Nicely written...it's beautiful how Riya despite having sort of given up, still find someone who loves her irrevocably.
I would have loved if there was more to the flashback... and Arjun, Rathod, Shree n Chotu would have really felt guilty for what they did to Riya. And for that... Anant is a strong enough character. Even Riya's diary could have been involved.
You can still add more to this, as another sequel... And elaborate their guilt.
Hope you recover very soon. And get away from canolas and hospitals. Take care and get well soon. Edited by Arya1991 - 11 years ago
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