new OS "ek ansu chhupa k rakha tha"UPDATE ON PG 2 - Page 2

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Et Tu Brutes...u also Veenaji, aisa adha adhura chhod diya, plz continue ASAP
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hay Veena ji apki bakwas hamein bahut aachi lagti hai so pls don't stop it... aur wah waki main is padh k toh mere aankhon se aashun aa hi gayi... humari choti si Rockstar ko kya kya sehna pad raha hai RaYa ki fight me... i hate it... but loved ur Os... do connt soon...
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ufff...bola tha na mne ki ye sab milke bahot rulane wale hain...aur sakshi...haye kya bolu yar...she always do that...awsm..today evrybody rockkss..ram priya pihu..jawab nhi in teeno ka yar...actully pta h kya i really enjoy this track...bus ek hi problm h...mummy daddy k sath baith k dekhne ki himmat nhi hoti yar...qki tab  aur jyada rona ata h...aur pura family rona dhona ho jata h...bas betiyo k sath yhi sabse badi problm h...wo chahe jitni bhi mazbut bane par ma baap k samne hamesha kamjor padh jati h...khair...ab main itna royi to aaplogo ko bhi rulaungi hi...ha but ek bat hai...atlast kuchh to achha jarur karungi...ok for update mne ye gana choose kiya jo mere track k sath chalega..."tujhse naraz nhi"..actully mujhe ye hamesha se bht pasand h aur m bht senti bhi ho jati hu ise sunke...ok here i go with next...

ram dekhta hi reh jata h...use kuchh samajh nhi aa rha hota h ki kya kare...wo wapas kamre me ata hai..pihu k pas baithkar uske mathe ko chumta h...pihu so to gyi h par uski siskiya abhi bhi rat k sannte ko tod rhi h ...ram priya aur pihu k palo ko yad krta h jitne bhi usne dekhe hain...with background score...


jindagi tere ghum ne hame rishte naye samjhaye
mile jo kabhi dhup me mile pyar k thande saye
tujhse naraz nhi zindagi hairan hu main,hairan hu main
tere masum sawalo se pareshan hu main,ha pareshan hu main

peechhle ek din me jo kuchh bhi hua ram use colabrate krne ki koshis karta h..priya ka pihu ram ko de dena..pihu ka priya ki har bat mante jana...wo jaise chahti h waise use handle kr leti h..wo kehti h to pihu khana kha leti h...wo kehti h to pihu jabrdasti hi sahi pr sbse has k hi baat krti h...wo kehti h to wouske bina sone ko bhi taiyar ho jati h...yha tak ki wo priya k liye apne ansu bhi behne nhi de rhi h...itni chhoti si umar itni sari samajh...aaj ram ko samajh ata h ki ye diya h priya ne apni beti ko...wo bhale hi dikhti ram jaisi h chalti ram jaisi h bolti ram jaisi h...lekin uski soch uski samajh uski sahanshilta..ye priya ne diya h use...ram dono k bare me sochte sochte so jata h...subah jab uski ankh khulti h to wo samne pihu ko pata h...

pihu...gudmorning papa

ram..gudmorning rockstar...aap itni jaldi uth gye???

pihu..ha...kab ka..par aap to abhi tak so rhe hain aur  main schol k liye taiyar bhi ho gyi..jaldi uthiye wrna hame late ho jayega...

ram..hehehe...ha dadima m abhi taiyar ho k ata hu..tum roz subah subah aise hi patar patar krti ho...

pihu...ha main to roz mumma ko bhi jagati hu..pta h mumma bht lazy h..subah jaldi nhi uthti h pta nhi aaj kaise uthegi...( pihu dukhi ho jati pr phir turant control kr leti h par ram samajh jata h..)

ram...pr apko taiyar kisne kiya??

pihu...nuts bua ne

ram..wo h abhi tak??

pihu...ha

ram...ok pihu main abhi taiyar hoke ata hu tum nuts bua ko yha bhej do please...

pihu...ok

pihu chali jati h...thodi der bad nuts aati h ram k room me..aur ram se phir se rudly baat krti h

nuts...ha boliye

ram...chhoti tu aise kyun bat kr rhi h mere sath??

nuts...kyun??? bura lag rha h??

ram...ha bura to lagega hi main tumlogo se itna pyar krta hu tumlogo k liye jeeta hu aur tumlog mere sath aise kr rhe ho..

