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shreya i have told it a number of times bt i wud like to repeate it again, that weaving a concept tht deals wth time is nt an easy thing yet you are doing it the best way tht one cud ever do! 👏 becz so many thngs the writer has to keep in mind..
i knw hw difficlt it is!
very very commendable shreya! 👏
As you know in every writer's work the protaganists have certain behavioural qualities whch bears the dinstinctive style of their creators! Same is wth this abhay pia! They are the unfailing perfct picture of our same old abhay n pia yet they bear ths unavoidable stern,fierce n stubborn quality that i always njoy to read! Yes they did hav these in the show too bt here these qualities shine in their own special color! ⭐️
the entire update was brilliant in terms of creative n intellignt weaving of pieces togethr like always! No qualms there! 👍🏼
the part tht i lovd mst was pia-abhay portion. The part where pia sudnly bursts out n then feels imensly guilty on doing so. Like always the tiny glint of uniqueness that presented these emotional facets were marked wth the special wonderful style of urs!! 👏
and if we go a step back..then the part where abhay gets to know about pia and Reina behind it..his fierce outpour was again damn good to read!!
And again the moment where after lashing at him the way pia feels shocked on her own behaviour and in return abhay reacting all soft n kind to her..again in one hand it brings out the typical behavioural pattern of hurting the ones we love in return of hurt...and also in other hand..a kind softhearted caring abhay..who though is a moody reckless angry vampire as per his changing moods or demand of time yet is a different invaluable creature who cares nothing more then her well being wen it comes to pia!!! And wat a wonderful way had U brought this out!! Bravo!! 👏
Now moving to Alina..she is a mystery!! I mean nt abt her role here but about her innermost being..deep down she has a hollow feeling..dosnt matter wat her role is here..or wat she is upto..or what she seems frm outside...a closer look...tells a diffrnt tale..tale of unwanted..n..unrecognised..unrecognisd becoz her family has failed to look into her heart..the real her that hides or resides deep inside! (or am i thinking too far?)
I felt great pain..thats all i can say..i hope she finds a TRUE friend...
And Miss gupta ..is nt just alina's friend n well wisher bt i feel she knows much more about the whole buisness..or again is it me..thinking too much?? 😕
And abt sidh well...he is human n so he is diffrnt now..his perspective has change..mayb fr the time being by still its changd...and so has his aims...now the best thing is to wait n see where all these pieces leads us to...!!
All in all anther massive overwhelming update!! The fine plotting..interesting twists never fail to amaze me!!
Go on...am waiting fr the next..!
And thanx fr the knock..or else wud have missed comnting..😉
ok now update..!! n ya thanks fr pm! 🤗
Edited by Bleak_House - 11 years ago
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