Arshi FF ~~ "Mine" # 2 Parts 13-18; Th-3 Lnk Pg153 - Page 5

This was a beautiful update...a peek into the beginining of their journey... Edited by gabby123 - 11 years ago

good writing ...dear ...very well written

I really like jerry mathur relationship n also the way arnav's behavior ...

ohh so arnav was falling for her from then :D

Chapter is interesting .. Please don't give so much of mathur... I like arshi parts more and also raizada family parts...

beautifully written update.. you have written it so well.. specially Arnav's transition.. slow and steady and

mathur and jerry's friendship..

enjoyed the update a lot..

I really liked the aman khushi part

Nice update..:) will b waiting fr next one..:)

Nice chap!!

I have said it before too,just love this story of urs.it seems real to me.love mathur nd jerry relationship.asr is a complex character surely but nt mad kinds for as of now he doesnt seem to humiliate her for their contract ,but still waiting for next few updates to get more about their relationship.eagerly waiting for d next update.one problem though is thatI dont recieve ur update notification on my wordpress account like I do with other blogs that I follow...wud be easier to follow up that way.