nuts...oh thank god bhai ki apke andar pyar aur ehsas bacha h wrna apne jo priya peehu k sath kiya uske baad to mujhe laga ki apka dil pathhar ho gya hoga

ram...tu aise kyun bol rhi h priya khud hi to de ke gyi h pihu ko

nuts...ufff bhai apko ehesas bhi h is waqt priya ki kya halat h ...agar use kuchh ho gya na bhai to aap apneaap ko kabhi maaf nhi kar paoge...bhai she is not reacting in that...ki pihu uske pas nhi h aur nahi kabhi aayegi...jis pihu k bina ek pal nhi rhti thi wo...use apko jindgi bhar k liye dete hue ek bar bhi nhi royi wo...us pal se abhi tak lagatar muskuraye ja rhi h sabko samjha rhi h situation ko samjhne ka dawa kr rhi h...normally sare kam kare ja rhi h...bhai aap use sambhal lo wrna wo tut k bikhr jayegi...usne ek ansu nhi bahaya abhi tak...agar...aap waqai humlogo se pyar krte hain to please hamare liye hi sahi...priya ko sambhal lijiye hum use aise nhi dekh sakte...please bhai...please apni ko ektaraf rakh kr ek bar priya ki taraf dekhiye aur samjhiye...please

natasha sab keh k chali jati h ram sochne lagta h ki ye sab ho kya rha h...cheeze utni hi asan kyun nhi hoti jitni asani se hum soch lete hain...yha pihu pareshan h wha priya pareshan h aur undono ko dekh kr main pareshan hu..but ye sab aise nhi chal sakta kuchh to krna padega...tabhi pihu aa jati  h

pihu...papa jaldi chaliye nhi to late ho jayenge...

papa...ha ha chalo chalo...

ram pihu ko school drop krta h phir...pta nhi kaise wo sochte sochte priya k flat k neeche aa jata h...wo abhi bhi soch rha hota h ki jaye ya nhi...pr pta nhi kaise sochte sochte wo priya k flat tak bhi pahonch jata h...ram bell bjata h...waise to hamesha darwaza priya hi  kholti h aur wo expect bhi use hi kar rha hota h...but is bar aisa nhi hota h...darwaza neha kholti h...

ram...tum???...priya kahan h???

neha...ha main...hai yhi kahin gyi nhi h to tumhe khush hone ka mauka to nhi milega

ram...please yar neha...dnt say like that...theek to h wo

neha...kya fark padhta h ram

ram...bht fark padhta h neha...aur tum janti hoki fark padhta h

neha...main to janti hu ram lekin tum kab samjhoge...ki tumhari jid priya ko kahan le ja rhi h...tumhe andaza bhi nhi h...ki priya mentally kis hadh tak   effected ho rhi h...even priya ko khud bhi andaza nhi h...agr wo tut gyi ram to tum phir kabhi kuchh theek nhi kar paoge...please sambhal lo use...wrna sab bikhr jayega...

ram...wo h kahan???

neha...so rhi h

ram...is waqt???

neha...ha ratbhar to jagi thi pta nhi kab soyi isiliye mne nhi jagaya..tum mil lo usse main aati hu thodi der me...wo apne kamre me h...& please use rula do kisi bhi tarah...please sambhal lo...please

neha bhi chali jati h...ram andar jata h...priya pihu k teddy k sath soyi rhti h..ram use dekhta rhta h...ram uske pas ata h...look at on her face...wha bht sare dard k sath ek muskan rhti h jo ye ehsas dilati h ki shayad sapne me bhi pihu hi h...ram priya k sir pr hath rakh k dheere se jagata h...

ram...priya...priya

priya...mr.kapoor aap??...itni subah subah...gudmorning

ram...gud morning...subah subah nhi h priya...9:30 baj gye hain

priya hadbadha k uth jati h... are 9:30 kaise baj gye...pihu kahan h taiyar hone gyi kya???..main itni der tak kaise soti rh gyi...aur mne to pihu ka bag bhi nhi pack kiya..nashta  bhi nhi bnaya lunch bhi nhi pack kiya...shit ab mujhe sb bhag bhag  k krna padega wrna dadima ki bate shuru ho jayengi...pihuuu...pihuuu...baby jaldi se taiyar ho jao m  fatak se tumhara nashta bnati hu...garma garam aaloo k parathe...

