SS - A Night to Remember(Awarded) - Page 13

loved the story thanks for sharing!

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved the story thanks for sharing!

👏
that was beautiful...

Indu - first of all, thank you for inviting me into your world of colours - your Pyaar ke rang.

You write beautifully - evocatively. I can visualize each and every scene - the details are just right. Enough to help the reader see - and stops short of overwhelming the scene unfolding, the players, the emotions.

This was such a sweet tale. I loved that you translated it into a family moon - seems to fit right into the khaandaan. And what i liked especially was how you built Khushi's realization and made her free to feel her own desire and sensuality. 👏 very well done indeed.

I don't know about ranking ASR with Mr. Darcy. After all Mr. Darcy is nearly every girl's first crush/dream man... but ASR is probably quite close 😆.

I think i told you already - but i love your concept of Pyaar ke rang. Love is a multi-hued emotion and there are so many kinds of love. I am looking forward to Anjali's story and perhaps we will get some brother bonding stories too? (You may have covered that already -  i am following your advice and going in sequential order. Though i may jump the gun to Anjali's story...)

There is one thing i noticed ... will pm you with examples when i get the chance.

Once again - thank you for sharing these lovely tales.

All the very best,
Kat

Originally posted by: kdsubs

Indu - first of all, thank you for inviting me into your world of colours - your Pyaar ke rang.

You write beautifully - evocatively. I can visualize each and every scene - the details are just right. Enough to help the reader see - and stops short of overwhelming the scene unfolding, the players, the emotions.

This was such a sweet tale. I loved that you translated it into a family moon - seems to fit right into the khaandaan. And what i liked especially was how you built Khushi's realization and made her free to feel her own desire and sensuality. 👏 very well done indeed.

I don't know about ranking ASR with Mr. Darcy. After all Mr. Darcy is nearly every girl's first crush/dream man... but ASR is probably quite close 😆.

I think i told you already - but i love your concept of Pyaar ke rang. Love is a multi-hued emotion and there are so many kinds of love. I am looking forward to Anjali's story and perhaps we will get some brother bonding stories too? (You may have covered that already -  i am following your advice and going in sequential order. Though i may jump the gun to Anjali's story...)

There is one thing i noticed ... will pm you with examples when i get the chance.

Once again - thank you for sharing these lovely tales.

All the very best,
Kat

 

This was really incredible. The most-wanted honeymoon and consummation track that we never got..written in the best way possible. It was really wonderful.

Indu,

Awesome story...u wrote it in a beautiful way.ur description of Kerala was so lively,I just felt like seeing all those u wrote...the last chapter is my favorite,u wrote it in a decent yet romantic way. 👏 👏 just found this ss...started reading ur other works.loved reading this ss.

read all parts together..
loved it..
beautifully written.. 😊

ur writing style is very similar to appurs; she also loves arnav and so do i. i love the way uve portaryed arnav's single-minded love towards khushi. isnt this the very essence of our IPK which was threatened to be destroyed by the sheetal track