Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 15

Superb part. Lovely family. Wow! Yash knows Aarti from her birth. She holds his hand in crib and from there their love story starts.

I love it! Aww the kids are so cute, especially Aayu. I love Aarti and Yash's bond here. Let the treasure hunt begin. I can't wait for your next update.

Great start.. too much info...frankly a little lost.. after reading introductions...!! 😆😆

INDU!!!!! 👏

nice start
love it

ohhh aarti was brought up without mother love😭😭😭
love the arya romance
yash is just can't keep away from aarti😳😳😆😆😆

love payal and ayu.
he is sooo naughty
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

Where do I begin

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I just loved Aayu. He is beyond cute. He is quite the animal-lover.

Aarti's past opens up a bit. A motherless child. That must be tough. Hope her father made up for her loss.

And Aarti picked out her mate on the day she was born by holding his finger. That was just awww...

The romance between AarYa was tooo goood

I am going to look at cake in a whole new way from now on.😳

And the treasure hunt begins.

True treasure is the update I tell you. Loved it a lot !

Deepti...your first sentence reminded me of the start of the "Do Re Mi..." song...
Let's start at the very beginning...A very good place to start...
When you read you begin with A-B-C...When you sing you begin with do-re-mi 😃

Thanks pal...I am much relieved that this has been well accepted. I had said that though this is mainly Yash/Aarti's coming-together story, but I have to go a bit slow...build it up to the flashback. I did try to give hints. Most of our friends have caught on the gist of what I am aiming to portray. *Sigh* Still miles to go...and many palpitations to alleviate.😊

Dear friends,

Thank you so much for the overwhelming response and encouragement. Please give me some time and I shall respond to everyone. Life's little busy at the moment.

Love you all.🤗
Indu

Love it! Keep it coming.. If it wasn't approaching midnight- I would write more.👏👏👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Wow ji.. Wow Indu!!! 👏👏👏 Just loving it and craving for more... ❤️!! 

The first part itself is so beautiful... 👏👍🏼

Again.. The kids are so sweet and adorable!! 😳 Oh.. The story told by Yash is somewhere emotional..! And it's Yash birthday... 😳 Finally.. Aarti is in the part..! 😃 Hmm.. Gosh! The romance.. ☺️!! Desserts...?? 😳😉

Waiting for more, Indu!! Thanks for the PM! 😃

Aww...many many 🤗 to you. Thank you so much for approving the beginning of Samarpan. Between the prologue and Part 1, I have managed to form a certain vision of the storyline. Let's see whether it gets more clear as we go along. Stay with me...😳