Originally posted by: Ria_SwaRon
Dii, π€ π€
U back with another OS... π π I was dancing when I got the pm... π π€£Cuz u know, I like reading your works... π πAnd btw wwhy pms late..?? π I wanted to be the first to comment... π πThis was a super-cute OS. I have always loved the Shekhawat Family concept..Married SwaRon are always cute. The flow of the OS plus ur words are always a treat. The morning waking up fiasco is amazing to read.Then, SwaRon teasing each other. Sharon's contentment was clearly seen.I wud quote ur words.Lying on his chest, the cosy feel of being in sync with her soulmate, the fulfilment of being his the envelope of her husband's care making her feel like a queen ...the rhythm of a happy married life...the aroma of togetherness as she lay cocooned in his embrace...the comfort of a sure love settled upon her eyelids.Then, thier daughter is as cute as her name.Aww,, she had worn outfit similar to her doll... ( though I hate such too girlie stuff with pink color all the way round and dolls.. Gosh, I hate dolls, but I can imagine that)How adorable she must be looking. π³And then, kal aadhi raat .. wala part was hilarious... βΊοΈSwayam is smartypant .. He managed so well I must say..π πFun with their daughter is adorable.And then at last,I once again loved ur these linesSharon felt peaceful...this was the best moment of her entire week...watching her swayam and her baby nuzzling each other, her baby grinning in her father's lap...their features lighting up identically in their contented hour of bonding. She felt ...so happy...proud wife of india's most successful freestyle dancer swayam shekhawat...and the proud mother of their tiny bundle.Its really, a treat to watch ur own family with you in such way enjoyingAnd then, yes definitely what else wud Swayam want.. when his world is with him in the form of his angels.And thats what is called, as the , title suggests HAPPINESS.Dii, keep writing... (I know ye roj ka dialogue ho gaya hai... π)Coz I really find ur works a reading treat.Love,Ria.
Originally posted by: medhasarkar
sorry ria...but kal raat...i was just dropping off by the time i got this posted. i am glad u loved the os...and the girly stuff i know...i used to be such a tomboy...but a lot of my friends, especially my bff...named savera btwπ used to be like this...and my mom always found that kinda cute...so i put it in to make savi super cutie.thanks for ur lovely feedback dear...i look forward to reading your comments and also...apne exams ke baad..plzzz khud bhi likhna...i love ur write ups.
Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
LOVED THE OS MEDHAπ³
U are an amazing writer dear...i just love the flow in ur writing..
The certain use of language adds to its charm...
This OS was a perfect blend of romance,naughtiness,comic and cute moments...
A simple concept..SWARON happily married...
madly in love with each other...with their bundle of joy ..
But the way of execution and presentation was just beautiful...
Ur writing style is fresh..n pleasant ...LOVING IT...
U made me smile after a really bad and stressful day..thanx for this beautiful OS dear..
Luv
Deep
Originally posted by: medhasarkar
thank you marium...itz amazing to hear praise from your buddies.π
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