Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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rdforfun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#491

eager to hve arshi meeting for the next update😊

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Chochoo83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#492

it was well written

really like khushii send him back 300 rs

thanks for pm

continue soon

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ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#493

very good update...i read your story in one go ..beautiful

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Love.life2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#494

Nice one. so khushi deliberately sent him the letter to hurt him tht means he's still imp for her n secondly like jiya said if he doesn t care he b hurt.

Arnav is going to look for khushi n pull his resources to get to her. khushi seems to b different here she wnts arnav hurt or did she just say tht to justify sending a letter to him in front of jiya.

Khushi has to be realistic has she nt faced this kind in past again another snake n khushi needs to be wise jiya is right u cnt linger around it n let it bite like she did with shyam she never told anyone abt his advances after her engagement broke spl the same nite she remembered abt telling arnav he doesn t have a heart.

Also when aunty guessed abt her manager she said all men wnt the same thng n She remembered arnav may have hated her hurt her bt he dint make any advances on her or use her tht way when he had the means to do tht if he wnted. bt yes khushi as arnav said is too naive n at times really stupid to overlook thngs which are serious n take them lightly.

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Amita2014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Fab update!!!
Thanks for the PM.

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stories.1408

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Posted: 12 years ago

#496

so finally he is going to mumbai...hope they meet soon.poor khushi has troubles from all sides

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Sarah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Wow that was quite an intense, painful and emotional update.

Written exceptionally well,

So Arnav finally opened the letter and I can't believe Khushi had returned his 300 rupees, so Arnav has realised that Khushi is in Mumbai.

Deeya was angry at Khushi for sending the letter to Arnav and it sad because thinking is that Arnav does not care, I don't know why I get the feeling she sent him the letter maybe she was missing him and wants to see whether he cares or not.

I can't believe the disgusting proposition khushi's manager made to her, I think she should quit the job it's true what Mrs Malik said men will do anything.

Loved the advice that Mrs Malik gave to Khushi to make her decision easier, the following words stood out for me, amazing advice;

"Khushi always remember you have to learn to pick your battles. You don't declare war when you are a sitting duck. I'm not telling you to give up but be wise. Do you understand what I am saying?"

Loved the update, eager to read the next part.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#498

This chapter creates a bit of a thrill! He anticipation of Arnav finding her and the anticipation of Khushi's reaction when he does...because then she'll need to deal with the fact that he does care...and what that means for her. Will she want to go back there?

Her situation at work, whilst totally crappy, has me edgy to find out what happens because this could be a turning point for her...she would need to be mature and level headed...not just rushing head long into a reaction and then dealing with the consequences...as the lady said...pick her battles. It's a bit of a foreboder for her upcoming tussle with Arnav!!

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shona-li

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Loved the dialogue between Khushi & Deeya. I'm intrigued by Mrs. Malik and Mrs. Silvo. I wonder if Rahul has a romantic role to play. And Arnav's desperation is touching but I really question if he has really come to terms with his behaviour with Khushi all those years ago. I hope he does otherwise their confrontation would be inadequate.