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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...kahani me twist...hmm...interesting...
Aab toh love story me jab tak mirchi masala na ho toh maza nahi aahta...hehehe...
Njoyin d ongoin stry...
Do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great Part
 
Hope Sonia doesnt cause trouble for Yuvreen
 
Cont soon
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LOVE-LOVE-LOVE-LOVE-LOVE

Hey Hey guys!!!!
I've finally got maself some time to reply to ur comments and PM's...

Thank you so much EVERYONE for reading Destiny and kept supporting me...😳
I am super happy reading all the Pm's...the suggestion and expectation that u guys wrote to me was priceless...do keep sending me all of those...trust me...i read it and loved it...

Love
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Hey Vidya..how u doing? 🤗
Sorry cudn't reply on ur previous updates. Just went through them, they were amazing, emotional. 

Abt chap 20..wow! new characters! fabb update..jealousy is here..:D

thnks 4 the pms...tc

-Jyoti
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CHAPTER 21: PAST AND PRESENT

Yuvraj's Phone Conversation

Sonia: "How are you Yuvi?"
Yuvi: "Never better...you?"
Sonia: "Good"
Yuvi: "so...you called"
Sonia: "Yeah...I called"
Yuvi: "What's up?"
Sonia: "a good news"
Yuvi: "and..."
Sonia: "and the good news is I'm back in town"
Yuvi: "Really?"
Sonia: "Yes...we should hang out bestie"
Yuvi: "Right now I'm out of town for a meeting"
Sonia: "Oh no"
Yuvi: "I'll be back in a couple of days and we'll meet up"
Sonia: "sure...call me when you are back"
Yuvi: "I will"
Sonia: "Bye"
Yuvi: "Bye" Yuvraj hang up
 
He recalls the old memories and the promises he made. He closed his eyes and the image that appears is Suvreen. "What's happening?"He sighed...

Raghuvanshi Mansion

Samar: "Maa...I'm home"

Mrs Raghuvanshi walks out of the kitchen and she got shocked looking at Samar's hand

Ragini: "Samar...what happen to your arm?"
Samar: "Chill maa, its nothing"
Ragini: "What do you mean by nothing!? Look at your arm! Son, let's go to the hospital"
Samar: "Maa...relax...I'm fine...I'll rest in my room...okay?"
Ragini: "Okay...just call me if you need anything"

Samar gave his mother a thumb up and he walked into his room.
 
Samar took out his laptop and start transferring files from his camera to his laptop. He was going through the pictures he clicked at the park. He stopped when he saw a picture of Suvreen.
 
Samar: "When did I capture Miss Weirdo?"He took a proper look at the picture and smiled "cute"
 
Next Day

Suvreen went shopping by herself at the mall. She stops at a cafe and takes away some coffee for herself
 
Waiter: "Here is your coffee maam"
Suvi:  "Thank you"
 
Suvi turned around and accidently spilled the coffee on a person.
 
Suvi: "Oh My God...I am so sorry" she turned towards the counter "excuse me, can I have some tissue"
Samar: "its okay" he faced Suvreen "you!"
Suvi: "You! I am so sorry"
Samar: "its okay" He smiled
Suvi: "I can buy you a new t-shirt if you want"
Samar: "What!?"He chuckled "Chill Miss Weirdo...It's just some coffee stain"
Suvi: "You sure?"

Samar nods his head. Suddenly he came up with a thought "What about a coffee date with me?"
Suvi: "What!?"
Samar: "It's not a date...date" he explained "more to hey I spilled coffee on you so let's hang out type"
The guilty feeling makes Suvreen agreed to his wishes "okay"
 
They took a seat in the cafe.
Waiter: "Hello, can i take your order please?"
Samar: "So Miss Weirdo...what would you like to have?"
Suvi: "A cold coffee and cheese sandwich"
Samar: "I'll have a latte and a slice of cheesecake"
Waiter: "Anything else?"
Samar: "No"
The waiter leaves
 
Suvi: "Are you sure you don' want me to buy you a new t-shirt?"
Samar: "Not again...Yes...in fact I'm 200% sure about it"
Suvi: "You are going to walk around the mall with that t-shirt?"
Samar: "No big deal Miss Weirdo"
Suvi: "Your wish and what's with Miss WEIRDO!?"
Samar: "Uhm..because you are weird and I don't know your name"
The waiter brought their orders "Here's your orders...have a nice meal"
Samar: "So...where were we?"
Suvi: "Name"
Samar: "Yeah...I don't know your name...I am S.."
Suvi: "Suvreen"
Samar: "Heh?"
Suvi: "My name"
Samar: "Owh...I'm Samar...so Surveen...studying or working?"
Suvi: "None of those and Its Suvreen S-U-V-R-E-E-N"
Samar: "My mistake...so basically you're a princess"
Suvi: "None of your business"
Samar: "Single or in relationship?"
Suvi: "Married"
Samar: "Good joke"
 
