Ariya : Day & Night ( Ch4 pg22)27-3-13 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Agar meri Divi ne Saba ke saath pair up ho ke likkhi toh,toh zaroor accha hoga.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome promo :)
eagerly waiting for 1st chapter
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nice start continue soon witing for next update...Arshi
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Originally posted by: fatima15

awesome promo :)

eagerly waiting for 1st chapter
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Originally posted by: zebbie

Agar meri Divi ne Saba ke saath pair up ho ke likkhi toh,toh zaroor accha hoga.
Awesome CS.
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thanks zebbie...aap ne kaha to shayed acha hi ho...😆
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Originally posted by: haruhi26

waiting patiently for you to start dear😊

lovely CS and very interesting Promo😉



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay friends here is ch 1 . hope all will like it

CHAPTER 1

Present time

Four people are sitting in the SUV. All are dressed in party clothes, the person at the back "

(Chottu) : yaar when will we reach there am already hungry...!!!
second person sitting with him (Shree) kya yar chottu abhi tu aur tera food love kabhi khatam nahi hoga. Aise to tujhe koi bhi ladki nahi milegi ...


The girl sitting at the front (Riya)says hey shree don't tease chotu...!!!
Shree : wah Riya you are taking chottu's side koi baat nahi ye din bhi aana hi tha "dost dost na rha."


The man driving the SUV (Rathore) " guys we have reached now hurry up, all are waiting for us."
Chottu shree and riya get down.
Shree : " kya yar ye rathore sir aaj bhi aise gusse main hi rahenge .


Chottu : leave na Shree unka to nature hi aisa hai. Lets go isse phle ki dobara daant pite ...


When they were entering suddenly they saw one of Sikander's man in the parking lot. They go behind him to catch him, the man sees them and starts running . the ETF follows him and see that the man is entering in the party where ETF was invited .
they also go inside. As they were following him the party's host commissioner came to welcome them and the ETF lost that man.
Comm : Welcome rathore ...
rathore : thank you sir ...


After talking to the commissioner they started searching for him.
Rathore : guys go in different directions and search that man. I have a feeling he is going to do something here.
The trio together : yes sir.



Rathore goes towards the stage area to keep an eye on the guests coming to the stage where the couple in whose honour party was done to protect Sanju and his husband Arjit just in case that man came to harm them . It was sanju and Arjit's 1st wedding anniversary. Sanju was commissioner's daughter and they had many enemies.



Shree is near the camera person and is seeing the screen in which all the guests who were there were being clicked and shown on that big screen. He was searching for that person, if he by chance comes on that screen.



Chottu was near the sitting area and keeping an eye on all the people in the party.
They didn't tell anybody about the man so as to avoid confusion and also they didn't want to worry commissioner.



Riya was near the D.J. Suddenly she sees a person whose exactly like the person they were searching for. She steadily and quietly go towards that person to catch him unguarded.



Background music playing ...
Na jaane kaha se aaya hai ...
Na jaane kaha ko jayega ...
Deewana kise bnayega ye ladka ...




But she was not so lucky the person senses her and turns towards her. She raises her hand to hold him but he blocks all her moves he holds her wrist and turns her with her back facing him ...
He again turns her and they are now face to face(just like there first meeting in the serial). They have a few seconds eye lock before riya says " you ...how dare you touch me... leave me now... you don't know who I am...



The person holding her " listen mam I don't know who you are and I don't have any interest in knowing you."
By now ETF and commissioner comes.
Rathore :ye kya ho rha hai yaha pe?
Riya : sir i caught that man.



Commissioner : who man? What are you guys talking about???
Rathore : riya... leave him he's not that man. He is ACP Arjun Raute ... [ he said while luking at arjun seriously ]...
Riya : what ACP? Riya in her mind ( beta tu to gayi aaj, ek ACP se panga le lia ab to research desk wapis jaane ki tyari kar le )...
Commissioner : whats going on? Koi hume bhi btayega ???



Rathore : nothing sir please don't panic ... actually when we were entering in the party we saw one of sikander's man entering the party and we was searching him ke aap ne humein rok liya ...
Commissioner : what? And you are telling me all this now ???
Arjun : its okay sir he left I saw him leaving maybe ...



Commissioner : by the way arjun what are you doing here near D.J.? I thought you didn't like them? And how do you know that man left?
Arjun- actually and arjun starts narrating what happened few minutes before.
"I was talking to sanju and arjit.



Sanju : what is this bhai all the people came and you are coming so late I am not talking to you
Arjun : arre baba am sorry wo tumhare liye perfect gift jo laana ta warna mujhe hi sunati ki ap koi gift ni laye ...
Sanju : to dijiye kahan hai mera gift ???
Arjun : tum abhi bhi bilkul bachi ho sanju ye le apna gift hope you will like it ...



Sanju : wow bhai its very beautiful thank you so much. You are the best samjhe ya samjhaun...!!!
Just then I saw a man he was very nervous and sweating I had a doubt on him so i started following him he turned and i saw his face he was one of sikander's man who is very famous for his dealings in drugs . He saw me and started running, I also followed him he was near this D.J. just as I was to catch him the D.J.


started the fog and when the fog cleared he was no where to be seen I just got a glimpse of him running out of the party .

Then suddenly this girl comes and starts hitting me...!!!! and then you people came.
Riya : i am so sorry sir. Its just that ki i thought... but she was cut of by arjun's voice...
arjun : Leave it, mujhe to ye samajh nahi aarha ke tumhe ek police officer kisne bna diya. Says arjun angrily




Riya is very sad and angry and thinks ( kitne akdu hain ye galti hi hui thi na and maine sory bhi kaha phir ye police officer wali baat bech mai lane ki kya zarurat thi huh ... pta nai inke sath log kaam kaise karte honge i sympathise with them . Huh sadu kahin ke thank god ye ETF mai nahi hain warna pakka riya tu pagal ho jati ...



Commissioner : khair ye chodo I have to talk to you people about something very important but not here tomorrow morning in my office at 10. Clear everyone?
Everyone : yes sir



Commissioner : good now come on enjoy the party ...
Meanwhile sanju comes there and yells riya ( ye kya tum itni der se party mai ho aur abhi tak mujhse milne nahi aayi. Thats not fair na . And pouts ..



Riya : arre sorry babes actually kuch zaruri kaam aagya tha islie but ab to am here for you na aur btao how is married life treating you ? And they goes from there...
Arjun in his mind " kaise pagal ladki hai... pata nahi isko officer kisne bana diya. Pata nahi ETF isko kaise sambhalti hai...
iske sath kaam krna to mushkil hi nahi namumkin hota hoga...
Chottu to shree chal na shree yar kuch khane chalte hai am very hungry...




Shree : han chal yar ab to mujhe bhi bhookh lag rahi hai ...
Only arjun and rathore are there... both are shocked to see each other after so long..
their face's were showing many emotions guilt, happiness and angriness.



But before rathore could say anything arjun leaves from there
A little later ...
Rathore : come on guys ab humein chalna chaiye kafi raat ho gayi hai and kal subha office bhi jaana hai...!!!
And the ETF leaves from there...



PRECAP

comm : Its not a request or advice Arjun, its an order and you must follow it..!!!
Arjun looks angrily and leaves ...

Ariya fight !!!


Happy V day...🤗❤️
Edited by saba-ramisa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Happy wala v day dear
nyc update
gud sng lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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brilliant rami
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zebbie

Agar meri Divi ne Saba ke saath pair up ho ke likkhi toh,toh zaroor accha hoga.
Awesome CS.
Jaldi jaldi posts chahiye.



thku so much zebbie...!!!😊❤️

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