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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dmegha

Awesome updates buddy!

Thanks for the PM.




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi25031990

fantastic update i m speechless very nice dearCan't wait to read the next part

Update soon😊


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just wait for few minute



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Cindrella3

Amazing...!!!πŸ‘Loved it. Please PM me when you continue.



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n sure i will pm u
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arnavkhushi1206

Awww loved the way Arjun took Riya her house and talked to her aunt but u didn't lyk the aunt at all I mean she's supposed to support riy not talk bad to her 😑
The doctor scene was good...finally some sense comes into Arjun 😊
He arranged for their marriage awww 😳
Loved how Riya hugged Arjun and even he hugged her back 😳
And yes finally they got married!!!(doing happy dance lol) πŸ˜ƒ
I lived this new caring side of Arjun!!!
Precap sounds interesting!! 😊




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i m so happy after reading ur comment...




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
finger cross hop u like...
PART=16
"Dhere dhere tere sath a new shurouat huye hai..."


SCENCE:-PRESENT--
Arjun took a long breath..
n marched toward riya's room,
He stood outside riya's room,
is i open her bedroom door or not..
arjum tried to convince himself,
finaly he prepare a mentle note himself or..
opened her bed room door..
Arjun looked here n there as he first time looked his room..
(Ariya lived seperatly after marrige)
Waoo room r perfectly organized..
no its not his first time in riya's room..
but every time whenever he comes..
Its always looks neat n clean..
arjun lightly smiled on himself..n muttered himself..
obiously riya ka room hain..saaf to hoga hai..
miss higenic frenk..her chij ko ehse obserb karegi..jaise pata nahi kitane jums hain esamain..
(I hop u enjoys litle litle thinkg of riya)
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Flashback:-
Riya yelled on choree..
ehse kya ghur rahe ho tum dono..
Chotu in concered voiced..
Ch-riya ye tere ankhen etani sweelling kyun lag rahi hai,
or tera face
(comes closer to her n pointing toward her face)
etana dull kyun lag raha hai,
Ri-kya bol raha hai chotu thik to hai..(toched her faxe with her hand)
Ch-noo riya Ehsa lag raha hai,jaise sari raat nahi soe hai,
Shree also comes closer n obserbing her face..
In bit teasing way--
Sh-Are chotu to bhi na..kuch nahi samajhata..teri ek gf uske baad bhi tu sawal puch raha hai..
thoda dimag per jor dal..
Ri-shree tum ehsa ka samjhane ke koshish ker rahe ho chotu ko..(She looks enquirly to shree)
shree smiled evily n reply..
Are chotu nahi samjha..kal he to eski esale samjhe ya samjhayon ke sath shadi huye hai..
To esake or arjun sir ke kal raat first..Samjhaye ya samjhayon,
(says in arjun style n start laughing madly)
Shree kya bakbaas ker raha hai..riya yelled on shree,
tumhen to main abhi batati


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Hoon roko tum..
Shree start running..
Are riya etani hipper kyun hoo rahi hai..
Maine galat kya kaha..
mujhe nahi pata tha arjun sir etane naghty honge,
ke tumhen sari raat etana tank kiya,
Ri-Jaisa tum sonch rahe ho vaisa kuch nahi..main sari raat soo nahi paye kyunki vo arjun..
choree didnt listen n continue his teasing..
Ch-Dammit yakeen nahi hota..(act as rathore sir)
kadus ne sach main riya se shadi ker le,
Ri-what kadus tumne arjun sir ko kadoos kaha..chotuuu
Sh-haan chotu mujhe bhi ek pal le liye yakeen nahi huya jab..arjun sir ne phon per apni or riya ke shadi ke arrengement karne ko kaha..
Kuch to chut raha hai chotu
(act as arjun sir)..
Kya chot rahha haii shree..
Trio shocked n turned toward the voice..
Now trio ke avaj he jaise rook gaye hoo..
Shree wishper to chotu
(ye arjun sir kahan se aa gaye or kahin enhone sun to nahi liya..)
yr kuch bhi ho sakta hai shree enke chehare ka gussa dekh ker jinda rehane ke chance bahoot kam najer aa rahe hai..
Riya looked up to face
arjun ..
but she felt as arjun avoid her..
when she looked toward arjun ,Arjun turened his face to other side,
Riya (to herself )i m sorry arjun sir maine jaan bujh ker kuch nahi kiya..
mari esmain koe galti nahi,
--
.
few time before-
.
it was the first night of riya in arjun house..
(Vo kaphi koshish ker rahi the sone ke per uff ye kambakt neand jaise aaj hide n sik khail rahi the)
she lying on a bed looking at the wall clock,
it was showing 4 o'clock..
the whole night she is constantly looking the watch..
she has now no patient to lie on a bed ,soon she got up from the bed,
Aaj raat etani badi kyun lag rahi hai..
Riya opened her bedroom window..
its dark outside..cool airs comes inside..make a shiver down her baody,
she hugs himself..
she got irritated not realizing its mor 4 am..n she woke