Suvreen take a look at her watch when she realized that she's late.
Suvi: "2 p.m. already? I'm late"
Samar: "What?"
Suvi: "Sorry about your shirt and the meal is my treat..gotta go now"
Samar: "Uhmmm...Okay...nice to meet ya"
Suvi: "Same hear..by the way...I really am Married..bye"
 
Samar look at Suvreen who is leaving and he smiled "As if, I'm gonna fall  for it Suv..Miss Weirdo"
 
Khurrana Mansion
 
Suvreen reached the mansion. She opened the door and found a gift box on the floor. She took the gift box and opened it; there's a musical box and a piece of note
 
'A little surprise for the princess'
 
Suvi: "Surprise? That too without a name"
 
Suvreen walk to the kitchen and she heard a voice from behind her
 
"Hey Princess"

Suvreen widen her eyes in shocked. She turned around and found Yuvraj standing behind her
 
Yuvi: "Miss me?"
 
Suvreen ran towards Yuvraj and hugged him ❤️🤗
 
Yuvi: "You missed me that much huh?"
 
Suvreen shook her head "No"
 
Yuvraj smiled and hugged her tight "I missed you"
 
End of chapter 21! : 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 22: UNEXPECTED FEELINGS

Suvi: "I thought you will be coming back late"
Yuvi: "The meeting was a success so I flew back straight away after the meeting"
Suvi: "I'm glad to hear that"
Yuvi: "So...how was the room?"
Suvi: "I'll show you and you decide it"
Yuvi: "Okay"

Both of them walk towards their room. Suvreen stopped Yuvraj from entering the room.
Suvi: "Wait"
Yuvi: "Why?"

Suvreen stand behind him and covered his eyes using her hand. Suvreen guide him into their room
Suvi: "Ta da"
 
 
Yuvi's mind thought: "Damn she's good"
 
Suvi: "How was it?"
Yuvi: "Not bad" he's trying to act cool
 
Suvreen pulled Yuvraj to a corner of their room "This is our closet room, left side is yours and right is mine...okay?"
 

Yuvraj wasn't blinking looking at the closet. Suvi tapped him on his shoulder "okay?"
Yuvi: "What do you mean by okay? This is awesome"
Suvreen smiled "Thanks"
 
*knock knock
Suvi: "Come in"
Jaspreet: "It's us"
Mann: "Congratulations son, your deal was a success"
Yuvi: "Thank you dad"
Jaspreet: "How do you like the room?"
Yuvi: "I loved it"
Jaspreet: "My daughter sure is the best"
Yuvi winked at Suvreen who is blushing
Mann: "Tonight, we will be throwing a small party"
Yuvi: "Okay dad"
Jaspreet: "Honey we should leave both of them alone now" she chuckle
 
After Mann and Jaspreet leave the room. Yuvraj walks towards Suvreen and give her a back hug.
 
Yuvi: "I have another gift for you"
Suvi: "What?"
Yuvi: "Its on the bed...wear it for the party tonight" He gave her a peck on her cheek and leave the room
 
 
Suvi: "Crazy!" she smiled

Party (Night)
 
There's a lot of guest arriving for the party. Suvreen is getting ready for the party in her room while Yuvraj and his father are welcoming the guests.

Samar:"Hey brother"
Yuvi: "Hey bro"
Samar: "Congrats dude...for your wedding and for the deal...I'm sorry that i couldn't attend your wedding"
Yuvi: "Thank you bro and its okay"
Samar: "Where is your wife?"
Yuvi: "She's getting ready...she'll be here in a while"
Samar: "Can't wait to meet her in person..."
Yuvi: "There she is"
 
Samar turns around; he saw a lady walking down the stairs in a blue dress looking so angelic. He widen his eyes  when he realized the beautiful lady is Suvreen
 
Samar: "You" he pointed to Suvreen
Suvi: "You"
Yuvi: "Have you guys met each other before?"
Suvi: "Yes...accidently" she smiled
Yuvi: "Bro let me introduce you...this is Suvreen Guggal and Suvreen this is Samar...Samar Raghuvanshi...the famous photographer, my bro and my bestie"
"Hello" Samar and Suvreen shake hands
 
The three of them was talking to each other when Yuvraj saw Sonia.He leaves the two of them to welcome her.
 
Samar and Suvreen Conversation

Samar: "You look beautiful tonight Miss Weirdo...I mean Mrs Khurrana"
Suvi: "Thank you...just call me Suvreen"
Samar: "Okay Suvreen and you can call me Samar"
Suvi: "Samar"
Samar: "You are really married...I thought you were joking last time"
Suvi: "I told ya"
Samar: "Guggal uh...so you are a princess"
Suvi: "Stop that, tell me something about youself"
Samar: "There's nothing much to tell"
 
Yuvraj and Sonia walk towards them

Samar: "Hello Soni"
Sonia: "Hi Samar"
Samar: "It's been a long time"
Sonia: "Yes"
Yuvi: "Soni...this is Suvreen"
Sonia greet her with a big smile
Yuvi: "She's my wife"
Sonia smile fades
Sonia: "You are married?"
Yuvi: "Yes"
Sonia: "Congratulations" she said it with a stern smile
 
All the time at the party Yuvraj was hanging around with Sonia. Suvreen realizes that Yuvraj still have feelings for her "He look like an innocent boy when he was with her" she smiled "he turns into perverted devil when he's with me" her smile fades and she feel bad thinking about it.
 
