Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 65

Magnificent piece of writing👏 loved it😊 her guru and guide passed away so sad,😭 loved malti and radhama, ❤️yash aarti convo too good 👍🏼❤️and of course naanimaasi fearless👍🏼👏😎 entry and i admired her courage,😃 description about aartis painting excellent!!!!👏 oh dear mesmerized by your writing,😎 Maasha Allah kissi ka nazar na lage. waiting for your next update. hugs dear ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Magnificent update. It's like I am watching a film. All the characters are so beautifully written. Pandit dadu, malti, radha, all are so kind to Aarti. And Professor Sharma who gave Aarti opportunity to work, that's so nice of him. And Yash and Aarti's silent conversation where he understood what she was trying to say.

Aarti's family is disgusting. How could they force her to marry a middle-aged man. Thank God, Radha called nanimaasi to save her from her family people. That's so nice of Radha.

Aww Shashi...that's such a precious compliment. I am overwhelmed. Thank you also for liking the characters.😊

Originally posted by: taahir004

" Holding me up'..when I am weak

Helping me find what it is I seek.

Catching my tears'.when I cry

Pulling me through when the tide is high.

Just being there'.through thick and thin

Protecting my heart from within

You helped me to begin."

 

 

Above lines are strong yet beautiful and it depicts Yash strenght as I find him been that pillar to Aarti for now she can slowly start healing from her childhood

I somehow like Naanimaasi as she gave Aarti freedom

 

yet again an outstanding SS

 

Thanks Taahir. Yes, it's to  be seen how she blossoms when she comes under Yash's influence, but we sre still some miles away from that phase.😊

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr

Superb update...

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

nice updates poor aarti 😭

Thanks Kesha.

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Magnificent piece of writing👏 loved it😊 her guru and guide passed away so sad,😭 loved malti and radhama, ❤️yash aarti convo too good 👍🏼❤️and of course naanimaasi fearless👍🏼👏😎 entry and i admired her courage,😃 description about aartis painting excellent!!!!👏 oh dear mesmerized by your writing,😎 Maasha Allah kissi ka nazar na lage. waiting for your next update. hugs dear ❤️🤗

Thanks Naeema.

Aapke duaon ke liye tahe dil se shukriya ...🤗

wow,,wonderful update Indu Edited by rachna1970 - 11 years ago

Beautiful story Indu sis.I just read all the parts..The way u convey each and every scenes was damn superb and realistic...really this is really an epic of life.Am eager for ur next update.Do PM me di if possible..if not its okay..hates off to u👏👏👏

wow i have no words to expresss the beauty of the story revealation.

Originally posted by: InduG64

Kadeen...Hey there lil sis! Great to have your first thoughts on Samarpan. Thank you.

I can safely say that the family were just blindly following their beliefs as also that she was a girl. The fact that their son had disowned her gave them the licence to treat Aarti like dirt...an unwanted baggage. But since they were supposed to be a reputed family, they couldn't deny her the education till graduation. First time the Scindias gave the nudge. Post schooling, the  society took up her case when she topped the state..and so she could go to college. However, now even the society can't help her if they decide to rid her by getting her married off.

I completely agree that the loss of Aarti's art was the worst loss she faced in her life...it completely demotivated her. However, not all is lost...bits and pieces are still preserved. Wonder what Yash was reading in the car!!!😛


See ya lil one...take care.🤗

Edited by Kittya_Cullen - 11 years ago