OS : Matters of the hearts - Page 4

Originally posted by: Maria.

Beautiful Dear

well written

keep writing good work:)

Originally posted by: riafna

Amazing OS. Like it. Arnav knew well how to maake say YES from her mouth challenging her...So make sure each time he sent sms to make sure that she is still there with their bets..
I can't offer you stars and moon but my heart😛
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi

MY GOD IT'S THE MOST BEAUTIFUL PROPOSAL I HAVE EVER READ!!!!

Originally posted by: summaiyasayed

superb updt

luv it

updt soon

Originally posted by: aarrsshhii

Beautiful dear... tht was one lovely plan of asr's... well epilogue or os it ws simply awesome... i lovd hw easily she gts riled up.. :-)
Keep writing more ;-)

Originally posted by: ukuk4

Looovely.

Originally posted by: Anony_mous

Awesome, loved it!

Made me fall in love with Arshi again :)

Originally posted by: Rabzooo

Sigh! That was beautiful!
A dream proposal...extremely well written...
Loved it!

Originally posted by: Shweta1691

Beautiful proposal!!! Way to hide a surprise!!!

Loved it

Originally posted by: smilli

Awww...so beautifulll...:)))

Originally posted by: chavvi16

awww now that was fitting end right
cant believe he had her scared for no reason
gosh thats arnie for you
so they still challenge each other huh and then come to regret it well khushi does
but she wouldnt back down either which is so her
and he asked her to marry him beautiful that
just the thing needed

Originally posted by: sanz.

Awww that was beautiful xoxo

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

beautiful os

Originally posted by: Sona257

Aahw that's such a Lovely OS.. u should write more like this

Originally posted by: dumas

"I am not a man who can promise you moon and stars but I can promise you my heart forever. I can promise that I'll stand beside you through the years. I never imagined myself feeling something special for someone. But the day you entered into my life, I felt it can be nobody else than you. I can give away everything I have to be with you. You are a constant thought that keeps me company. You are the missing jigsaw in puzzle of my life. You drive me crazy with your insanity but I can't have it any other way, can't have you any other way. You have taught me to live, to love. It just feels so right to hold you, to kiss you, to care for you, to love you. Nothing feels as right as this" he said pointing at her and himself. "We are so right together.

awesome os loved it the proposal was drool worthy and so cute and sweet beautifully done thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Rhysenn

Very cute!

Originally posted by: rokaya

aww so romanticcc

Originally posted by: Taz.roxox

That was so adorable

Originally posted by: Ashakalyani

beautiful

Originally posted by: Jyo.Arshi.IPK

wow superb OS !!!

u simply did a bang on job !!!!

the proposal was so beautiful !!!!

Originally posted by: Dalmuthuya

Oh god this was just... oh god I am breathless.. the dialogues, the beauty. Wonderfully written hun! This needs more LIKES and views!

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Kinna sona OS tha!

It had everything. Naughtiness, challenge, hesitation, love, trust, humor, everything!

And what a declaration of love! All the important words we never got on the show...

Do post the link of this story in the index for Yes Boss

Originally posted by: monsi08

call it telepathy or watever... but yday wen i started reading yes boss again.. was thinking dat i wud pm u to requestfor an epilogue to it... n now i saw my inbox n it was already dere... 😲 😆

loved it ⭐️

Originally posted by: GAURI29

beautiful...

Originally posted by: SamiyaIPKKND

I somehow didn't expect a proposal... Awww that was so cute

Lovely OS dear

Originally posted by: emistry

That was sweet! very nice!!

Liked that you gave Yes Boss an epilogue!

Originally posted by: Humayra

It was beautiful..

Originally posted by: -Shalu-

Gosh, finally an epilogue to Yes Boss & what an epilogue! I'm so happy that he popped the question and the proposal was just so very sweet and dreamy. *Haiye* You did a great job & I loved it!

Btw I think perhaps you might wanna link the epilogue with your Yes Boss FF? I'm sure it will attract new readers if the title states completed as everyone loves a completed story especially with an epilogue, just a suggestion if you don't mind me saying. :) Thank you for writing this!

Originally posted by: Fruti5

well written👍🏼

Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

amazing os..😊😊

Originally posted by: gangsu

Awww its so beautiful d way u xpress.

Originally posted by: Sarunfanatic_Ji

It was beautiful!

Loved Khushi's naivety 😆 she was thinking abt the games she play in her PC 😆

OMG! The proporal was so romantic!
Loved it!

Thanks for the pm.

Love,
'J'

Originally posted by: precious-pie

Beautifully weaved dear :)

Originally posted by: choochootrain

Woww...how.romantic.tis.arnav can get???...lucky arhi...:)

Originally posted by: Akorshi

it was so...beautiful n yes blissful too...

loved it...

Originally posted by: bhavnah

great os :)

Originally posted by: rrd29

nice OS...lovely epilogue for Yes Boss

Originally posted by: mishti_17

Wonderful.. Loved it..❤️

Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18

I loved it

Originally posted by: abavi

The proposal was the highlight of the OS... but I should say I found it a little difficult to imagine Arnav ji saying so perfect dialogues... he is a man of few words...

but still the words used for the proposal was so beautiful... 😳 loved it!

[edit] Oh I completely missed the part where you mentioned that this could be a sequel to your FF... I remember reading the first few chapters of it.. and then lost track of it... so it is completed now? Now I shall read it- and now I understand the character is from the FF, I will be able to appreciate it better