OS: Mera Jeevan Kora Kagaaz Season2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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As everyone loved the story,
OS: Mera Jeevan Kora Kagaaz, i am up here with the sequel,named,
OS: Mera Jeevan Kora Kagaaz Season 2.
Hope you all like it.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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jaldi Zebbie... m waiting...
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Five years have passed since Riya died in a brutal car accident.

A person was standing in front of her large portrait size photo.

The photo had the dimple smile of Riya.

Person: Riya,aaj ke din tum iss duniya se chali gayi.Mere zindagi mein tumhari jagah koi puri nahi karsakta,koi bhi nahi.Jab bhi main tumhari diary parhta hu,mujhe bohut dard hota hai ki,kaash,main tab hota tumhare paas tumhare dard baatne keliye.Tumhare dosto ne bhi tumse mooh morh liya.Tum jisse pyaar karti thhi,usne bhi.Jinko tumne apna mentor maana thha,usne bhi. Tumne mere liye apni ateet ko bhi bhula diya just to make sure we live happily. Aaj ke din,main Bhagwaaan se prarthna karunga ki har aadmi ko tumhari jaisi caring and loving wife mile.I miss you a lot,Sweetheart.Anya bhi miss karti hai tumhe bohut.

The person was none other than DCP Anant Raizada,Riya's husband and her academy friend.

Before Riya's death.


Flashback.


He came to know about Riya and her love for Arjun through that diary of Riya which was given by the orphanage owner,where Riya was brought up.As he read the diary,his eyes welled up.
He immediately took her address from the orphanage owner and went to her house.

As he entered her house,he found it spotless and clean. He thought to himself,"Meri Riya,the hygiene Freak".

As she came down from her room,she saw Anant.She was shocked to see him after 4 years.She immediately went to him and hugged him tightly.
Anant(breaking the hug and wiping her tears): Riya,kaisi ho? I missed you so much.Tumhare saath itna kuch hua,aur,mujhe batane ki koshish bhi nahi ki?
Kis mitti ki bani ho tum,Riya?
Riya: Anant,ek baar main zindagi mein bohut kuch seh chuki hu.Tumhe batake tumhara gussa aur nahi barhana chahti thi.Isiliye,nahi bataya.Anant,please mujhe maaf kardena.Maine tumhara dil ko thhes pohuchaya hai.Mere liye tumhare pyaar ko nahi pehchaan payi.Kisi galat insaan se pyaar kar baithi.Jiski pyaar ke rang ko lekar main apni zindagi ki kora kagaaz pe rang bharna chahti thhi,woh toh nahi hua,par,aab hoga? Kya tum doge mera saath? Kya tum banoge mere humsafar,mere humnava? Kya tum apne pyaar ke haseen rang se bhardoge mere zindagi ke kore kagaaz pe? Kya tum mere iss bejaan zindagi mein aake khushiyo se bharoge? Kya tum mujhse shaadi karoge,Anant? Main janti hu,yeh thora jaldi hai,par,main apne ateet ko bhulake tumhare saath apni saari zindagi bitana chahti hu.I want to surrender my my present and future to you.
Anant: Riya... Yeh sunne keliye main kitna taras raha thha.I love you,Riya.Agar tumhe thora waqt chahiye toh,its ok.I will wait.
Riya: Intezaar... Intezaar karna mujhse nahi hoga.Main sirf aur sirf ek simple si shaadi chahti hu,jahaan tumhare kuch log honge aur mere kuch log.
Anant: Ok.
Riya: Anant,mujhe tumhare pyaar aur saath ki zarurat hai.Kya tum doge mera saath?
Anant: Zaroor... Dunga... Humesha keliye.

Few days went like that.Riya and Anant were married in a simple function organized by Riya's orphanage.

After a few days,Commissioner ordered Anant to visit Mumbai ETF Headquarters.

Anant went to ETF Headquarters.Everybody saluted him,as he was the newly appointed DCP of Mumbai Police.
Rathod and Arjun were shocked to see him.
Rathod: Anant... Tum yahaan?
Anant: apne senior se aise baat karte hai,ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod?
Arjun: Anant,humare beech mein yeh senior junior kabse aane laga?
Anant: Tum toh wohi Arjun Suryakant Rawte ho na jo ek samay mera jigri dost hua karta thha??? Aur,tum Rathod??
Sorry,main apna intro dena bhool gaya.
Main DCP Anant Raizada. Mere wife se miloge,i mean...tumdono ki bhabi se?
Come,sweetheart...Andar aao.Darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai.

She slowly came inside.A girl in her mid 20's,having a mangalsutra around her neck and a pinch of sindoor on her forehead parting.
Arjun,Rathod,Shree and Chotu were shocked to their wits to see Riya as Anant's wife.
Yes,it was the truth.
Thw truth is that,Riya Mukherjee is now Riya Anant Raizada.
Anant: Meet my loving wife,Mrs.Riya Anant Raizada.jisse tumne thukraya thha,Arjun.
Arjun: Are you ok,Anant? Tumne Riya se shaadi ki?
Anant: Shut up,Arjun.Bohut sunn liya.Isiliye,pure department mein tumhare zero tolerant attitude keliye tum jaane jaate ho.
Tum,Shree aur Chotu..Yeh toh tumhari dost thi,toh,tumne isse apne mooh kaise morh liya,huh...Dosto ke naam pe daagh ho tum dono.Aur,Rathod.Riya used to consider u as her brother and mentor,par,tumne bhi apna mooh morh liya usse.Chhii...
Pyaar background,status,paise,pehchaan dekke nahi hoti hai.
Pyaar hota hai dil ki baatein jankar,dil ko samajhkar,jo tum nahi samajh paaye.

Flashback ends.

Anant starts the puja which he had kept for Riya's shanti.
Anant(silently to Riya): Riya,mujhe maaf kardena.Main tumhare zindagi ke aakhri kore kagaaz pe pyaar ke do boondh se bhar nahi paya.Tum na sahi,par,tumhari parchayi,Anya,meri zindagi ki kore kagaaz ke kitaab ki panno mein pyaar aur khushi ke boondo se bhar degi,vada raha mera.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I know,this part doesnt have any relation to the past one,but,i have tried as much as possible to keep that essence of the previous one.
Hope u all liked it.
If u find it boring,please tell me..i will happily accept my mistakes.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Why did u kill her??? culd hv shwn her happy nd content in her life aftr all hurdles she had to go through...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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why did u kill her?? u should have showed her happy whole life!! where roshini dies... n arjun repenting!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awesome. Its emotional. But very sweet. Thank god arjun ke badh bhi someone came for riya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the mixed reviews.
I know u guys have expected the sequel to be more interesting and happier,but,believe me,i couldnt write anything better,coz,i am myself very sick.Admitted in the hospital,writing with the hand which has a canola with it.
I know this has been a crap writing and i am myself,really very disappointed with my work,especially,this one.
Once again,i am really sorry.
Please forgive me.
Thanks.
Zebbie.

(jootis,chappals,tamatars,andes,aloos are allowed)
Posted: 11 years ago
#9
😭

Bas yaar ab aur kitna rulogi...i wish she was alive! Riya...miss her too much!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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zebbieee!!! awsomeee!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏

i m happy dat riya got some one in her lyf who loves her!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

riya died????!! 😭 😭 😭