MM OS ||Reminiscence - The Raindrops|| [Pg#2] - Page 3

😃😃😃 Thank U at work aur dream nahi kar sakti.

Good one Bidzie !
Loved the way scenes travel in thoughts from Megha to Mohan and from Mohan to Megha. What a way to show the connect. You can be really good screenplay writer, though I myself do not know the technicality of screenplay but I can visualize the whole scene.

Also the way nanhi and rim bring back MM to their realities make the scene all the more effective.

And last but not the least, what a super duper romantic scene though we still are debating about the deed still it seems MM had done it and much more than what we think 😳 😆

it's so superb 😊😊😊 , romantic ❤️❤️❤️☺️☺️☺️ 

aww..bidzie loved the OS..both the ones..bt my favourite was d 1st one..just loved it 😊

bidzie :

Bidz... A biggg 🤗 to u...

Hey Bidu...whats this ???

Jis din main sabse zada busy thi online nahi aa payi ussi din tune OS likh dali 😡 😆

Aur dekh me kitna late ho gayi padhne me ... 😭

Achcha avi padhke aati hu then comment krti hu... 😳

❤️   ❤️

Kya likha hai Bidu 👏 M blashing n blashing n blashing only...what a perfect combi b/w Past n Present 👏

Just Mind blowing...Awsome...Superb...Too good writing... 😳

Navi n RJ are well suitable in every scene... 👏

Megha Mohan doing romance on road 👏 ...Khullam khulla pyar krte hai ye dono to 🤣

Last but not the least...Thank U for given me the credit that too on top   😛 ...that means a lot Bidu 😊

Though u ve written completely diff except the rain theme... 😳 ...maine unhe room me rakha 😉 tune sadak tak pouncha diya Love birds ko... 🤣

Anyway... what a perfect romantic scene u described 👍🏼

Awesome one, so romantic so passionate yaar.  i wonder agar aise scenes screen par aaye toh nbtians ka kya hoga?😆😉😳

Thanks everyone for liking my OS. Well, all the switching from past to present and vice versa, the flashbacks reminding incomplete cause of Navika-Rimjhim etc were on purpose. 😃 Completeness will happen when they will unite. As everyone is saying, 12 saal baad puri hogi yeh adhuri kaahani.