YIPPIIIEEE I'M FIRST 😃
W.O.W.that was brilliant foz!!!!! 👏Your writing is absolutely amazing you are one of the best writers I've seen around😃❤️Now about the actual OS 😆...OMDZZZ IT WAS SOOO0OOO HOT!!!!! ☺️ THE WAY HE CAME AND HELD HER WAIST AND PUSHED HER AGAINST THE DOOR!!! THEN WHEN SHE "DARINGLY" STROKED HIS FINGER!!😉 I LOVED THE WAY SHE ASKED "AND YOU" AND HE REPLIED WITH A KISS!!! OMDZZZ *DEAD*☺️ JSDFFDFSJFJFDDSFKMFD I WAS SO IMAGINING MYSELF 🤣 HAYEE SULBALA SETTIN MA SCREEN ON FIREEE!!!! THEN THEN WHEN HE TOOK HER TO HER BEDROOM AND AHM AHMM'D ☺️ GOODBYE IM GONE *DEAD5EVA*THE WAY U DESCRIBED HIS EYES OMDZ AHHH I NEED TO GO AND WATCH A VID OF THE SULTZ BABEZ' EYES NOW HEHEHE AND WHEN MADHU CLAWED HIS BACK DAMN I FELT JELLY LOOOLLL I WANNA CLAW HIS BACK *CRY* 🤣I loved your OS so much that is THE best thing I've read in a while now wowowow you have to do another OS now or an FF even I'm gonna pester you later 😉🤣LOVE YOU 59233729302EVA (only you and the other sultanaz can undertsand that :P) mwaaah <3 xoxxooxoxo (dno y im chavvin up my post but yolo init rather yobo [you only bhangra once 🤣 - that reminds me of the sikky babez u need to write an OS on him and his biceps ☺️🤣])❤️❤️love from ur fellow sultana/don/kameenian/beti/sister/nando *waahi*🤣 etc etc (dunno y im even saying that when u know who I am 🤣) xxx
Originally posted by: -MzIndependant-
HAAAYE HAAYE HAAAYE OMFDZZZ I JUST REREAD IT AGAIN & DIED FROM THE HOTNESS GOSHJH IT WAS SOO FRIKKING HOT AAAH THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED THE KISS & EVERYTHING WITH SUCH DETAIL😉☺️☺️
OMGG THE PART WHEN HE PUSHED HER AGAINST THE DOOR FRICKK I WOULDN'T MIND HIM DOING THAT TO ME;)🤪 PSSHT LOOK AT HOW HE SEDUCES HER BY SAYING 'ARYAN MISSES HER' OHHH SUREEE THATS THE REAL REASON😉
No joke this had me blushing so hard I can just imagine this happening in my head,his rough hands all over her bare body☺️☺️ asdffklhj when he scooped her in his arms oyyoyy we all know this was heading ahem ahem SR;) if you wanna continue this OS I suggest you do it from the SR😳& don't forget the details loool😉🤣 you BETTER write more stuff on Sulbala or else...😈🤣loved this OS aaahh & love youu loadss fozuu wozuu (need to match your cuddly wuddly munda🤣)
lovely OS...amazing
Originally posted by: ankita66
too good
OMG...OMG...WOWWW.👏...what an OS...Please do continue writing many such more OS & FF on SULBALA...Haiii the way he carried her in his arms...Shhh...and ufff that HOTTT kISSS...😉
Dead ... It was awesome
X'mas came early this year... I read 2 OSs on Sultan-Madhu same day 😃Please keep writing !!
Originally posted by: tamzin43
😳 feeling hot hot hot ..wow now that's what I'm talking about ...wah wah kya baat hai ,,fantastic plz pm me if you write more of this or anything else loved it well done dear 👏 👏
Originally posted by: ABBY_JERAN
OMGGG...this is BRYOND amazing man
Originally posted by: Aneri401
Fantastic os...it was so hottt...do add me to ur pm list & pm me whenever u write an os
Wow, wow and wow beautiful writing and omg the passion and intensity just sent shivers down my spine. Read 3 sulbala os in a row my word and i need to calm myself now. That was hot. And add me to your pm list 4 your next sulbala scene
Originally posted by: punam2712
lovely os, amazing chemistry
but as i am rishbala fan, would love read on them
Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
Fantastic! Superb! Perfect! I just loved it! Very well-written! I really really hope to read more from you. 👏
Originally posted by: amar5000
loved it
Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
well done! so romantic!😳
Originally posted by: darkangel93
wowowowowowowowWOW!!!!!!!! THAT WAS HOT!!!!!! loved the os, sweetie!!!!!! keep writing more on sultan and madhu!!!!!
