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Sona257

@Sona257

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Aahw that's such a Lovely OS.. u should write more like this

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

"I am not a man who can promise you moon and stars but I can promise you my heart forever. I can promise that I'll stand beside you through the years. I never imagined myself feeling something special for someone. But the day you entered into my life, I felt it can be nobody else than you. I can give away everything I have to be with you. You are a constant thought that keeps me company. You are the missing jigsaw in puzzle of my life. You drive me crazy with your insanity but I can't have it any other way, can't have you any other way. You have taught me to live, to love. It just feels so right to hold you, to kiss you, to care for you, to love you. Nothing feels as right as this" he said pointing at her and himself. "We are so right together.

awesome os loved it the proposal was drool worthy and so cute and sweet beautifully done thanks for the pm

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Kinna sona OS tha!

It had everything. Naughtiness, challenge, hesitation, love, trust, humor, everything!

And what a declaration of love! All the important words we never got on the show...

Do post the link of this story in the index for Yes Boss

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monsi08

@monsi08

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

call it telepathy or watever... but yday wen i started reading yes boss again.. was thinking dat i wud pm u to requestfor an epilogue to it... n now i saw my inbox n it was already dere... 😲 😆

loved it ⭐️

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

wow superb OS !!!

u simply did a bang on job !!!!

the proposal was so beautiful !!!!

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Oh god this was just... oh god I am breathless.. the dialogues, the beauty. Wonderfully written hun! This needs more LIKES and views!

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

I somehow didn't expect a proposal... Awww that was so cute

Lovely OS dear

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

That was sweet! very nice!!

Liked that you gave Yes Boss an epilogue!

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-Shalu-

@-Shalu-

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Gosh, finally an epilogue to Yes Boss & what an epilogue! I'm so happy that he popped the question and the proposal was just so very sweet and dreamy. *Haiye* You did a great job & I loved it!

Btw I think perhaps you might wanna link the epilogue with your Yes Boss FF? I'm sure it will attract new readers if the title states completed as everyone loves a completed story especially with an epilogue, just a suggestion if you don't mind me saying. :) Thank you for writing this!

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abavi

@abavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

The proposal was the highlight of the OS... but I should say I found it a little difficult to imagine Arnav ji saying so perfect dialogues... he is a man of few words...

but still the words used for the proposal was so beautiful... 😳 loved it!

[edit] Oh I completely missed the part where you mentioned that this could be a sequel to your FF... I remember reading the first few chapters of it.. and then lost track of it... so it is completed now? Now I shall read it- and now I understand the character is from the FF, I will be able to appreciate it better

Edited by abavi - 12 years ago

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