*Un-Reserved*
Sakshi!! Kya mast likhti hai re tu! Ekdum superr updates likhi tune :* Itna padha maine ki boss outt ho gyi thi mai kuch der ke liye...i had to compose myself to write a comment. Sharon is backkk WOAH! I like the pace of your story..its relaxing and smooth to read. Plus it gets exciting in between which was good for me 😆 I am very much glad that you took NiMmi in the frame also..their scenes are cute and add freshness too. Plus i like sharon's chachi...she is cool And ya the way chori chori swaron story went forward i liked 😳 sharon toh badal gayi yar..london se aake full on she was..swayam ko manana and sorry kehna plus itna frank hona usse...good man good! And now she has shifted back to mumbai..yayy! I liked that terrace scene..when swayam dreamt of a kiss lol! And sharon coolly answered about him being the only one who can make her cry. Then the event preparations plus group study! Ahaan i loved taht scene ofcourse..when swayam makes her sleep and does her work! And same day scene when she gets upset from him and then he manipulates and makes her eat. Nicely written! Then the unexpected confession! :O That was seriously unpredictable sakshi! Ab ye mat bolna ki predictable is boring :p
Confession was amazing and appropriate! It was veryy cute and romanticc :D
The dancee...fanaa! It was lovely conceptualized! Awesome update! Totally loved it!
Then sharon ki chachi agreeing to her dad being super supportive was simply great! Swayam ki mom ko bhi sharon ne pata liyaa..lol sahi hai ;) Ab sharon kaha gyi hai :O
Now i will go and read the next one :X
Edited by surbhimathur - 10 years ago
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