ARIYA FF:Kya yahi pyaar Hai...???(Thread two link add) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Awesome..can't wait for next update.. pls update soon.. hope riya and baby will be fine..
Posted: 11 years ago
#62
great update :) loved it
loved their scene in the office :)
and he saw her crying :)
how sweet he dropped her home :)
hope nothing happens to riya and baby
can't wait to read more
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Di emotional kr dita...
1st epi ki yaad aa gyi
beautiful sng
omg poor arjun...
u left me sobbing
amazing
loved it di
do cont soon
eagerly waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Nice update yrr..Arjun was in so much pain...update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
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"Nahi malom tha..
kitane dard hai tere dil main..
phir se dekhana chahongi tere khoe mushkan ko.."


SCENCE-
Arjun watching riya outside the glass door..
he tuched the door n wishper..
Riyaaa..
a deep pain sending in his heart..


"mujhase ye jindagi lagti kyun ajanavi dhoop bhi jhanv bhi..
hai her pal ye nayee..
jaane kahan se aya hoon ...
jaane kahan kho jaonga..
kal rahon main phool they aaj hai kanto ki chubhan..
dhup bhi jhanv bhi hai her
pal ye nayee...   "
~~~

flashback-
Scence shift-etf office..
humm ye arjun sir etana bure bhi nahi jitana maine soncha tha,
koe to baat hai..jiske karan sir etana rud behave kerte hai..
riya talking to herself n murched toward etf office..
lagta hai koe kise ke ke khayalon main es kader khoya hai..ke apne doston ko bhool gaye..
Ri-ohh sut up shree kya bakbaas ker rahe ho..
ehsa kuch nahi hai,
Sh-oh realy ri main kab se avaj de raha hoon per tumne ek baar bhi nahi suna..
Chotu-chaaker kya hai ri..
Ri-Chotu tum bhi..
Sh-kuch to hai jo tum hamse chupa rahi hoo..
Ri-ehsa kuch nahi hai guys..
or vaise tum meri chodo..
tum apni baato shree..tumhen koe mila ya nahi..
Ch-are ye kya batayega riya..ese apne lapy se eshaq ladane main phursat mile ..tab to ye kise ladki se eshq ladayega..
chotu n riya giv highfy..hahheehhaaa
Sh-very funy guys..vaise chotu tumhen to ye bhi nahi pata teri,11:30 Ka naam kya hai..
shreee...are chood chotu kya ker raha hai..
chotu lift shree in his arms..
ye kya masti majak chal raha hai guys..
tum trio yahan khade ho ker time pass ker rahe ho ..or main kan se tum teeno ka wait ker raha hoon..
trio turned n saw rathor standind there..in very angry mood..
sorry sir..vo hum to bus apas main god morning wish ker rahe they.
Ra-ye kon saa tarika hai gud morning wish kerne ka

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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Rathor looking in shree n chotu direction..
chotu imediatly put shree in ground,
Ra-main jaan sakta hoon ye kya ho raha tha..
Ch-voo sir voo shree ke per main thodi choot lag gaye the..main to bus usaki help ker..
Ra-ohh just Shutup chotu..
IN CONFENCE ROOM-
All set arround the table..
n disscused about the new case..
sudenly one small boy knockthe door..
riya-yes kon ho aap..
boy-vo yahan se kisene cutting
chai mangvaye the..
Ri-what chai..ehhuu en glasses main kon chai piyega,ye kitani un higenics hai..
Arjun looked her with corrner of his eyes..
yes vo cutting chai,maine mangwai hai..
All looked toward arjun. direction expect rathor..
Ri-sir ager aap kahen to main aap ke liye coffee bana deati hoon..
but arjun didnt reply..just took his cutting chai n take first ship..
riya chotu n shree wishper..
Ri-chotu ye cutting chai kya hooti hai..
kuch special hoota hai esmain kya..
Chotu..in bit teasing way..
vo kya hai riya..ye jo glass hote hai jisamain vo chai dalte hai..enhen kabhi dhote nahi..
sh-haan riya..tabhi to ese cutting chai kehaten hai..
Ri-what kya keh rahe ho tum dono..sir es glasses main kaise chai pee sakte hai..
Riya culdnt control herself n say sir aap ehse kaise chai pee sakte hai..
Ar-kyun tumhen koe problem hai..
Sh-riyaaa..shree shouted from behind..
Ri pehale mujhe sir se..
shree pulled toward him n wishper her eyes..riya pagal ho ,
ye kya ker rahi ho tum,
hum to bus majak ker rahe they..
Ri-what tum dono ye sab mere sath he kyun kerte ho .
sir mujhe kaise ghur ker dekh rahe hai..
She smile n say..
ekk ek coffee ho jaye ..
chotu-haan meri liye bhi do cup..
Sh-haan meri bhi ek cup.
Ri-or rathor sir aap ke liye.
Ra- haan
Arjun stil waiting his ans.
tumne bataya nahi
Ri-Ohh god ab sir se kaise kaho..riya give a light smile n say no sir ..koe problem nahi.



Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
waiting dear
full of emotion
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
must tha part dr next update jaldi krna i w8 riya or arjun ki shadi kaisai hoe
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
correct want shadi wala part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
nice update...

waiting to know more...
loved their encounter in the dark room...

lovely..