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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#391

Man talk about some drama

Arnav is just shock Khushi thinks that about their relationship...even though it is nameless they do care and mean a lot to each other

I cannot wait til the ext update

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#392

poor Khushi feels Arnav is treating her like a kept woman

and Arnav thought he was making a grand gesture by giving her
the ring

total MU on both sides

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#393

Fireworks and waterworks...fire and ice..!!! Well done... Arnav cannot help himself can he...ha has to come back and there in lies the magic for me...cannot resist mr.raizada...!!

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john-angad

@john-angad

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#394

Cannot believe.i missed this gem for so long. Unbelievable chemistry, passion everything!

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#395

That was an interesting Chapter..

I wonder when will ASR realize his actual feeling for Kushi ? I feel really sad for Kushi. Eagerly waiting for next update

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akashlina

@akashlina

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#396

hey its a awsome update...pls i cant wait for d next update..pls pls pls update soon

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bumble_bee

@bumble_bee

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#397

I just came across this ff .. what a beautiful story... Lovely characters and feelings...

What an exciting equation of events... Looking forward to reading it...

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arshiyakanishka

@arshiyakanishka

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#398

A very intense and high voltage update.

Khushi has gone against her morals and her beliefs of having a no strings attached relationship with Arnav because she loves him with all her heart...but still these deep set beliefs keep on resurfacing and making her heart and mind all confused and she's constantly asking herself if she is doing the right thing in going ahead with such a relationship.Over and above all this when Arnav gifted her the ring and gave the reason of the gift although teasingly as a return of her generousity...it was the last straw in their relationship for Khushi and hence she couldn't take it further and exploded.

Arnav's reaction when she called herself a wh**e was amazingly described.Also when he moves towards her angrily and she gets scared and moves back and he notices the scared expression on her face and stops was beautiful.

He storms out but returns later to tend to her wounded finger and we get to witness the famous bandage-engagement scene once again.Farah the way you revisit the older scenes and make them happen in different settings but with similar emotions is beyond beautiful.Thanks for doing that.

Hoping that Arnav tries to see Khushi's point of view and understands her reason of her such a strong reaction.

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#399

FAA RAH ...EXCELLENT

I CANNOT AGREE WITH RASGULLA SP ANY LESS

THIS WAS BY FAR THE BEST CHAPTER NOT ONLY OF YOUR

STORY BUT OF ALMOST ALL THE STORIES THAT I HAVE READ N I

HAVE READ A LOT

THE RING MEANT ''LESS THAN NOTHING ''WHAT A SENTENCE

EXPLAINED ALL HER FEARS

WITHOUT THINKING HE ACTED N WAS NOT READY FOR AN

EXPLOSION

SHE WAS HURT TO THE CORE ..FELT ASHAMED ...FELT SMALL

HE UNINTENTIONALLY LABELLED HER THAT PERSON WHICH

SHE WAS MOUTHING N THAT SNAPPED HIM

HE IS READY TO MINGLE BUT WANTS TO STAY SINGLE ...HAH

THE POWER OF THIS ENCOUNTER WAS SO STRONG THAT IT

INSTANTLY MADE MY RUSTED BRAINS TO WORK

THE RING ACTUALLY MEANT ''LESS THAN NOTHING'' BECAUSE

HE RUSHED OUT N RETURNED WITH THE MEDICAL AID NOT

REALIZING STILL THAT IT IS NOT HER BLEEDING FINGER THAT

NEEDS ATTENTION IT IS HER.. IT IS HER HEART.. IT IS HER SOUL

THAT NEEDS TO BE LOOKED AFTER ..THE RING WAS LONG

FORGOTTEN IN THAT MOMENT

IT WAS A SIMPLE GESTURE THAT TURNED INTO A TSUNAMI

OF RECKLESS EMOTIONS

THEY MAY HAVE AGREED TO NON-COMMITTAL LIAISON

BUT THIS GIFT THE 'SYMBOL OF A RELATIONSHIP' SLICED HER

HEART IT WAS NOT INTENDED BUT THE OUTCOME OF HIS

ACTION WAS FAR FETCHED

HIS ANGER IS NOT JUSTIFIED HERE IT WAS NOT HIS STRENGTH

BUT IT WAS HIS WEAKNESS HE IS SCARED OF ANY KIND

OF COMMITMENT BUT TRIES TO COVER UP THAT FEAR BY

BEING ANGRY

KHUSHI MUST HAVE FELT AS SMALL AS A DUST PARTICLE

HE REDUCED HER TO NOTHING THAT INSTANT

HER TEARS WERE NOT 'CRYING' IT WERE REMORSE N PAIN N

ANGUISH N HURT

N OF COURSE THE ONE THING SHE ALWAYS FEARED WAS NO

MATTER WHAT HE IS NEVER GOING TO GIVE HER WHAT SHE

YEARNS FOR ''A NAME TO THIS DEAL''

HIS GIFT WAS AN EXCHANGE

IT PINCHED HER TO KNOW WHY HE WAS GIVING IT TO HER

N HE WORDED THE REASON THAT WAS SO POOR OF HIM

HE WAS ''RETURNING THE FAVOR''

A CONSTANT REMINDER OF ALL THAT SHE COULD NOT HAVE ...BRILLIANT

WE ARE FINISHED HERE ...NOW WE ARE FINISHED HERE ...EXCELLENT

''FINISHED'' BEFORE THEY EVEN STARTED

''FINISHED'' BEFORE HE COULD UNDERSTAND

''FINISHED'' BEFORE HE REALIZED WHAT HIT HER

''FINISHED'' BEFORE SHE COULD DREAM N LONG FOR

FAARAH ...I AM SORRY FOR SUCH A LONG COMMENT

BUT YOUR BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER 'UNDID' MY MIND

THANKS FOR THE PM

KKKA

Edited by KKKA - 12 years ago

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#400

Dear Farah

Speechless, blown away , bowled over - these words are just not enough for what I feel after reading this update. You just make each update so so good !!

And of course, now can't wait for the actual conversation which I am sure will shatter the grounds on which both Arnav and Khushi walk on - bring it on quickly please