Samar was aware of Suvreen feelings and he decided to accompany her.
 
Samar: "Hey Miss weirdo"
Suvreen gave a deadly stare "What!?"
Samar: "You lost something"
Suvi: "No"
Samar: "Your smile...you look weird with a serious face..Miss Weirdo"
Suvi: "I will, only if you stop calling me Miss Weirdo"
Samar: "Woopsiiee...Okay Miss...uhmm...Suvreen"
Suvi: "Better" suvreen gave him a smile
 
Ramu: Suvreen ji...coffee
Suvi: "Thank you..kaka"

Samar and Suvreen stare to each other...both of them remembered the incident and burst into laughter
 
Sonia was aware of Samar and Suvreen; she can't help from feeling jealous looking at them.
 
Night (After Party)

Yuvi: "That was tiring" He throw himself on the bed
Suvi: "Ehem" Suvreen pretended to cough
Yuvi: "What?"
Suvi: "Your place is over there" she pointed to the couch
Yuvi: "Come on...this is not fair"
Suvi: "Good night" Suvi pull Yuvi off the bed
 
For the next couple months, things pretty much went the same. Yuvi and Suvi would continue to be nice for a moment, but still ends up arguing. They always found something to argue about, whether its about why Yuvi still has to sleep on the couch.. Or the times Yuvi tries to steal the knife from Suvi's pillow. Whenever Yuvi tries to be mean or strict towards her, he couldn't help but smile whenever she's in front of him.
 
Yuvi: "Come on Sweetheart! Be fair!" Yuvi whined. "I'm tired of sleeping on the couch..My back hurts!"
Suvi: "You are such a whiner,husband."
Yuvi: "Why don't you try sleeping on here for one night!" he argued and continued his stretching.
Suvi: "Hey.." she playfully poked him. "Hey.."
Yuvi: "Don't touch me!" he pretends to snap at her.
Suvi: "What do you want from me?"
 
He turned around and smiled at her.." I want.."😛😆
 
Suvi: "Hey Hey Hey.' she warned pointing her finger out at him. "Your perverted smile is coming back!"
Yuvi: "All I want is a massage." he claimed. "Is that too much to ask?"
 
Suvreen thought about it for awhile and she couldn't stand his mad face and his pouting lips. "Okay Okay" she agreed.
 
Yuvi laid flat on the bed and waited for his massage. "Oh, that feels so good!" he said out loud."
 
Suvi:"Will you bring down a tone?" she asked. "Your parents also lives in this house!"
Yuvi:"What do they have to do with us? We're married!"
 
What they didn't know was that, while they were having this conversation, their parents was outside their room listening.😲😆
 
Maan:"What are you doing listening outside their room honey?" Maan whispered.
Jaspreet:"Shh.." she hissed. "quiet, they might hear you."
 
Suvi:"Yuvraj! I can't keep doing this every night!" Suvi stated.
Yuvi:"What do you want to do then?"
Suvi:"Lets go with rock, paper, scissors." she replied. "Winners gets the top!"
Yuvi:"Fine.."
 
"1..2..3.." they counted.
 
Yuvi:"Rock Beats.. Paper baby, I get top." Yuvi cheered.
Suvi:"No fair.."
Yuvi:"Here's some extra pillows incase your back goes out." he laughed.
 
Jaspreet:"Oh my god.." Yuvi's mother covered her mouth after hearing what they said.🤣
Maan:"What's wrong?Let me listen." he said and press his ear to the door.
 
Suvi:"No fair Yuvi! Let me be on top!" She whined. "Your much stronger than I am!"
Yuvi:"No.." he closed his eyes and shook his head.
Suvi:"Fine! Be on top then! I'm going to end up dying because of you!" she went to turn off the lights and lay on the couch.
 
"What are kids now a days doing?!" Maan stated.🤣
 
Yuvi's mother pulled him back and told him to quiet it down. "Honey, if they keep being like this, we might have grandkids soon." she smiled and both of them giggled as they walked back to their bedroom.
 
Yuvi: "Sweetheart…" Yuvi whispered. "Are you mad?"
Suvi: "Shut up don't talk to me."
Yuvi: "Okay, but you have to forgive me in 3 days remember." he chuckled.
Suvi: "Then don't talk to me in the next 3 days!"
 
End of Chapter 22! : ❤️
 
 

Edited by vidya.G - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the 2 updates.I really like to read your ff.You write so well ,very interesting.
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Wow they were superb do continue soon...
And thanx for the pm..
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Amazing Updates Vidya
 
Loved it
 
Dont like Sonia I guess she will cause trouble maybe in the future for Yuvreen... 2nd update was really funny I couldnt stop luaghing Yuvi parents were listening to Yuvreen convo and took it the wrong way🤣
 
Do Continue Soon