OS: Please Hold Me Tightly *last part* 4/5/13 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
very beautiful potrayal of emotion...
feel very sad for both..



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ramsakshiroxxx

hmm very emotional cont soon

hmm thoda jadaiye emotional ho gayi han... tnx di for reading it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Alya1991

nice update...continue soon!!!

tnx sweetheart...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sss283

omg very emotional and touching

rula diya na😭
tooo good😛

aww tum roh te hun aa bilkul bhi acche nahi lagte ho... thank u jaanu
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Posted: 11 years ago
now this is emotional, why can't RaYa be together anywhere, na BALH me na humare writings me, though we want them to be together, still we part them, I don't want them to be apart, continue by the way
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is heart wrenching, heart winining and heart touching ff.. Dear u are just 2 gud... The pain and sarrow are so beautifully describe that anyone eyes will fill up after reading ur ff... Pls dear anoye me more by ur ff am just loving it to the core.. Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinkjali

This is heart wrenching, heart winining and heart touching ff.. Dear u are just 2 gud... The pain and sarrow are so beautifully describe that anyone eyes will fill up after reading ur ff... Pls dear anoye me more by ur ff am just loving it to the core.. Update soon...

<font color="#FF0000"> i just tried my best to describe the pain... after reading your comment i m satisfied that somehow i managed to penned it down... thank u so much for such a wonderful comment...</font>
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww very emotional ... continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arreee yeh kya kr diyaaa..:-( bt very touchy well written