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Posted: 11 years ago

Or kya kaha tha apne..
ye kiska paap hai..
ye mera bachha hai..
Arjun suryakant rawte ka bachha..
samjhe aap, or riya akeli nahi hai,
riya looks up to face him..
that was the first time she feel complete..she feel hidden happiness inside her heart..
BG MUSICS--

Koe dard raha na dil main
na koe khalaah..
har khwahish puri huye hai tujhe paa jo liya..


vo meri responsibility hai,
meri jimedari ...
so dont u dare to say any harash word to riya..
arjun stil holding her hand n moved toward his suv..
her eyes still looking him..
she can feel first time lv in his concerned..

door mujhase ho na kabhi na
kerna ye ek ehsan..
ye kasoor hai mera ke yakin kiya hai..
dil teri he khateer rekh chod dia hai..

riya snapped her dream,
Masi shout from behind..
waoo kya baat hai,
Tumne ye to bataya nahi tumhara or riya ka rista kya hai..
Ye sirf tumhari..mera matlab ye shadi ka koe erada bhi hai ya..
arjun tightend his grip..
but he controled his anger..
Riya try to remove his hold..
chodiye sir..
let me go..
arjun sir..i say leav me..
But arjun is arjun..
Arjun hold her shoulder n shouted..
Riyaaa what ur problem..
Tum chahati kya hoo..
Riya..in very low voice as no power left in her body..
main bus apko khush dekhana chahti hoon sir..
main nahi chahti meri vajaha se log apke baare main..
she feel her eyes heavy..
She feel dizzaly..
before she faal arjun hold her in his strongs arms..
Arjun im his mind..
how riya how..
how could u so selfish..
meri vajah se tumhen etana kuch..or tum phir bhi mere baare main..
Arjun lift riya in his arms..
carefuly put her back sit of suv n drive toward hospital..
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Doc to arjun-
Aap etane lapervahi kaise ker sakte hai..
unhen proper rest or care ke jarorat hai..
unki candition dekh ker lagta hai vo pichale,


Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


kuch time se kaohi stress..
dekhiye..
dekhiye aap ek pati hoker etani badi laperbahi kaise ker sakte hai..
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doctors n riya masi word hitting his mind ..
he call someone n give some instruction..
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the person is non other then arjun..
When he saw tense expression on riya face..
he follow riya..
Arjun saw riya goes in one house..
arjun goes near n try to looked inside..
he heared all conoversation between her n her masi..
arjun was very hurt..he feel somone stabbed inside his heart..
n when he saw riya comes outside n tried to wipped her tears..
but she fail..bez her tears didnt wanna to stoped..
that time arjun wanna to consol her but why..
is he is responsible for this..
or somthing is else..
arjun stoped himself..
he tried his best to stay away from her..
not bez he wanna to run his responsibilty..
he wanna to run her bez his past experinece..
if sikander ya any other harm her ya his unborn baby..then..
that was the last day of him..
but morning case changed every think..
The girl sucide bez she is pregnent n her bf refuse to marry her..
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no arjun no tum apni responsibilty se bhag nahi sakte..
tum riya ko ehsi haalat main akela nahi chood sakte..
finaly he decided n goes to riya's cabine..
n dragged her to her masi house,but he didnt think onces time about her n his marrige..
he just wanna to take her responsibilty but her masi n doc word again hitts his mind..
finaly he decided n call somone..
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He goes riya room(hospital room) she try to get up..
but arjun stoped her..
kahan jane ke koshish ker rahi ho riya..
Ri-sir plz apko meri phiker kerne ke koe..
Arjun without listening her lift her in his arms n again forcly sit her in suv..
That time not riya says anythink nor arjun..
Arjun stoped his suv outside the temple..
Sir hum mandir main kya kerne aye hai..



Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read all update...
fantastic wrk..love to read more..
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Scence-Arjun stoped his suv outside the temple..
Ri-sir hum yahan kya ker rahe hai..
Without giving any ans arjun again lift her in his arms..
Riya-arjun sir aap ye..
Arjun comes inside temple..
(He slowly put her on a floor)
she looked shocking in arjun..
Yahan kya hone bala hai arjun..kisi ke shadi hai kya..
Ar-riya stop looking me like that..
Chup chap yaha mere sath baide..
Ri-matlab..?
matlab ye sab tumhari or arjun sir ke shadi ke arengement haii..
riya turned her face toward the voice..
the whol etf team standing there..
Ri-What..? ye kya majak hai shree..
Ar-ye koe majak nahi ye riya..ye sach hai..
but riya refuse n run outside..
riya meri baat sono..
Rawte ye sab ho kya raha hai..meri to kuch samajh nahi aa raha..sameer yelled,
Arjun didnt say anythink..
Arjun wanna to go outside but rathor stop..
roko rawte..tum riya se jaberjasti shadi nahi ker sakte..ager vo tumse shadi nahi kerna chahti to..
but arjun didnt wait for sameer to complete his word n runs behind riya..
Riya roko meri baat sono..
Dammit ye ho kya raha hai..
rathore n choree r confused..
arjun call shree n say to arrange his n riya wedding in temple..but the reasion behind his marrige he didnt told..
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Riya sit outside the stares..
Arjun comes closer n sit..
both didnt face each other..
Arjun brock the scilence..
Riya main nahi janta tum mere baare main kya sonchati hoo,
or main es baat ke bhi koe garenty nahi de sakta ke ,
main kabhi tumse pyaar ker paonga..
but that time..
hum dono ko ek dosare ke jarorat hai..
not bez of us..bez of our unborn baby..
use bhi apne parent ke sath rehane ka hak hai,
mari galti ke saja maine use nahi de sakta..plz samajhane ke koshish karo..
its enough for riya..
she badly needed this..
She brock down n hug arjun.
n say between sobing...


