Junoon...(yes i killed zoya)updated 42 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: grad2011

omg really nice plzz do update soon!!!!

thankyou dear...and yes next update is on the way...😃
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Originally posted by: life4me

Loving ur story. Pls continue soon.

thankyou very much!! and yes i m gonna update it as i get time...😃
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Originally posted by: grad2011

omg really nice plzz do update soon!!!!

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part 4
asad reached highsky and went straight to the reception
"may i please know on which room no zoya farooki has checked in"
"m really sorry sir i cant reveal you our guest information.."
"no actually you dint get it..she is my friend ...she told me room no ..its just got skip from my mind..it woild be kindful enuf agar ap mujhe bata de k wo kaha thairi hai..!!"
"i said sir m really sorry sir but cant disclose our guest info..y dont you just call your friend and ask her..???
asad made faces because he had call her all the way till hotel but she dint pick even one..
poor asad!!
after a debate with receptionist asad sadly started moving out of the hotel when something striked him..he returned to the receptionist and ask her to connect zoya's room no through intercom..receptionist could not oppose him..as she was flattered by his look..she smiled at asad and dialed zoya's room extention no
"hello"
"salam alaikum"
"hello mam, some one has come to see you and he is waiting for you in lobby..."
"who is it"
"Mr.asad khan"
"Asad...here" she took a pause in between and continued
"please ask him to leave, i dont want to meet him.."
"but ma'm he is not ready to leave until he meets you..so wat should i do ...should i call the security and throw him away.."
"wat ..no!!" " ok wait i will speak to him"
"ok ma'm" receptionist disconnected phone
"sir she said she will talk to you.."
before completing above line asad phone rang
"hello asad"
"zoya..zoya "
"asad chle jaeye ap yaha se..."
"nai me kahi nai ja raha...please i need to talk to you"
"mujhe apse bat nai krni..please chle jaeye.."
"main nai jaunga.."
"asad"
asad started to walk towards exit of the hotel
"zoya bahar dekhiye.."
zoya wondered y the hell in middle of their conversation he is asking her to see out..but she did just to know what was it..
as soon as zoya came to balcony asad saw her and gave a big smile..because now he knew she was in which room..
"asad"
"main upar aa raha hu.."
"na ..i .. as..ad" before she could complete he kept phone..
zoya was worried as what will he say when he come here ..wat will she answer to her phupi and above all now wat is left that is to b finished...
asad rang the door bell. appi opened the door.she saw asad and was surprised.
"asad ap yaha.."
"mujhe zoya se kuch bat krni hai..ap please unhe bula dengi.."
"mujhe riyaz ne bataya tumhare or zoya k bare me..pr asad its too late ap abhi ghar jaeye..
"please darwaza mat band kijiye..mujhe zoya se baat krni hai and its urgent..kl tak bahot der ho jaegi..please"
asad pleaded
"theek hai main zoya se puchti hu agar wo milna chahe to he..warna apko yaha se jana hoga..theek hai"
appi called zoya ...zoya came out but she stood such a way that she was hidded from asad eyes he could hear only her voice
"appi mujhe kisise nai milna hai.."
"zoya bahot ho gaya tumhe mujhse bat krni hogi"
asad anger took over his controlled and he walked towards zoya as a storm.. he caught her arms and stomped out of the hotel room..it was so quick reaction that appi freezed on what just had happened but when she realised she tried to stop him but it as too late asad had already took zoya with him in the car.
"asad chhodo mera hath.."zoya was very angry
asad dint gave any reply and continued to drive with one hand on steering wheel and other holding zoya's wrist
"asad i said stop the car..stop the car asad ..kaha le ja rahe ho mujhe...please stop the car"
asad gave her a deadly look..which made zoya more furious and scared
"asad please .." zoya requested this time butr sgain when she saw no response from his side she decided to herself break the grip..she tried to bite on asad hand..that only made him "ARGH"
he stopped the car there and then and looked at zoya..
because of sudden brake she got scared and a small scream got off her throat
zoya slowly putt her hand aside which she placed on face while screaming and noticed that asad was still looking her..
"asad ap pagal ho gae hai..ye sab kya hai..kyu ap mujhe yaha le aae boliye..?"
asad got of his car followed by zoya
"asad answer me..boliye kyu mujhe yaha zardasti se laya gaya hai.."
"i am sorry..."asad whispered
"sorry..kisliye asad...yaha lane k liye ya mere sath badtameeze krne k liye.."
"for everything zoya us har wajah k liye jisne tumhe rulaya hai..main tumhe kabhi hurt nai krna chahta zoya ..pr pata nai kyu mujhse.."
"mujhse kya asad ..mujhse wo sari bate kehne k liye ..jiski wajah se aj mujhe khud se nafrat ho rahi hai..ya fir mujhe channi krne k liye apne kadwi bato se..gheen aa rahi thi na apko...bahot takleef hui thi us rat k wajah se, right?...theek hai mr.khan maine kaha na apse me apki problem solve kr dungi to krdungi...main yaha se chali jaungi.."
"what nai...i mean zoya tum mujhe galat samajh rahi ho ..please main aisa nai chahta..main yaha tumhe apne sath ghar le jane aya hu.."

"oh really mr.khan ap mujhe ghar lene aae hai..ghar kiska ghar?"
"hamara ghar zoya ..apka or mera.."
"nai asad wo sirf apka ghar hai ..main waha sirf ek guest thi ..right?"
"zoya .. zoya main janta hu maine apko hurt kia hai..bahot hurt kiya hai pr trust me ..i really dint mean it..sirf gusse me maine keh diya zoya..please understand!!"
"mr khan ap he ko to understand krti aai hu..ap se mili insult , apse mila nafrat..or apki tohmate sb understand krne ki koshish to kr rai hu main.."
zoya started walking awary from the car when asad holded her hand
"zoya please give me one chance ..main sab theek kr dunga..i will change..i promise i will..tumhe har khushi dunga zoya please ek chance.."
now asad was on the edge of loosing control over him as zoya's continuous rejection was annoying him but at the same time he knew it was his fault and he wanted her badly
he went on his knee while talking to her with fresh tears in his eyes drenching down his cheek
zoya could not see him in pain so she turned her back to him and in very tough tone she replied
"sorry asad its over... i cant come back.. hamari kahani ka ant yahi tha ..yaha se chle jao asad or bhul jao sab kuch .."
asad was shocked to hear this from her he raise his chin and in the same kneel down position looked at her back
"kya itna asan hai apke liye"
zoya kept quite and stood there as stone hearted.. with an inexpressive face..but her eyes screamed of her dilemma which she was facing with in her..

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so this is it for today because its very late now almost 12 will continue next time..



Edited by mileyhaward - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Omg!! I love it please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Nisbahx

Omg!! I love it please continue soon

THANKS dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wooowww !! OMGGG!!!!!!MAN !!! it ws faaab!! 👏👏 u made me cry 😭😭 (khushi k aansu re!!! ) 😊 i wnt ths scene 2 b potrayd in d show as it is!!! i reallly wsh ths 2 happpn in d show!!! god !! it ws awwwsmm!!! 👏 asad feelng guilty ws d bestst part !! 🤢 😊 luvly!! vrryy welll done!!! 👏👏👏
vry xitd 4 d nxt part!!
plzzz cntinue n update sooon!!😊
n yaaa tnkiewww sooo mch 4 PMng me!!! tnxxx alottt!!🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Can't wait for the next update..Wanna know what happened next..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: life4me

Very nice. Please continue soon.

thankyou!!😊

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