YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2):PG.155 NOTE - Page 76

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Awesome AwesomeπŸ˜ƒ
Ayesha gonna kill karina, why u always gve such gr8 update,u always leave me wth no words.
Nt fair nah karina.
Oye bt dis dsnt means u will stop giving awesome updateπŸ˜‰

Awww my poor Zaaine got hurt😭
Thanx god nothing serious happend.
I no viren is wrong for telling such things bt feels bad for virikaπŸ˜” i cant see them fighting.

Awww luvd d way viren confessed n jeevika forgive her n d i luv uπŸ˜ƒ
zaaine is so cute d pinky promise aww.
Finally evrything is rights.

Gr8 workπŸ‘πŸΌ
continue soon n thanxs 4 d pm

Edited by Virika-luv - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
resπŸ˜ƒ
UNRES...😊

karinaπŸ€—
what a update girl...this was simplyyy an awesome oneπŸ‘πŸ‘

awww poor zaaine he got hurt😭 my boy...hope he gets fine soonπŸ€—

and his pinky promise was damn cuteee😳...!!

our VirIka yuhooo everything was sorted out b/w them...πŸ˜ƒ
awww my viren😳 he realised that the way he said those things to jeevs wasnt right...i expected this from virenπŸ˜‰
and v-i love u...
j-i love u more was cuteee😳

as always brilliant jobπŸ‘πŸΌ
thanx for the pm😊Edited by latika_AshVik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#unres#
aww..zaine is hurt...😭😭..
loved jeevika 's emotion..
Virika 's fight ended..πŸ‘
amazing update 
do continue soon...
Edited by Natasha137 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was nice
zaaine hurt😭

loved how you potrayed jeevika's emotions

finally virika fight ended πŸ‘

update soon
Edited by krystu05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor little zannie
he is hurt n in so much of pain
hope he gets well soon

but i am happy
that the virika fight is over
they are back together😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
res

*UNRES*

first of all sorry for late comment i had missed the previous part so had to search for itπŸ˜†

now come to this part

aww jeevika still angry wid viren πŸ˜•

awww poor zaaine! πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­

he hurt himself  

the way jeevika was wrried n viren drove quickly was very well expressed πŸ˜‰

the two as parents were panicked on seeing their baby like this

i dont know y i was soo happy to knw that it was karan that doctor πŸ˜†
(maybe tacker was striking on my mind) πŸ˜³

zoya β­οΈ β­οΈ she's such a sweetheart!i mean its really rare that u get such a gud frnd πŸ˜›

poor viren πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ he wants his wife back..he's missing the romance πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 

v - "Jeevs you haven't eaten anything all day, please. You can abuse me and yell at me as much as you want to, but please don't get your anger out on the food."

j - "I'm fine Viren"

v - "No you're not. Listen I shouldn't have talked that way, it's my fault. Please, try to understand. I've been meaning to talk to you about the situation because with Zaaine going to school now it gives me more time. I made a mistake and I'm sorry Jeevika. It was not the right place of time or mind to talk about me." 

j - "Please don't ever say that you both aren't my first priority again Viren. I really love you and Zaaine the most in this world. I will do anything for you two and my life wouldn't be anything without you guys."

v - "I know, and you both are my life. Sorry I love you"

j - "I love you more" she said hugging him tightly. 

Viren hugged her back and then wiped her tears. He picked up the spoon and started feeding her again. Zaaine woke up again but both of them quickly patted him to sleep again. 

j - "He's going to have a pretty bad headache tomorrow"

v - "I know. I'll call his pre-school tomorrow morning. Maybe we can get him started from next week onwards"

j - "Yeah, I don't want him feeling pain over there" 

v - "Okay, let me go take this plate down. Do you need anything?"

j - "Could you get my water please"

v - "sure' he said kissing her forehead. 

these lines <3 <3 <3 <3

yayyyaaayyy they patched up πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

looking forward for the next update n since they patched up now im more eager coc virika scenes on the way πŸ˜³
Edited by ashna1406 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Zannie getting hurt me not liking :'(
Awww my poor baby ! :'(
He fell from the stairs and got hurt :'(
I can't seee Zannie crying gett him well in the next update ASAP or me not talking to u :P
Awww Zoya is such a sweet friend 'I love Zoya <3'
Brilliant update truely adorable!
I loved the way Viren apologised Perfect Husband :D
I love this happy family <3
Continue soon plzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waooo waooo waooo u updated... m a great fan 4 ur story... its just getting interesting day by day😊😊... love the little romantic scene of virika😳😳... awww zaaine is chooo chuweeettt... loved him...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
  Viren understood jeevika at every point of life so suddenly what happened that he became so bitter... we all know that he crave 4 her love... but he should understand that they r now parents their 1st priority is zaaine... n the decision of baby was first of viren... felt bad 4 jeevika words of viren pierced her heart...😭😭
 All in all it was a great updated... just loved it to the core... n if u want longer comment we will give... i will surely give but plz don't think of not updating plz dear... a humble request of mine...😊😊
 This is the comment of chapter 15 n comment of 16 will give u after reading it... till than wait 4 my comment... n plz dear continue ASAP... will b eagerly waiting 4 ur next punch..😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayaya got an update ...wowowww 
this update was a mixture of many emotions...
jeevika was so pissed at viren 😑 n he was tried talking to her n made coffee for her that was so sweet of him...😊
ohhh!!!!!!! zaaine fell from stairs n got hurt πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­
loved the way how expressed their emotions n zaaine's pain through words...touched my hear πŸ‘πŸ‘ ...
hospital part was sooo emotional n sad that zaaine got stitches πŸ˜” 
zoya is such a sweet friend that she came at the hospital to see zaaine n took jeevika's shifts so that she can take care of zaaine...😊
viren is a lovable hubby n caring father...πŸ˜ƒ
he was sooo nice that he took food for jeevika n made her eat it n himself skipped his food n apologised for his behavior n finally their fight is over now...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ 
it was an awesome update as a whole...
continue soon...
Edited by sweetdollashita - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I m soo happy that u updated
i so wanted to read d next part
greedy for ur updates lol
enough of my bak bak
cmng to d update
hmmnmm it was --------- awesome like always
i need a dict to fibg sum adj for u
aww viren is so sweet n understand jeevika
regreeting his words
OMG my zaine fall n hrted aww mari crying
thank god he was fine
the tension b/w virika was desc perfectly
tge way viren aplogizes
howw sweet he can bd
the hug kiss i love uuu
thanx for d pm