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Posted: 11 years ago

arjun sir i know bina parents ke jina kaisa hota hai..
main apne bachhe ko vohi taklif nahi de sakti..
per main apko bhi..
Arjun just lightly hug her n console..
Riyaaa..relex main hoon na..
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after few minute all richual r completed..
rathore did riya kanyadaan..
ariya take seven rounds around holi fire..(Holding each others hands,)
after that arjun put sindoor on her partion..
n then mangalsutra..
now in all rights riya is arjun's wife..
yes now she is mrs arjun suyrakant rawte..
her happiness has no limite today..
not bez now she is arjun wife..
but today she feel complete herself..
she slitly touched her belly..
as wanna to say her child..
now u r secure my baby..
papa giv u so much love..
he panish every one which try to hurm u..
when she touched her belly that was not hidden by arjun..he also wanna to touch her..not bez he wanna to touch riya ..bez he wanna to feel his baby..
that was secure inside her riya..
he wanna to promise his baby..
papa always protect u n ur mom..
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Arjun welcome riya in his house..
arjun tried to open door look n riya stood bit away..she was stil confused..
now all equestion r changed..
ups..vo to us raat ke baad he chane ho gaye..
but now...she is not riya..she is mrs riya arjun rawte..
I know arjun sir..apka paar mujhe kabhi nahi milega but apke conceren main jo apka paar chupa hai mare liye vohi kaphi hai..
she snapped out her thought..
when arjun shout her name..
Riya vahan kya ker rahi ho darwaja khul gaya hai..
She feel nervous she took light step toward his house..
nooo not his now its her to..
a litle smile crept on her face,
she comes inside..
she lift her graze here n there..
it was first time when she comes in his house..
she thinks first there was a many picture arjun of n roshani..but no..no pic of rosh there..
Arjun saw riya



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Posted: 11 years ago

Ar-Riya kuch chahiye tumhen..she just nodded in negative..
arjun show riya to her room..
yes her room..her seperate room..

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present-
SCENCE-ARJUN HOUSE
Arjun took one toy..that was he already brought for his child..
arjun house..
papa promise u that day baby but papa failed to protect u n ur mom..
tumhare mom bahoot achhi hai baida..
vo apke papa se or aap se bahoot pyaar kerti hai..
per mujhe nahi pata tha ager hum dono main se kisi ko choos kerna pade to vo mujhe karegi..
just bez to save my life..
but dont warry ..
i promise kuch nahi hone donga apko or apki mama ko...
He goes inside riya's bedroom..
n many past scence thinks again flashes his mind..
TBC---
Beautiful romentic ariya moment..
choree tease riya..
one good news...
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sorry jayada lamba ho gaya..
not find stop point
i kno i kno sad tract tha past main..
but no warry coming part is romentic or full of fun..
or present main bhi kuch hone bala hai...
mast ya bore jaldy jaldy batana..
plllzzz ab bata bhi doo..
etane nakhare achhe nahi..
verna hamen bhi nakhare karna ata haiii



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Posted: 11 years ago

read in one go 
this update super se bhi uper tha
loved arjun concern for riya n her baby

story is moving in r8 track
u hav beautifully potrayed the inner turmoil of arjun
love it dear
last but not least
update soon
Edited by kgmu86 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved this part... Arjun's concern for Riya nd his babay ws so touching... oh so Riya chose Arjun over their baby nd protected his life... continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome
so riya n arjun k shadi hi hi gayi..
Arjun care fr her n cute baby too...
The masii aaggrrr..
Uski toh aisi ki taise..

I wish dono bach jaye .
I cant see them like this..
N arjun ko dobara tute hue nhi dekh sakti...

Awesome , full emotion n tragedy.
Loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update πŸ˜ƒ
Arjun telling Riya's maasi that Riya is pregnant with his child was too good
The way Arjun married Riya was different but really nice
Loved Arjun's concern for Riya and their baby
You've wonderfully described Arjun's disturbance from the situation
What happened that Riya had to choose Arjun between their baby?
The story's getting more and more interesting in every update!
Can't wait to read the next part
Update soon πŸ˜Š


Edited by krinal5chhayal - 11 years ago