This continues to be unaffectedly charming,and I find it the simple domestic pleasures that Arjun and Riya share delightful.
What I like best about your Arjun is that he is a normal young man, out to please his very pretty wife - witness the way he responds when Riya is chagrined by her bloomer about his old wallet - and not a surly, snarling cop with a chip on his shoulder as big as a house.
I never liked the way in which Arjun behaves with practically the whole world - true, he has suffered an unbearable loss, but he is surely not the only one to have done so, and moreover, he could be aloof and unapproachable in a dignified fashion; there is no need to be eternally so rude to all and sundry. Your Arjun is a very pleasant change, and this alone is enough to keep me attached to this FF, though I have by now developed almost an allergy for Ariya romantic fiction,
Shyamala Aunty
Hi friends I am back with the next part..
I hope you all will like it...excuse me if there are any errors...
Part 5
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