ram...priya...meri bat suno

priya...are mr.kapoor mere pas bilkul time nhi h...agar late ho gya to apki beti pura ghar sir pe utha legi...lekin achha hua aap  aa gye aap use school drop kr denge to jaldi ho jayega..(priya bate krte krte apna kam bhi krti ja rhi thi phir kuchh dhundhne lagti h)...shit kahan rakh diya...ufff time pe to koi cheez milti hi nhi h...

ram priya ko pakad k rokta h...priyaaa...kya dhundh rhi ho???

priya...are pihu ka bag...pr aap chilla kyun rhe hain

ram...kyunki...na to pihu yha h...aur na hi uska bag

priya...oh..oohhhoo..hehehe...main bhi ekdm bewkuf hu...main to bhul hi gyi thi ki pihu to ab apke yha h..are to woaayi hogi na apke sath...mujhe pta h...uske man ka nashta aur lunch nhi mila hoga to kr di hogi jid yha aane ki...kitna samjha k bheja tha ki jo milega kha lena...par nhi khane k mamle me to madm ko koi samjha hi nhi sakta h..aapki jo beti h...har bat khane se shuru hoti h aur khane pe hi khtm hoti h...aap 2 min rukiye main uska lunch pack kr deti hu...wo neeche car me hai na...achha hua  upar nhi aayi...wrna itna messy room dekhti na to mujhe pura lecture de deti...mom itni badi ho gyi ho pr dicipline naam ki koi cheez nhi seekhi...ye yha kyun rakha h wo wha kyun rakha  h...ye aise kyun h wo waise kyun h...thank god bach gyi main dadi ma k lecture se...lekin pta h kya mr.kapoor ek din pihu nhi thi to mera pura time table gadbad ho gya..wrna subah subah madmji hi to jagati h mujhe qki unkee neend to puri ho chuki hoti h khrrato k sath...are apko bhi jagaya hoga na usne...apne so called dialogue k sath...jaldi utho...taiyar hona h nashta krna h late ho jayega ...bla blabla...hehehe...pihu bhi na

ab ram se bardasht nhi hota h...akhir kar uska dard ansuo k sath beh jata h aur wo priya ki ek ek harkat ko nam ankho se dekhta rhta h...with background score...

jeene k liye socha bhi nhi dard sambhalne honge
muskuraye to muskrane k karz utarne honge 
(imagin priya muskurate hue pihu k bare me bat kar rhi h aur ram use ansuo k sath dekh rha h)
muskurau kabhi to lagta hai jaise hotho pe karz rakha h
tujhse naraz nhi zindagi hairan hu main
tere masum sawalo se pareshan hu main

ram...priyaaa...bht ho gya...ab meri bat suno..nahi pihu yha h aur nahi main use sath  laya hu

priya...mr.kapoor...aap...aap ro kyun  rhe hain?? de to diya mne pihu ko apko...ab mere pas kuchh nhi bacha apko dene k liye

ram...priya tum aisa kyun kar rhi ho

priya...aapki maafi k liye aap maaf nhi karenge mr.kapoor to main chain se mar bhi nhi paungi

ram...priyaaa...itni si bat...lo abhi maaf  kar diya tumhe

priya...aise nhi mere sir pe hath rakh k boliye

ram...ye lo tumhari kasam priya mne tumhe maaf kiya

priya ankhe band kar leti h aur gehri sans leti h...ab theek h mr.kapoor ab main aram se reh sakti hu..ab sb prfect h mujhe maafi mil gyi aur apko pihu...hmmm ab sach sach btaiye pihu  neeche h na...aur usne lunch ki demand ki h na..bht shaitan h...hamesha aise hi krti h...

ram..priyaaa...sambhalo apne aapko

priya...aplogo ko aisa kyun lagta h ki main nhi sambhal sakti apne aapko...agr main aaplogo ko sambhal sakti hu to khud ko bhi sambhale sakti hu...koi badi baat nhi hui h..mujhe apna kam krne dijiye

ram...rukooo...koi badi baat nhi hui  h???...main batau tumhe kitni badi baat hui h...pichhle 10 min se tumne jitni bhi bate ki ...tumhari ek bhi bat dusri bat se mel nhi kha rhi h...itni badi baat hui h priya...tum kabhi kehti ho pihu h kabhi kehti ho pihu nhi h...itni badi baat hui h priya...subah subah uthne wali ma 9:30 baje tak so rhi h...itni badi baat hui h priya...ye...ye tumhara ghar...jisme tum aur tumhari pihu rhti thi...aur ab tum akele ho...itni badi baat hui h priya...pihu...priya...tumhari jindagi pihu jise tum apne hatho se mere pas de aayi ho hamesha k liye...itni badi baat hui h...

