumhe." He spoke out. "Toh phir kyun laaye ho yahan mujhe huh?" asked Zoya. "Surprise surprise honey!" Asad replied as he took her in. they enjoyed their sweet little time chatting and romancing of course. Soon Asad asked her for a dance and she gladly accepted it. Both of them swayed down the music.

Soon Asad shocked Zoya by bending down in-front of her on one knee and her one hand in his. He smiled and spoke,

"Zoya, it's been such a long time since we both had been together. We shared everything. From our small little secret to what not. We went to every part of our life. Be it tough or a smooth one. I love you from the bottom of the heart; not because you are beautiful, but because you are beautiful from inside. All my life I was afraid that I would never find love... and now that I've found it, I'm afraid that I will lose it. If I am given a chance to change one thing in this world, I will change the order of alphabets and place U and I together. I want to spend every single moment of my life with you. I want to breathe for you… I want you to be with me every time whether I need you or not. Will you marry me?"


Zoya was stunned listening to those words. Tears trickled down her eyes as she smiled through them. Asad by that time had picked the ring out as she nodded her head to say 'yes' but the words never escaped her mouth. Asad smiled and made her wear the ring and hugged her tight as if his life depends on her – only which it did!

He pulled back and took her lips in a sweet kiss showering his love for her…

Zoya's Dress :


This update was solely dedicated to Yaari.

- Konpal

Edited by -ChocoPie- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
updated :D

pms later 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sooo cute!! Loved it :) Thank you
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Originally posted by: canadiankudi

Sooo cute!! Loved it :) Thank you


thanx 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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FINALLY FINALLY... =D

wow its an amazing update...
loved reading the whole update...

none know how much i waited for this update =D

OMG... OMG... OMG... it was dedicated to me 🤗

LOVE YOU KON SO MUCH <3

UPDATE SOON as i love this FF <3

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