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Posted: 12 years ago
And you are back with another of those intriguing updates.
Liking how you are structuring updates in two sections - Khushi and Arnav's love story and the political games. Khushi still needs reassurance from Arnav, must say cant blame her considering how their marriage was fixed and how miserly Arnav is with expressing his feelings in words. He is yet to say the three words to her.
Wow, I cant make up my mind who is worst, the depraved degenerate Virendra or the conniving, calculating, brother killer Vijendra. Must say Suraj and Khan are playing both of them like a cat plays with a mouse. Personally, I would still want Arnav to have the satisfaction of avenging his dad's murder.
The way you are laying out the characters in this story it is as if you are laying out chess pieces on a chessboard. Masterly writing. Cant wait for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Welcome back Kalyaani !!

Great update !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey happy to see you back!!!! Its good as always!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey...i m regular reader of ur stories...esp. pol..
my hectic work.doesn't allow me to comment regularly but i love ur work and try to read it as soon as possiable..
p.s. again a nice update...looking frwd to suraj's plan..
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved this long update. the game is in play n the roles have changed. the audience have been forced to come into the field to play n the players have become audiences. what's happening with sheetal, indira n arjun?

waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Welc0me back K!! S0 y0u c0me back with l0ts 0f acti0n!! I am glad that s0b(cant expand it, IF rules. R0fl!!) Viren is w0unded and I h0pe he is jailed. Suraj is planning big but w0uld it backfire Arnav?? I w0nder h0w Arnav will react t0 everything. Waiting t0 see their plans g0 ahead t00 and I w0nder if Suraj will be sucked in the v0rtex t00, al0ng with 0thers
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for the late comment. i checked in your story after a while and realized you had updated already...

i wonder is suraj and khan wil sabotage vijayendra's plan to help his son?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Very interesting update Kalyaani.

Glad to have you back.

Khushi asking, "Why do you hate Suraj?" and Arnav replying, "I don't hate him, Khushi. I hated the fact he loved you" shows his possessiveness and her persistence with silence for him to go ahead with his explanations, is caught on by him at a later stage. The fact that she needed to hear from him was known to him. But what he caught on later showed after all she is his better-half and being attuned to him so much she too has started to behave in the same manner that has given him immense pleasure. Like the saying, all roads lead to Rome, for them all conversations and actions lead to their bed! Both are insatiable and are happy only in each others arms. Guess Arnav is sensible not to have kids so soon. Otherwise I must say not poor Khushi or poor Arnav, but poor kid!

So Suraj has been able to take charge of things! He had Jay occupied elsewhere and got it done his way! Where was Sheetal???

So he has saved his money too and Viren is in the hospital and the Drug supplier no more! Nice work Khan!

Vijayendra, is now at the mercy of Suraj but with a hidden agenda! Wants Khan to take up the blame! But Khan's alibi was unsurmountable!! Trying to catch hold of Suraj with the old trick of hoodwinking him, Vijayendra comes to know that he son had acted behind his back and nobody knew of his nefarious activity, even Viren's shadow, Suraj.( Like the pun on this word, Suraj and shadow! Patting my own back!! Haha! Realized it as soon as I typed!) He had sought money from Suraj without stating the reason for the need! Only now he realized his son was a bigger fool than he ever thought off and Suraj is one happy man who was relieved not to have a doting, conniving and blind father like Vijayendra. He hasn't realized Suraj is now privy to everything they had done and Suraj makes Vijayendra spell out what needs to be done and it is Khan who utters everything to be uttered! Wonder what was the plan and how the'll fix Vijayendra too!

That was a lovely update with lots of intrigue thrown in!

Waiting for the next update.
Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
Juz lvd d convo f arshi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
The validation of love is important ...very important indeed but the charm of it lays in doing it in right doses at the right time. I have seen couples who utter the famous, very wanted words - "I Love You" to each other every morning, over years. It is done so often that the actual meaning loses its value over a period of time. So, Arnav and Khushi keep your validations meaningful - so, quality over quantity. and and and validations come in various forms and sizes too. It could be an I love you or a hug from behind when you least expect it. It caould be a surprise dinner, it could be a diamond jewellery set or a simple pair of earrings or an eternity band 😉. However, I notice that Khushi somehow does not feel the need to gift Arnav anything. Why? coz he has everything? but that doesn't have anything to do with gifting your loved one out of the blue right? She has everything she needs, wants yet Arnav does it. So, he is man of action and she is a woman of words. Difference that is so typical between man and woman 😆.

Suraj, Khan, KBV, VIjeyendra and Viren - the count down to the climax begins. Viren is the only all black character of the lot. Even Vijeyendra seems to be driven by his love for his son, which if you ask me is not all black. People do many things to protect their children and isn't that love? Isn't that similar to what KBV does too ... to protect his family. Give them what he feels they deserve? All these men are manipulative yet their achilles heel seem to be the deep affections (love) for their loved ones😉
Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago

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