Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 110

wow beautiful update dear. so cute take of yash's feelings !!

Yash and Aarti's lunch was so short yet meaningful and beautifully written!👏😳

Amazing Update Indu  👏 👏

Originally posted by: InduG64

 Zet...🤗 ❤️ 🤗

Oho...the heart has begun its pull and push alright...but it is the mind and the logic that will fight. Yash's biggest problem will be his trust issues and Aarti's will be her lack of self-worth. Of the two, Aarti's problems are definitely deeper and more entrenched.

Prashant has an eye on the house. He knows it will fetch money. He also fancies Aarti...so wants to kill two birds with one stone so to say.

Originally posted by: jikky_84

Beautiful update Indu 👏

The first thing that came to Yash's mind was the poem in the journal when he saw Arati. But after his past, its going to be difficult for him to trust any girl easily and especially a person like Arati who don't even react properly to many situations as she is scare of almost everyone. 

When his heart recognised the writer of the poems, the mind is not.

Waiting to see how their further meetings would be 😃

Thanks Asha.

This is where my job gets into the difficult mode...to portray the battle between heart and mind. Yash feels the pull most at this beginning, yet his mind showed him what he was expecting to see. Let's see how this goes forward.😊

ohh di it was again a wonderful update

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

I have no words to tell you how much I admire you as a writer.

The way you join the dots and give such reasons behind why a character behaves the way he/she does. WOW the depth of your characterization is such that the characters seem more real than some of the real people I know of. With each update you put more flesh on these fictional characters which is a treat to read. One of these days I fear they will just jump off my laptop screen.😆

Bowing down to your writing skills yet again Indu. Hats off.

Deepti...what do I say to that my dear dear friend? The beautiful appreciation up there is so very precious to me. Thank you so much. I can only say that I have a little bit of this Aarti in me. Right from my school days, I have expressed better with words. I was always comfortable communicating in writing. But yes, I am having a beautiful experience penning these stories. But for this forum, I'd have never known I could do this.😳

Originally posted by: TAPD

wonderfully written...love the way you put all events in its place...

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: maha9

wow beautiful update dear. so cute take of yash's feelings !!

waiting for the next update dear.

Thanks Maha. 😳

Originally posted by: guruandkratz

Yash and Aarti's lunch was so short yet meaningful and beautifully written!👏😳

And that Prashant...he will never get that house...doesn't he understand that?😡

And Yash again has that misconception that Aarti is a gold digger!🥺

Please prove him wrong...please do Indu di!😭

Continue soon and this was awesome!👏

Thanks Carissa.

Don't worry about Yash...He found her, didn't he? In spite of what he thought of her the previous night.😃