ARIYA OS: Jalthe raho mere pyar mein-(deleted) - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
vidyaaa diii!!! jaladiya aapne mujhko!!!!!!!

sooo romantic!!!!!! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ 

awsomeee!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
wow di!!!
kitna romantic tha!
itna acha Valentines Day gift!!!
Thank u! 😉

vo line mast thi...mujhe nahi pata tha ki tumhe chup karvane ka itna aasan tareeka bhi hai...lol...fullon arjun attitude! 😆

and last line...wow...
mujhe laga tha vo riya kahegi...but aapne sahi twist laa diya!!!
loved it!!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Romantic update.
I was imagining the whole scenario.
Me *blushing*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Had just read two parts...
nd here comes the next update...
Loved it...
How romantic...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Awww that was so romantic diii...
awsome fiery...
set the os on fire really i mean that way of arjun was so superb...
That was so so romantic can't express
the song selection tooo awsome..
plz on request usko tohra or barhado diii😉
superb⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Omg Yaar i know ye Arjun kuch aisa hi karega
Riya ka fasa hi ulta kar diya .
 
 
Love his last sentence.
 
 
"Mujhe jalene chali thi ,, ab jalthe raho mere pyar mai." 😆😊 
 
 
 
Fantastic & romantic..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: dia121

Awww that was so romantic diii...

awsome fiery...
set the os on fire really i mean that way of arjun was so superb...
That was so so romantic can't express
the song selection tooo awsome..
plz on request usko tohra or barhado diii😉
superb⭐️


agar time miley, toh iss OS ko SS banaane ki khoshish karungi...
pehle Tina ka feeback toh mil jaaye!

i am happy that all of u liked the gift and the ending! 😊
thanks!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
so hwaaattt😉
lovd it
yeah arjun bi na 😉
bechari riya apni hi chal main phas gayi 

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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Seenavas

so hwaaattt😉

lovd it
yeah arjun bi na 😉
bechari riya apni hi chal main phas gayi 

valentine week hai na?? socha kuch hot hot ho jaaye!
waise bhi punch dialogs toh Arjun hi maar saktha hai na?
isiliye twist in the tale laana padaa!
ek chota tadka...😳😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
😆 Late as usual😳
First thanks to Vidya for writing such a lovely and so romantic OS as challenge😳
Dil Khush huwa😃
And now commenting on your two updates:
Well Riya and Rehaan, and a jealous Arjun, haye too cute, specially when Riya didnt waste one minute to leave Arjun and go with Rehaan, acha huwa Arjun ke saath, kuch zyada akdu hein humara Arjun😳
And now your last part😳😳
Still blushing
So Arjun thinks that this is a simple way to make her stay quiet, by kissing her😆😳
It was so lovely...
I had asked an OS with Arjun burning with jealousy, and you ended with a Riya burning in the flames of desire☺️
Haye too good👍🏼