Originally posted by: BrightLover
Wonderful OS!
Loved it!
Please write more on Sulbala! <3
Originally posted by: charlie1950
It seems sultan and madhubala
have more chemistry then the
original pair rk and madhu
<3 the update...
Glad im not the only one who loves Sulbala...Totally in with sultan more than Rk tbh..Please do my Sulbala OS's xYour update was HOT!!!
Originally posted by: havokhotline
*Runs around the house singing "MAHIII"*
This was just brilliant!Lady, your words were just crafty! And I loved the use of symbolism and imagery in this OS! It was all so simple, yet so powerful. :DI just loved this! :) Please write some more?
Why have I turned so hyper over your comment its all the ROFL emos I tell you 🤣 it's been ages since we talked using these now we use emojis but nothing beats this > 🤣 (i think I married it at one point.., anyway 🤣)Thank you so so so much, this is basically what I wish would happen in the show (but it probs wont *sobs*) LOOOL I was jelly with myself writing the clawing part ahahahaPester me in the summer when uni is over, actually we should all do one together😎ahhh sikky babez and his biceps, he's gone incredibly hot now he hates his vyf so I may come up with something for our bhangra munda too 🤣Waahi waahi omg it was still better than maahi maahi (ahem sara and her ex deewani) 🤣Love you 985967587875867eva and eva until my saans ceases to exist via Sultan's hotness😳I know you've saved a copy with your name so have I ahfhjhfjfhjfhgg no I'm kidding I'm bare shareef remember 🤣I would go laal like a tamatar writing a SR I never have and I never will because I get all shy types you know😳I want to write more short stories on Sulbala but I need inspiration so the CVs better give us more scenes or else😡🤣[DIV]Go and run back to your greasepot - look I found an emo for him🤡(inside joke LMFAO LMFAO LMFAO 🤣 🤣)
^^ @ bold part: oyy she was your pod aswell pssht you were gay with her so don't deny it🤣
You & shareef? Pls & LOOL I know you won't but try to write a Story as your come 'back' OS ygm😉🤣 awww I know you chose it for yourself,look at that smile you know you wanna cuddle it miss squishyy😛🤣🤣
Originally posted by: -ScarletRose-
MAA FOZZZ BEBBZZZ
OH MAAA GOSSHHH THAT WAS SOME HOTTT OS BABZZZ LIKEEE UFFFTTT SOO PASSIONATE AND OMGGGIt was the lightest of touches, but it ignited an ever growing spark within Madhu - she locked her arms around Sultan's neck, pulling him closer in the process. She responded with equal passion, and his heart threatened to burst out of his chest as he moved his mouth sensously down her jawline, inhaling her exotic scent as his lips rested against her neck.SBDKJN<FNSMNSKJ<NJFHIUDSKAMHBFUDKN THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL, MEEE GONEEE LIKEEE IMAGINE THEM DOING THIS BDKJHSJKNCNSHCJ SUCH A BEAUTIFUL OS.on a serious note, it was such a breathtakingly beautiful OS, your so talented it was written sooo welll<3 i loved the passion in this OS written really well you can almost imagine this happening, their feelings and everything was portrayed so well, and am not saying this cos ur my friend i actually mean it😳 your an amazing writer<3Placing her down gently, he hovered over her, letting his eyes do the talk as he unbraided her long mane of chestnut hair, before he leaned in closer, the tips of their noses touching in a loving embrace.A,SFNAs,nfaD,MNFa,mnfakjDNADn AM GONEEE. hayeee that was sooo beautiful, like DAMNNN can u imagine them like that forreal omgggthe ending was amazing, just loved it<3 I've read this OS like more than 5 times :') you need to write a part 2 babz<3love you loadsss babzz xxx🤗🤗p.s SULTANAS FO LIFE YGM🤣🤣🤣xo
[quote]^^ @ bold part: oyy she was your pod aswell pssht you were gay with her so don't deny it🤣
You & shareef? Pls & LOOL I know you won't but try to write a Story as your come 'back' OS ygm😉🤣awww I know you chose it for yourself,look at that smile you know you wanna cuddle it miss squishyy😛🤣🤣[/quote]What crap 🤣 I refuse to talk about that moment in my life okey pls tenks pls 🤣Don't mention back i'll forget how to breathe☺️shh khotti go and dance to uncha lamba kad🤣
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