As Long As I Live Thread 2 - Page 65

This entire chapter was written so beautifully. All those pent-up desires were on the verge of finding an outlet...but then...

I really liked the way you gave us little indications of how Yash and Aarti were trying to gauge each other's reactions and sensations before progressing further. Even though both of them were drowning in that moment, they still tried to hold on to any last remnants of control, just in case...And the bit towards the end, when Aarti reached out to ask Yash if everything was okay...I loved that, too, because she could have pulled back, but she didn't. She was concerned and she tried to tell him that...

But the ending...I can vividly see Aarti on the floor, surrounded by blood, crying into Yash's chest. Oh, God.

P.S. Believe whatever you want, darling...You're a fantastic writer in my book! Update soon!

i can't understand yash feelings

i wonder if he has really loved Arpita...

now they are equal

he think that aarti killed arpita and he too also kill a person dear to her eyes so sad part...and HOT hahaha

PLEASE CONTINU SOON CANT WAIT!!!

Rewind...OMG!!!!!

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God, please help me erase all these impure and dirty thoughts filling my mind''Hey Raam!

Saffi, you just put all my meditation done yesterday to waste and all I did just now! Now all these ahem ahem thoughts are filling my mind!

Saffi, for interrupting my tapasya, I curse you to keep writing steamy and hot s*x scenes whenever you have to. This way you will learn your lesson when PVians throw chappals at you when they read and fantasize the scene you've written which stops them from thinking properly and diverts their attention.

OK, enough of my bakwas now! Man, I watch way too much Ramayan!

Anywho'''..Saffi, WHAT'''.WAS'''.THAT??????

What in the world did I just read. When I was reading it, I blushed like an idiot! And I had to pass it off as something stupid!

"Carissa, why are you blushing?" (my mom)

"Oh no, I'm just trying not to laugh at Ian Alleyne doing the Harlem Shake! And you idiot'''.I had to show it to her! Do you know that my wireless was giving trouble too so I had to find it quickly on YouTube while I want to make sure the internet doesn't cut! All this for an Aarya CON!!

Again, I'll stop complaining now and comment on the chapter. BTW- Doing that for an Aarya CON was way worth it! I know I have naughty thoughts.

So point 1-My first reaction was Aarya having s*x!!!!! HAPPY DANCE! Uhh huh! Yeah! Uuh huh! Then my dream was crushed when he zipped up his zipper! Sob sob!! Saffi, why did you do this to me! Why did you crush my dreams! I was actually thinking'''.they're finishing what they started in the car! YES! Then NO NO NO NO NO NO!!!! But what to do'''the story must go on!

Point 2- I WAS RIGHT''''.to some extent! So I thought that she would try and seduce him and then he would make her lose the child'''who knew (other than you) that he was the one trying to instigate the s*x here??? LOL! I was like 95% right! This is probably the first time! Man, I feel nice! But something is gonna be wrong in my further prediction and well, my dreams will be crushed again!

Point 3- Well I hope you do know that this was a really sexy CON scene''..blushes

Point 4- Yash you friking bas***d. First you want her so you go to have s*x with her and then when you realize what you're doing you act like a teenage girl and get violent, turn a crybaby and then push her away. Now instead of Prashant you deserve a real hard kick in the a*s or your sensitive area'''your choice honey''.whichever hurts more'''f**king as**ole!!!

Point 5- Aarti lost her baby! I don't know whether I should be happy for sad because you see, the last part of Prashant with her is dead''.YAY!!! But thanks to Yash's crappy behaviour he took an innocent life. AND I HATE HIM FOR THAT! Motherf**ker!!!

Point 6- You are probably the only writer who in one part, can make me hate a guy, then love him, then hate him! You are awesome my deary! May my curse stay with you forever!

So I'm ending as you see, I am not supposed to be reading this and if my mommy finds out, she will kill me and ban me from I-F…….yours too so I was not here and you weren't writing that either…….OK?

So bye bye my dear''.update soon! I need to get to 20 soon!

*Muah*

Love,

Carissa.

hope Yash try to treat well

Awesome update and promo

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So I can't say anything now as the next chapter is already up so anyways!!

THAT WAS AMAZING!! 👏⭐️