FF- Time And Again- Book 2- Book 3- Link added - Page 13

Originally posted by: Asyalover

plz plz plz updte now its been long since u have posted the last chap...plz cont soon

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

whether u r comfy or no, this chapter has sure come out fabulous. the fallout between abhayendra and siddhartha was written well. 

many thanks for not making abhay think piyali to be maithili. 😉 

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

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It wasnt 15+ 😛 but since you are a kid like its fine 😛 😆  and just to let you know you are a fabulous romantic writer as well  👏  👏 Bleh don't call me a kid🥱

as always I love the flashback part. So Abhayendra actually kissed and almost make out with piyali but i guess there will be something more which will make him hate piyali or with past changing future will change and he wont hate her 😕 as usually u confuse me 😵  He will hate her😆

I loved the Siddarth Pia part and i have a feeling it will have a strong impact on their present relationship. correct me if Im wrong.  I won't correct but that won't mean you are right😛

Alina is working on Reinas orders right? I cant wait to know what is reinas relationship with all of this and I cant wait to see Piya coming back and giving a blow to Abhay. 😆  Reina's orders? I don't know, maybe she is Reina herself😉 

thanks for making us so confuse and leaving so many questions.. you are brilliant ⭐️

Thanks😳

Originally posted by: captainplus

great update

so abhayendra was jelous by seeing sid-piyali 2gether at nit

so abhayendra used 2 luv piya 4m b4 n his feelings 4r methz was just an attraction

 tats the reason he bhaved wit sid like tat ...

 Actually, if you read carefully, you will see that it was Sid who taunted him by saying Abhayendra took advantage of maithali, but whatever floats your boat😳

bt y did abhay mentionedin the last update tat he hates piyali n c btrade him 

its funny tat sid was like a brother 2 piyali n pre-leap he tried 2 snatch her 4m abhay by making her fall 4r him 😆 tats different case tat piya's dumbness (according 2 abhay her innocence) proved 2 b an advantage

against sid n c by indirect force punished him 4r trying 2 cum btween

her n abhay throwing big fat panchi over him 😆  

hope sid bcoms +ve now n understands tat methli is using him

m likeing the new sidina pair

Thank you for liking😳

sid actually deserves his share of happiness now after his relationships wit 2 horrible gfs n also he was not a bad gye b4

in b/w after panchi's death wat is arnav n the crazy dobrials doing ?

n wat about jay n dippu ?

patience, my friend...patience😆

in b/w who is this reina n wat is actually her plan ?

though i luv her til now would like 2 kno y does c want abhiya 2 b 2gether ?

is c one of pkyekians who want abhiya's baccha ?😛 😉

Hmm thats actually not a bad idea, but no its not coz of a kid..That's kind of done by other writers😳

bt watever u shouldn't hav deleted the scene was

we could have got a more clearer view of 10th december 2010 episode 😉

Hehe and then Snigs would have gone unpunished😛

nyways tanks 4r the pm

luv this ff n ur writing style

n want a sooner n longer update next tim

Thank you. As for longer, i really can't say since I write from mobile these days.

 

 

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

15+? 😳 Seriously? Well the only reason I made mine 16+ was bcoz of the bloody scenes 😆 All we got was a kiss? 😆

What should I say? I took tips from you😉

 Jokes apart I loved this update 😃 esp the fighting sequences n next time I guess I shall ask u for opinions for them while penning down mine 😉 I just love the way u write n I love ur choice of words. Really classy 👏 Wish I could write even half as well as that 😊

Actually, sweetheart, you are better😆

 Anyways Alina is Reina I think(99.99% 😛) coz u always give an unexpected twist 😛 So Pia will be back the next day n wat does she mean Abhay wont be able to stay away from her? 😕 Well yeah tats wat we all want dont we? 😆

Reina means what she says😛 And yes you should be on track for a twist always😉

 I am more than happy if thats the case but I hope Abhay doesn hate her bcoz of the prejudice he feels towards Piyali for something that happened in the past that was altered  I loved Abhay Sid face off, was perfect 👏 

Abhay will not hate Piya. he loves her na😕

Our Abhay was character dheela in 18th century itself 😆 

Arre don't call him that..woh amar prem tha🤣

The fight sequence where Pia mounts the horse n goes to safe Abhay was superb n I simply loved the fight sequence 👏 Brilliant ⭐️ Abhay Piyali were ☺️ But Abhay got close to her bcoz he thought she was Metz? 😭 I am sure in 21st century tables will turn 😉 Abhay will get close to Metz thinking she is Pia 🤣

Don't be too sure of anything mandy😆

  So this is the part that we got to see in the prologue? Sid betrayed his brother for a woman who never loved him 😭 I can understand his pain but this was no way to deal with it 😡 However I loved the way u have depicted Sid n Pia's bond here 😳 Infact I liked it more than Abhiya 😊 Please do continue soon. If u dont then I wont update Covenant 😈

Prologue is next chapter😳

You anyway won't update Covenant😭 But I am going to update soon anyway😛

Originally posted by: AbhiyaDewaani

Fabulous update..wow..Piyali saved Abhayendra...loved their romance...@Shreya,keep rocking girl...i m a great fan of ur FF...

Originally posted by: Priya46

oh man wat prison already?

Originally posted by: sukugeny

amazing chapy shreyu...y r u nt cmpfy...v r.so u too.u wrote al well.thnk u.

m jst waiting fr abhy pia face to face...wht vl abhay say..is he angry on her or vl he accept her...ab to sid bhi hai..wow..bhot mja aayega...yahoo...yayyy..m egrly waiting shreyu...update soon.ab iss metz ko kya hua?
shreyu..mini devil..love u fr this lamba update..u alwys kept golden updates.

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

I wanted the 17+ part but still this part was fantastic.
I loved it a lot.