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Hey I Just Read your story
And I Loved it <3
One Of My Friends told me to read it Thats how I Got
here and I am glad that she recommended it <3
Simply Loved the whole story <3
Love Marrie x
Originally posted by: aruni50218
So here I am... as promised... 😃
Was this your very first Arshi story?If so, I must tell you, THIS IS ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!!After the hasty departure of Shyamu in the show, had we got this, kitna achcha hota... Loved Arnav's smartly planned foreplay to the most amazing suhaagraat ever - Beautiful location, dresses, the distance before the union, the play that steamed up Khushi's senses... LOVED the gentleman in Arnav, even though being the experienced one in the matter, let Khushi voice the need when she's ready...Needless to say, the last part of the last part was awesome! ☺️I thought your recent OS - "Arnavji, I wanna beep beep" was the hottest piece written by you - but, PHEW!! This beats it!Fantastic writing Indu 👏I am demanding more OSs like this on Arshi after PIPC 😉Love Ya!
Originally posted by: lazyleaves
Congratulations 😃
This is a story of Arnav and Khushi on their honeymoon along with the Raizadas after the Shyam fiasco had ended. Our show didn't give us a honeymoon track - a track that we and our couple deserved. So what the CVs can't give, the authors of the forum do.What I loved most about this story was the imagery which was created in my head of the beautiful Kerala. I have never been there, so I got to travel it through this SS. Along with being a good read on ArHi coming closer, this SS was also culturally educative one as I got to learn quite a few things about Keralite culture.A very short story of only 6 parts but very effectively written making me yearn for more from her.Thank you :)Sorry for the late wishes. Feel free to use the siggy 😊 Do mention in the title that this OS has been awarded 😳
ArHilicious Droolers #4: Rabba Ve ...
Originally posted by: lazyleaves
Congratulations 😃
This is a story of Arnav and Khushi on their honeymoon along with the Raizadas after the Shyam fiasco had ended. Our show didn't give us a honeymoon track - a track that we and our couple deserved. So what the CVs can't give, the authors of the forum do.What I loved most about this story was the imagery which was created in my head of the beautiful Kerala. I have never been there, so I got to travel it through this SS. Along with being a good read on ArHi coming closer, this SS was also culturally educative one as I got to learn quite a few things about Keralite culture.A very short story of only 6 parts but very effectively written making me yearn for more from her.Thank you :)Sorry for the late wishes. Feel free to use the siggy 😊 Do mention in the title that this OS has been awarded 😳
ArHilicious Droolers #4: Rabba Ve ...
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