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wok up early ups sorry no early accualy..she is not sleeping whole night..
due to this her face looks dul n her eyes gets red or lilte swelling easaly seen in her eyes..
She didnt know why she felt restless..

may be its new place for her..or may be its a first night of her wedding..
n nothing happened anything...as every girl think in her first night..
the night of lv..
the night of turst..
the night when two soul become melt n made a one..
she is also a normle girl n her dreams is also similer or look like normale girl..
.
She felt hungry..but she didnt know how to cook..except her coffee n his tea..his special cutting chai..
she smiled herself..muttered(poora ek din yes poira ek din lagaya tha arjun sir ke special cutting chai sikhane main..
or vo bhi us chai vale se..bechara kitana pareshan ho gaya tha..(she start gigling like a small child)
per chotu usane use etana dara diya..bechare ko majbori main mujhe chai sikhani he padi),
she goes kitchen for making somthing for herself..
arjun sir ka kitchen to kaphi well organized hai..
ups per mujhe to coffee or arjun sir ke chai nahi chai nahi special cutting chai ke alava kuch ata nahi..
(she pouted her mouth)
finaly she decided making coffee for herself..
.
she took two sipp of coffee..
Yaak..
ye coffee ka test etana aajeeb kyun lag raha hai..
she feel vomting n imediatly rushed to washroom(Inside her room)
after few minutes of cold shawer she comes out washroom..wrrapped around one long tawal arroung her..
when she goes washroom..she forget to take her dress but soon she realize,usaki yahan koe bhi dress nahi hai,
unwere the fact that arjun already present there..
when she comes out..
she was lost in her thought..so she cant notice arjun in her room..
Arjun marched here n there..as he wauting for riya..when he heared...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part piya love it pleas cont soon πŸ‘
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For riya..
Arjun imediatly rushed there n hold her by her shoulder..
riya feel his hand tough on her bare shouder..
its increasing her heart bit..
Ar-riya r u all right.. i meen jab main room se bahar aya to maine tumhen tumhare room ke taraf bhagte huye dekha..
Arjun ask her the same Q again..but she didnt speek..
She is like a satue..She lower her graze ..
voo oov o vo..but she didnt able to complete...
When arjun's graze fall litle lower..now he froz like ice..
arjun looked her from top to bottom..she was only in single tawal..n his hand on her bare shoulder..
for few second arjuns looked her without blinking his eyes..
but soon he snnaped out his trace n imediatly removed his hold n tured to opposite side..
without waisting any time he rushed toward the door
(loll lagta hai sharma gaya
bachha .. )
he opened door but before leaving(Without turning back)
Es ward room main roshani ke kuch dress padi hongi..
tum chaho to usamain se koe ek..
Arjun ko room se gaye 15 minute se opper ho gaye but she stil stood there without taking any single minute..
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she snapped out her thought when choree waves their
hand in front for her..
Riya ab to ghurana band ker tere samjha samjhayon chale gaye..
both easly saw her shocking n blushing face togethere..
--
last suside case is stil pending..
so all working on a case..
rathore enters in conference room..
N yelled..
Damittt abhi tak koe surag nahi mipa hai..
mujhe to lagta hai ye ek sidha sadha suside case hai..
Ar-ye koe suside case nahi hai rathore..use mara gaya hai..
Ra-tum etane yakeen se kaise keh sakte hoo..
usake suside note main saaf saaf likha tha..ke vo shadi se pehale he maa banane vali hai,
(at the same time both ariya looked each othere,but arjun imediatly turned his face)
Or uske boy friend ne usase shadi kerne se
usak