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Saiyu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

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Chal kahin toh dhang se thank you bola 😛

I find it very difficult to comment on your work unless I am spamming 😃 simply because I have SEEN you writing, I have discussed stuff with you.

But the end result always leaves me speechless.

You do humor and twists very well. And this comedy of errors here was one enjoyable example.

Poora golmal 😆

PS: You know na if I had not been your sister I would have been your stalker? 😊

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

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^me throughout the update Edited by V323 - 11 years ago

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Zehra, you write funny stuff so damn well!!

I was rofling so much at some pats of the story, so I can say you have successfully made me smile, laugh, grin and smirk throughout this update!! :D

Khushi is such a badass. Bas. Its confirmed. Salman ji ki kasam. Or should I say Hud Hud Dabangg?

And what I loved the most was the touch of the IPK dialogues in between. 'Tum seh nahi paoge'...*sigh*

Bring on the kisses!! We've had enough of 'almost kisses' on the show! So this is a welcome change. LOL :P

And finally...NK and Anjali are behind all this note business? Wow. That's some major plan there Anjali. Lets see its outcome!

Ab aage kya hoga???? I loved this update Zehra!!! 🤗

Edited by raomedhz - 11 years ago

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

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Hello!

Well I think I've already told you how much I liked the chapter, but of course there ain't no harm in doing it again, publicly this time 😃

Well, tthis was one wonderful update, some of the parts were so funny, I swear, I would had literally rolled on the floor if I hadn't been nervous about my turn, which is, of course, right after this.

And, dammit, I just love Khushi Kumari Gupta. She's the best heroine ever!!!

And Arnav? 😆 Bechara!! He's going to be so embarrassed when the MU clears.

I can't believe I would I have to be the one to do it. I hope I do justice to it. Best of luck to me.

Devi maiyya, raksha karna!

P.s- The kisses were so hot! ☺️

Edited by blahblah16 - 11 years ago

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Waiting with a Res...

Edit:

First off, thank you for the long update!
Now , my favorite parts..
Loved the IPK dialogues you put in, "Seh nahi paogi" ..

Loved the hud hud dabang!

And really loved the 1000th fraction of a second inner monologue !
Humaari Sanka Devi bhi na..

And lots of kisses, yay!

Finally, Arnav is ready to get married to the cute kitten?

Itni jaldi?

Unbelievable!

But that's the magic of our titaliya , right?

A very well written update, and a perfect continuation of this fun collab! 😊 Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 11 years ago

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-Emma.K-

@-Emma.K-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

Res-ed 😊

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Zehra, that was an awesome update, bas.

I love how this this story is shaping up, so fun and enjoyable! And you've added an excellent chapter in!

So nk and Anjali are behind the whole note passing? Well I'm glad they're making use of themselves!
Khushi is getting better and better with each update. This khushi is my ultimate idol.
And you definitely had me laughing and smiling throughout! NK's jhola, the pun intended part LOL
Not to mention the best part, when she enters the office with...a rolling pin. She would!
And awww our ASR has already agreed to marry her? Bechara doesn't even know the MU between them.
I'm dying to know what happens next and how our feisty khushi handles the situation!!! That will be a treat to read...
So thank you for a wonderful update Zehra, it was so well written! :)
And Ananya, I literally cannot wait for your part, you'll rock it :DEdited by -Emma.K- - 11 years ago

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khushboo

@khushboo1234

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#357

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loved it...arnav itni asani se man gaya...thats something hard to believe😕..i want to see arnavs reaction...but for that i have to wait...😭

Edited by khushboo1234 - 11 years ago

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Diakumar17

@Diakumar17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

It was awsome, very funny. Cldnt help myself from laughing, khushi
& arna's Convo about the proposal. It was a delight to read.
Thanks Edited by Diakumar17 - 11 years ago

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tashi26

@tashi26

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#359

Amazing update...I couldn't stop laughing while reading it...it was fun reading the update

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732438

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Posted: 11 years ago

#360

oh wow i loved it!!!! great update!!! can't wait to read ahead!!!

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