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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Very nyc superb waiting 4 next update thanx for pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Pls pm me d next tym. I loved d story so farEdited by rut93 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
awesome updates...plz pm me wen u update nxt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Nice update πŸ‘πŸΌ
Lovely Rishbala moments πŸ˜ƒ...all r going on a trip πŸ˜†

Waiting for update
Posted: 11 years ago
#85
u should make index edit the first post and add links of all chapters
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Very nice and cute story...u have brought abhiya ,rishbala,arushi and arvi together...hmm what an idea sir jee...but y is there no index...it was so difficult to search for the chapters...if there is one plz tell me on which page...or plz plz make an index...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update dear.wow all r going to trip and hope there will be more masti and romantic scene  coming ...waiting for next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 21:

bus arrived to kirloskar's house.
they picked kirloskar family and soon their journey started..

anjali and shyam r looking outside of the window.

while arjun and purvi r staring at each other.

rk ,arnav, abhay r busy in teasing their girlfriends.

madhu,khushi,piya r trying to recounter for their counters.

rk: arnav and abhay i want to ask both of u a question?

arnav &abhay:wat?

rk: well i want to say about a strong woman...

madhu giving angry luks to rk.
arnav &abhay(with confused luks): strong woman!!!!!!!

rk: ha,strong woman.even if a devil comes infront of her she ill never moves inch from that position.she had that much of gutts...

arnav: oh,really who is she?is she here?if she is here as per my analysis except one remaining two r strong womans(staring at khushi)

khushi: i got u.u r talking about me na...

arnav: (with smirk) luk she is really brilliant...she can understand easily what i meant?

khushi 😑

abhay: as per my analysis except piya i will accept any other girl as strong woman. bcoz she starts crying for small reasons.

piya: oh really.infact that is u who scared for small reasons.

abhay: hey hey luk at her she is getting angry...oh really i am scared.πŸ˜‰

piya 😑

rk: hey guyz,first listen to me.here is a strong women she is the great ms...

madhu staring at him.

rk: ms...
arnav: ha,ms..

rk: ms.glycerine.

madhu 😑

abhay&arnav: glycerine.

rk: ha guyzz glycerine.

abhay:who is that glycerine?her name is really so funny...

arnav: u r right abhay really her name is funny...

madhu fuming with anger.

rk: guyz u want to know who is she?

arnav&abhay: yes,ofcouse...

rk is about to say her name.but madhu stops him by closing his lips with her hand.

madhu: don't dare to tell my name...

rk is trying to free himself.
arnav&abhay: madhu wat r u doing?

khushi&pia : madhu leave him.

madhu: no,i will not going to leave him until he says sorry to me.

khushi &pia: madhu!!!!!!  let him go.

madhu: no he must say sorry.

rk staring at her.he is in his own world.infact madhu was soo close to him.rk just staring at her while she arguing with khushi and piya.

arnav &abhay noticed this and they kept smiling themselves.while khushi and piya r confused with their smile.

pia: why r u laughing?instead of stopping her.

abhay: luk at them once.

khushi and pia noticed that they r too close

madhu noticed their laugh.she questioned them reason behind their laugh.

khushi: madhu luk at ur position once.

madhu just realized that she is too close to rk.he is just staring at her.
madhu left him and she tried to change topic.even she is not able to meet her eyes with rk.

rk  (with smirk): wat happened?u don't need sorry..

madhu

rk: ok,now friends.she is none other than our madhubala kirloskar.

already they knew that he is talking about madhu.but they just hidden it until he mentioned her name.

arnav knew about rk's unspoken luv for madhu.

arnav: rk ...now just say plz will u say that there r so many popular tourist places in himachal pradeshshimla,manali,Dharamsala and MacLeod Ganj,Spiti,Dalhousie..really all r very popular places.and as per my thoghts in winter manali will fully covered with ice.it's just a nice place to enjoy.


khushi: ha,really.u r right?


abhay: ha,i saerched on google about manali.

Manali at an altitude of 2,050 m (6,726 ft) in the Beas River Valley is a beautiful hill station nestled in the mountains of the Indian state of Himachal Pradesh near the northern end of the Kullu Valley. It is located about 270 km (168 mi) north of the state capital, Shimla.

Manali with a population of approx. 30,000 is administratively a part of the Kullu district. The small town is the beginning of an ancient trade route to Ladakh and from there over the Karakoram Pass on to Yarkand and Khotan in the Tarim Basin.