yha aao ye dekho...ye tumhara bister ispr ab tum hamesha k liye akele sone wali ho...kahan h pihu???...ye dekho...ye tumhara kitchen yha ab kabhi pihu k liye parathe nhi banenge...itni badi baat hui h...ye dekho pihu ka cupbord ab yha kabhi pihu k kapde nhi honge ...itni badi baat hui h priya...ye dekho study table ab yha kabhi pihu ki kitabe nhi hongi ...itni badi baat hui h priya...phi ka khana,pihu ka sona,uski bate ,uske kharrate,uski shararte ,uske gift ,uska kam...kuchh nhi hoga priya yha...itni badi baat hui h...dekhooo...nhi h pihu kahin...priya...kahin nhi h pihu

priya...hehehe...nhi h pihu...ha...kuchh bhi to nhi bacha h mere pas na pihu ki bate,na kharrate,na uske liye bhagna daudna,na uski jbrdst samajh,na uski chhoti chhoti jid...kuchh bhi to nhi h mr.kapoor...phir main jinda kaise hu...???...ye sanse kaise chal rhi h mr.kapoor...???...main itni patthar dil kaise ho gyi mr.kapoor???kaise ho gyi???kaise m chhod aayi meri chhoti si bachhi ko???...mr kapoor...kaise???

dono ekdusre k gale se lag k rone lagte hain...ye aya joro ka tufan ye tute do mazbut chattan...with background score...

"aaj agar bhar aayi hain bunde baras jayengi
kal kya pata kiske liye ankhe taras jayengi
jane kab kab gum hua kahan khoya 
"ek ansu chhupa k rakha tha"
tujhse naraz nhi zindagi hairan hu main
tere masum sawalo se pareshan hu main

ram...priya...priyaaa

priya...main nhi jee sakti mr.kapoor aaplogo k bina bht koshis ki mne majbut banne ki...bht takleef hoti sans lene me mr.kapoor aapdono meri jindagi ho...bht takleef hoti h jindgi k bina jinda rhne me...

ram...mujhe bhi...aur main janta hu ki aaj tum ye  baat bht achhe se samajh pa rhi ho...

baate krte karte ram priya k galo par girte hue ansuo ko hotho se rokta h...

priya...aaahh...mr.kapoor ye kya kar rhe hain???

ram...tumhara dard bant rha hu...(ram  kiss on her next  cheek)

priya...dard de ke dard bant rhe hain

ram...ha dard diya h isiliye dard bant rha hu...



then priya dnt want to do any argue...she wants feel him...wo apne dard ko kam hote hue aur pyar ko badhte hue mehsus krna chahti h...waise ekta ne ye bht galt kar diya yar...ye romance wgrh dikhane k chakkr me hame bht rulani wali h...hattt

its ovr for now...fir milenge
with love 
veena

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waah re waah veena 👏👏👏 bht bht bht khoobsurat narration hai dear!
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kya updtae hain dhi.. wow!!!! aapne to ekdum emotional kar di.. agar ye padke itna emotion hein to asli mein raya milan mein to ganga jamuna sab honge... bt awesome update dhi..
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Veena... aapki KHURAFATE... kabile tareef hain...
Rula ki hi dam liya tumne!!

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"aaj agar bhar aayi hain bunde baras jayengi
kal kya pata kiske liye ankhe taras jayengi
jane kab kab gum hua kahan khoya
"ek ansu chhupa k rakha tha"
tujhse naraz nhi zindagi hairan hu main
tere masum sawalo se pareshan hu main
 
cvs aur ekta ka pata nahi par apne likhe hue iss update ko padhke maine ek nahi kai saare aasu bahaye hai..aur ek aasu chupa ke rakha hai aane wale time ke liye jab hamare raya ek honge ham phir se woh din aur woh pyaar bhari nokjhok dekhenge tab woh aansu giraungi "khushi wala yaar" awesome as usual

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its too imotional...made me cry...
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Jeene k lie... Socha hi nahi... Dard sambhalne honge!! Haina... Rocking di..mai toh roo padi... Kaash ye scene show m actually ho...
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👏...superb veena...aur kal ki episode mei pihu ki dialogue : mamma kehti hai dusronki ghar jyada khana nahi khaani chahiye was too heart touching...😭😭