Ariya Os : after Death

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Posted: 11 years ago

Doctors Doctor please inhen bacha lyn , please doctors try your best for saving her, please doctors hum sab ko in ki zarorat hai ETF Ko inki zarorat hai, please tum apni aankhen khuli rakho himat mat haro hum sab hain na tumharay sath , mei hun sameer hai, Shree chhotu sab hai tumharay sath Riya, tumhain kuch nahi hoga Riya. Mei tumhain kuch nahi honay dunga.

ACP Sameer rathode console his mate ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawate.

Sameer: Rawate Riya ko kuch nahi hoga tum sabar say kam lo aur hum hai na us k sath usay kuch nahi honay dyn day.

Shree: ha Sir Riya buhat bahadur hai, dekheay ga wo maut ko zaror shikast day day gi,.

Arjun: mujhay buhat dar lag rha hai rathode, agar usay kuch ho gaya toh..

Sameer: kuch nahi ho ga usay bhagwan par bharosa rakho rawate..

Suddendly he becomes calm very calm, he shows that Riya live aur Die doesnot effect him,  he shows that Riya never effect him…

Sameer: are you ok Rawate,

Arjun: ya I am fine.

Sameer:how was She?

Arjun: pata nahi..

Sameer: what pata nahi. Tu nay doctor say pocha nahi k uski condition kaisi hai.

Arjun:  wo zinda rahay ya mar jaey mujhay koi faraq nahi parta.

Sameer: ye tum keh rahay ho,

Arjun: ha mei keh raha hun..

Sameer; tum jantay bhi hi tum kis k baray mei ye sab bol rhay ho..

Arjun: janta hun..

Doctors comeout from the operation theater,

Shree: kya huwa doctor Riya, riya kaisi hai.

Doctors: hum pori koshish kar rhay hai par patient ki halat kharab hoti jar hi hai.

Sameer: please doctor unhen bacha lejiay.

Doctors: hum sirf koshish kar saktay hain Mr. Rathode baqai sab us upar walay k hath mei hai.

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After half an hour.

Sameer: kya huwa doctor aap khamosh kyun hai boltay kyun nahi.

Doctor: dekhay patient k pass buhat kam waqt bacha hai jis jis ko un say aakhiri bar milna hai mil lyn.

Shree: nahi doctor aaisa nahi ho sakta.

Chotu: please doctor kuch bhi Karen humari Riya ko nahi hona chaheay.

Doctor: mei samjh sakta hun aap sab par kya beet rahi hai, par hum kuch nahi kar saktay.

Sameer: please doctor.

Doctor: sorry Mr. rathode, dyr mat Karen un say mil lyn , shaid phir ye moqa na milay.

They rushes to the ICU.

Sameer: Riya tmhain kuch nahi hoga hum sab tumhain kuch nahi honay dyn gay.

Shree: ha Riya tumahin kuch nahi ho ga.

Riya: janti hun shree, jhotay umeedain mat do mujhay, bus khushi khushi mujhay bida kar do shree, janti hun zayda waqt nahi hai mere par bus tum apna , sameer sir ka, chotu ka khayal rakhna aur Arjun Sir  ka bhi..

Sameer: nahi Riya tumhain kuch nahi hoga

Chotu: Riya aankhen khuli rakho please..

She loses her breath she becomes unconscious.

Sameer: dotor doctor please jaldi aaen Riya ki pulses down ho rhi hai.

But Arjun quietly sit in the hospital bench , he doesnot respond any thing.

Sameer: arjun chal Arjun aakhri baar us say mil lay.

Arjun: nahi mei yahin theek hun, mujhay nahi milna us say.

Sameer: mat mil bad mei mat kehna k mei nay tujhay bataya nahi tha.,

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Sameer: kya huwa doctor .

Doctor: I am sorry she is no more..

Shree: nahi Riya tum humain chor k nahi ja sakti nahi ja sakti.,

Chotu also weaps by holdind her hand.

Sameer console both of them, he rushes out from ICU.

Sameer: khush ho na wo chali gai hai humain chor k afsos aakhri baar bhi tum nay usay hurt kya, tujh jaisa pathar dil mei nay kahin nahi dekha hai, Roshini hi nahi thi sab kuch kuch aur bhi log jeetay hai is dunaya mei jo tujh say juray hain… mujhay toh sharm aati hai, tut oh mar hi gaya tha par aaj tere aandar ki insanait bhi mar gai..

He stands and rushes to the ICU.

Arjun: shree Riya k antim sanskar ki tyari karo.

After that He leaves from there.

Shree: riya kitna pyar karti thi Arjun Sir say par Arjun sir us k sath aaisa Karen gay, Riyaka pyar itna ghehra tha k wo pathar ko bhi moam akr day par mujhay yakeen nahi aata k Riya k pyar ka ink dil par zara sa bhi aasar nahi huwa, Nahi Riya ka pyar itna kamzor nahi tha k wo Arjun Sir k dil ko nahi pighla sakay..

Sameer: in baton ka kya faida shree. Riya toh rahi hi nahi.

At Riya funeral ceremony.

Arjun: Shree riya ko ek suhagan ki tarha sajwao.

Sameer: tu yahan kyun aaya hai kya dekhnay aaya hai k wo mari k abhi bhi zinda hai, Toh sun wo mar chuki hai Arjun..

Arjun: shree shaid tum nay suna nahi mei nay kya kaha.

Shree: ok Sir.

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When they prepare her for her last journey , Arjun goes near her and put sindoor in her part.

Arjun: Riya mei is dunya mei tumhara nahi ho paya par mei tum say wada karta hun, us dunya mei mei sirf aur sirf tumhara rahunga Riya, ye dunya toh aarzi hai haqeqatan wo dunya abdi hai aur mei aur tum hamesha sath rahengay, I promise Riya is dunya mei agar mei Roshini ka that oh us dunya mei mei sirf tumhara rahunga, sirf tumhara apni Riya ka Arjun ban kar rahunga " I love you Riya"

He puts his head on her chest encircle his hand around her and close his eyes , his face shows that he peacefully sleep in her arms , he never wants that someone disturbs them, he peacefully sleep over her and take his last breath in her arms, They both sleep peacefully and begans their journey of new life in the heaven. Their soul meets in the sky and disappears in the clouds.

" kuch prem kahaniyan itni khas hoti hai jo zameen par nahi likhi jati,  jin ki pakezgi ki gawahi aasman deta hai, Aarsh rask kata hai apna kismet par. Kyun k kuch joriyan jannat mei banti hai, khuda kuch k kismet wahan aasman par likhta hai tak kay unhen is dunya ki buri nazar na lagay"

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Posted: 11 years ago
Such an emotional story.
Just loved it.
Loved the last part,specially...
Sach mein,"Some pairs are only made in heaven".
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!
ending mein jo apne likha just woow!!
pasand aaya ye os!:)
riya & arjun 4ver :( :)  
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wao! Really touching os.

But mostly, I lovd the ending lines of the story. They were really touching. Really, nice os dear!
Posted: 11 years ago
that was such a heart touching OS :) loved it
the last part was just superb :)
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mindblowing awesum loved it
made me cry

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wow..
Amazing update..
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very emotional but wonderful 
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OMG! Its so beautiful and very emotional.
U made me cry dear.
Amazing os. 👏 .
Love it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome yar...loved it...very touching...😊