Manali and the surrounding area is of great significance to Indian culture and heritage as it is said to be the home of the Saptarishi, or Seven Sages.


piya: arghhh,abhay plz just stop it.whereever we go u will start ur google lecture...

rishbala,arshiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†


abhay: piya plz don't insult my google search.how can u know about our world without google and if u want to know any current affairs we need to use google.even mostly for ur girls fashion is important.without google search how will u know about fashion huh??????tell me...in google we can see whole world infront of our eyes.


rk: relax dude.ok she is just kidding why r u taking that much serious?yes,u r right.google is really helpful to all kinds of people. ok now leave it plz..


suddenly a big trouble arised that their bus got a repair.so they need to stay there for few hours.unluckily area is totally surrounded by forest.and no human being is not there.so they r so afraid.but still they had a hope that bus repair will done soon.rk got a mechanic with them to tour.he already perfectly made all arrangements.so there is no need to worry for them.

madhu impressed with his care,and his foreseeing nature.

rk called madhu to comeout from bus.but madhu afraid of dark.so she is getting scare to comeout.but she done it for rk.


rk is waiting for her.

madhu: rk..

rk turned towards madhu.

rk just staring at madhu.and he noticed madhu's fear.he already knew that madhu get scares in dark.so just he wants to say to her to be free that noone can touch her until he is with her.

so he just grabbed her in to his arms.

madhu widened her eyes with shock.

rk: madhu just luk at me.forget where we are and forget that u r in a dark place.just remind that here in this place just u and me...

madhu just staring at him.now her heart is beating heavily with his touch.and his breath is touching her hair.she can feel his hot breath on her.

rk : madhu until i am alive i will be with u.if i am di..

madhu cutted his words.

madhu: plz rk don't talk like that...even i can't imagine my life without u.

they r staring at each other.

Meri adhoori kahani
lo daastaan ban gayi
o tune chhua aaj aise
main kya se kya ban gayi




(eng translation of song
My incomplete story,

has finally become a (complete) story..

You touched me today such that
I became all different...)

rk(to himself): madhu i want to express my feelings to u but i can't..

madhu(to herself): rk i want to express my feelings to u but i
 can't bear ur rejection to my proposal again.

madhu is about to go.but rk tightened his grip on her waist.he doen't want
her to leave him alone.

sehme hue sapne mere haule haule angdaiyaan le rahe,
thehre hue lamhe mere nayi nayi gehraiyaan le rahe,
zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan
karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane..
karwat lene lage hain armaan phir bhi
hai aankh nam kyun na jaane
o saiyyan




(My afraid dreams are slowly stretching..

my stopped moments are taking new depths..

my life is wearing a smile,

and I don't know why it's showing so much compassion..

my wishes have started twisting n turning but-

don't know why, my eyes are still wet..

O my love..)

madhu: rk i need to go.so plz let me go.

rk loosened his grip.so she freed herself from him and she turned to go.but
she slipped..
rk: madhu.
he saved her from falling on ground.
odhun teri kaaya
solah singaar main saja loon
sangam ki ye raina
is mein tyohar main mana loon
khushboo teri chhoo ke
kastoori ho jaaaun
kitni pheeki thi main
sindoori ho jaaun
sur se zara behki hui
meri duniya thi badi besuri
sur mein tere dhalne lagi
bani re piya main bani baansuri




(I wear your body,

should decorate (myself with all) sixteen adornments..

this night of meeting,

I wish to celebrate a festival in this..

I wish to touch your fragrance,

and become musk,

how pale I was,

I wish to be like vermillion,

a little diverted from right notes,

how inharmonical my world was..

I started molding to your tune,

I became a flute, o love..)

madhu: rk...thank u so much.

rk: u welcome.

madhu is about to left him but suddenly she heard some weird voice so
she hugged rk with scare.

rk 😊 hugged her back.

(zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan
karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane..
karwat lene lage hain armaan phir bhi
hai aankh nam kyun na jaane
o saiyyan

mere aasmaan se
jo hamesha gumshuda the
chand taare
tumne gardishon ki
lay badal di
laut aaye
aaj saare..

O saiyyaan..




from my sky

those who were always missing

the moon and stars,

you changed

the tune of haze (can say clouds here)

and they all came

back today..



O my love...)


madhu realized that she is in rk's arms.so she freed herself from his arms.
she is not able to meet her eyes with his eyes.when she is about to leave rk
holded her hand.
madhu 😳 embarassed with his touch.

rk : madhu don't forget that we planned this trip for arnav,khushi patch up.
madhu 😭 bcoz she thought that rk called her to express his feelings.
again she is wrong.
madhu(😭to herself):that he never luvs u madhu...

madhu wiped her tears and nodded her head as ok without turning her face.

after few hours bus repair done and soon their journey started.

in bus:
 
rk(to himself): iam sorry madhu.i know u r waiting for me to propose u.but
i am not able to open up my feeling to u.i am being nervous to say those three magical words
to u.but i promise u after arnav khushi patch up.i will open up my feelings for u.

hope u like it.
plz do comments.

sorry for mistakes.



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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
It was magical! Ur 2 gud!
do pm me again & plz add more rishbala romance
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved Boys vs Girlz talk πŸ˜†
Beautiful song selection πŸ˜ƒ  Waiting for RK to confess his Love 

Lovely update πŸ‘πŸΌ