Hey, sorry I know I'm very late this time so I'll comment on 4 chapters at once :D
Firstly loved the way Sharon confessed, it was so damn cute...But Swayam? Uh-oh that majnu slept π & all those cute moments before marriage were penned down beautifully...their feeling of Nervousness, happiness & contentment was very well written. Moreover the way you have elaborated all the rituals was very impressive. Chapter 43 just left me dumbstruck...I actually can't gather words to describe how extraordinary it was...the confession and then their first kiss...everything was just PERFECT! Totally SwaRonish. Commendable job Strawberry π³ You write so beautifully that it makes very hard for a reader to wait for such a long time to read the next chapter so please do update soon... π³
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