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Hriju321

@Hriju321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#961

Juhi,

The spell has been cast !!! How do you manage to create a suspense everytime?😆Now I'm dying to know what Arnav found in those books of Khushi.

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stories.1408

@stories.1408

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Posted: 12 years ago

#962

wow! what an update.asr is back in full force.poor khushi.u really change our feelings about characters after each update.loved ot.nd those books must be somethong related to fashion designs i think.she knew chikinkari na...so thats my guess for it.but with ur skills any twist is possible.

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--BumbleBee--

@--BumbleBee--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#963

Just caught up with the last two chapters.

Love where the story is going.

I like idea of a delusional Payal😃

Jokes apart, I like how you have brought out the ASR while pushing Arnav inside, no matter how much he longs to come out..

Khushi was probably right in her way, but she should have investigated the matter before deciding what was right and wrong.

The major question in my head is why did Payal do what she did despite being married..

Love the descriptions. Their mutual pain, his anger. Her guilt. Their longing for simpler times.

Wonder what the Hing Kong trip will bring?/

What did Arnav see in the cupboard?

Please update soon..

Waiting!!

Thanks for the PM..

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#964

Khushi did what she did out of love and loyalty to see her sister her only fault is to have loved and believed her sister...so I feel bad for her...

Arnav...is more angry at himself for having gotten fooled and made a fool of...but if he loves her should he not try to understand her point if view and maybe see if he can find it in her to forgive her and move on with time...

They are both suffering where as they could hve been happy, they are obviously attracted to and still care about each other...what is she lying about now...

Loved the emotions that are going through thier head and the anger, guilt...feelings that they did not expect in their married lives...poor souls!

As always another brilliant update...loved how your words brought out their dilemma and helpless of the situation and a big hug for him/her not sleeping on the ground or by the poolside...loved that touch!

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rulama

@rulama

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#965

Oh my god!

This is one good story!

I read it upto last chapter at one go and requested for a pm and you obliged. Thanks a ton dear!

Very sweet of you to send pm. Appreciate it very much.

It looks like Arnav is hell bent on revenge!

Now what is the other secret!

Very gripping!

Well narrated dear!

In fact as your name suggests you have cast a spell!

That too a tight spell!

Looking for the next update!

Edited by rulama - 12 years ago

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#966

poor Khushi believing her sister is making her life hell

Poor Arnav he loved her so much and to him she betrayed him

both of them just so miserable

and what's with the books

cant wait for the next chapter

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#967

just caught with the last few updates, and I'm hooked to this story... I love that you have a penchant for cliff hangers, and it drives me mad 😆..
I just loved the pace and length of each update... and growing respect for you as a writer... keep it coming buddy..

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Vithagan2304

@Vithagan2304

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#968

amazing update:) arnav is very ruthless wen it cums to destroy someone. but feel pity for khushi:( wat was d thing tat caught arnav's eyes? eagerly waiting for d next update:)

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#969

hey I really didn't get where this story heading... some times feels angry towards asr sometimes pity for him...
He still had soft corner for her... but he can't trust her
Who was the new maid she had something to do with them... kind of revenge
Thanks for pm