new OS "ek ansu chhupa k rakha tha"UPDATE ON PG 2

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Posted: 2012-12-18T08:38:32Z
hi to all..again i am here with my patar patar ...are yar jb se kal ka episode dekha h tab se mari ja rhi hu bakwas krne k liye...but situations hi sath nhi de rhi thi ..lol..finally i am here with my new OS called

"ek ansu chhupa k rakha tha"

but start karne se pehle mujhe thodi si bakwas krni h aur wo main karungi hi..actully kal k episode k bad logo ne ek bar phir priya ko blame krna shuru kar diya ki wo mahan banne ki koshis kar rhi h...hmmm...point to h boss mahan banne ki koshish nhi kar rhi h wo actully mahan ban rhi h...aur is kamal k qstion ka mere pas kamal ka ansr h...actully pehli bat to ki wo "maa" h to mahan to hogi hi...dusri bat ki use chance pe dance  marne ata h...dekho bhai mauke to dono jane ko diye gye the priya ne mauke ka istemal sahi tareeke se kar liya aur rambabu ego k chakkr me chuk gye..rambabu chahte to is incident k bad priya ko maaf krk aur peehu priya ko apna k mahan ban sakte the...pr ab kya kare big male fat ego...ab leke ghumte rahiye...aur aaplog kabhi kabhi to bardast kar liya karo yar priya ki mahanta...khair mujhe koi farak nhi padta qki mne to solid enjoy kiya jb priya ne pyar pyar me bade hi pyar se rambabu ke bade se rutbe ki bade hi solid tareeke se watt laga di...khair ye to hui meri bat bcz i love priya to itna bolna to bnta h...sorry agar kisi ko bura laga but meri aisi koi intensn nhi h...

ok now moving on OS...actully iska criteria mere deemag me serial dekhne k bad hi aa gya tha to main bht hi excited thi likhne k  liye lekin nhi likh payi aur ekta ne baazi marte hue mera ek jo bhrm tha use todte hue promo dikha diya to mujhko ye to clear ho gya ki beta aisa kuchh nhi aane wala h serial me..but main kya karu  mere deemag me to aa gya na to mujhe bahar to nikalna hi padega ...bas thode changes karne padenge promo k hisab se...actully ekta ne mujhe cnfuse kr diya pehle main scene priya k ghr pe creat krne wali thi lekin usne priya ko KM k bahar lake khada kar diya ab main samajh nhi pa rhi hu indono ko le kidhar jau...lol..chalo lets see kya nikalta h...here i go with...

"ek ansu chhupa k rakha tha"

it is about...A DARD...jo ki is waqt har kisi k dil me hain aur ek ansu jo  har kisi ki ankh me hain..priya k dil me dard h lekin use ehsas nhi h...ram k dil me dard hai ki use priya k dard ka ehsas h par jata nhi paa rha h...pihu k dil me dard ki use indono k dard ka koi andaza nhi h lekin wo apni muskan se har kisi ka dard mitana chahti h...qki wo apni ma k liye dard mehsus krti h aur pita ko dard dena nhi chahti h...pta h is dard ki ek kamal ki baat hoti h...ki iske bahar ane ka ek hi rasta hota h...aur wo hota h..."ankhen"...ya to dard ankho me dikh jata h ya ankho se beh jata h...ab dekhna ye h ki is dard ka kya anjam  hota h...mera actully is week ka programm fix h...main pura solid rona dhona krne wali hu serial k  sath..in teeno k chhupe hue ansu bahar aaye ya na aaye pr mere to solid aane wale h...hahaha...ab aplogo ko lag rha hoga ki dard pr hasne wali kya baat h...to yhi to bat h boss ki agar dard pe hasa nhi jayega to dardnak ho jayega aur bardast mushkil ho jayega...mujhe kya lagta h ki jab tufan aata h  to jo sabse mazbut chattan hoti h wo sabse pehle tut jati h...to i feel ki in teeno k dard k ansu sabse pehle rambabu ki ankho se nikalenge...aur ha ek aur baat,...main ye OS "bht dard bhara" likhne ja rhi hu...to please tolrate it...

scene...

priya KM k bahar ram se milti h aur phir convo hoti ...priya ram ki ankho me bht bebasi dekhti h...ram bhi usse kuchh to  kehna chahta h lekin keh nhi pata h...aur priya dilme dard aur ankho me ansu leke chali jati h...ram andar wapas aata h...par darwaze par hi ruk jata h qki use andr se pihu ki bato ki awaz aati h...actully priya ne jise sapna samjha tha wo haqeeqat tha...pihu sachhi me dar k uth gyi thi..aur priya ki tasweer hath me lekr bate karne lagti h rote hue

pihu...mumma i miss u sooo much aap kahan ho please pihu k pas aa jao...pihu apke bina nhi rh sakti h...please mumma...(pihu rone lagti h...phir rote rote achanak apne ansu ponchhti h)...no pihu tum nhi ro sakti...tumne mumma se promise kiya h na ki tum mummako proud feel karwaogi...to tum kaise ro sakti ho...agr mumma ko pta chala to unko bura lagega na,...u hv  to b gud girl pihu...cmon ansu poncho aur chupchap so jao...tumhe mumma ko proud feel karwana h...tum nhi ro sakti pihu...mumma will feel proud on u...pihu rona nhi...

but she still crying...lekin uski jitni bhi himmat h use juta k wo apne ansu rokne ki koshis jarur karti h aur priya ki tasweer ko baho me leke so jati h...ram yedekh kar ekdm shock ho jata h use bilkul andaza nhi tha ki pihu ye sab isliye kar rhi h...isiliye wo bar bar kehti h ki wo khush h...ram turat bahar jata h ye soch k shayad priya ho bahar...lekin priya bhi ja chuki hoti h...ram ko kuchh samajh nhi aa rha hota h ki wo  kya kare...

to b  continue...

baki serial k bad...

Edited by veena23 - 2012-12-19T07:26:48Z
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Posted: 2012-12-18T08:48:12Z
hay hay.. kya lika hain yaaar.. mmuuaah... u r jus awesome... continue shoon..Big smileSmile Edited by Mahaalwayscool - 2012-12-19T03:52:30Z
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Posted: 2012-12-18T08:58:36Z
Beautifully written Veena. Hindi is such a beautiful language and you express the feelings so well, be it love or pain or sorrow. I love the way you write.
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Posted: 2012-12-18T09:32:54Z
pls update as soon as possible ... Smile 
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Posted: 2012-12-18T11:26:00Z
awww ... Veena ... amazing outstanding fantabulous ... words kam padra hai yar!

ClapClapClap very lovely OS Veena!

Hug aapki narration skills ko ...
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Posted: 2012-12-18T12:22:45Z
wonderful post Star
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Posted: 2012-12-18T19:07:58Z
Veena di priya mahaan toh banegi hi aakhir uske paas mahaan bne ke 101 tarike jo hai ha ha shayad uski diary mein 101 tarike hi likhe hai lol
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Posted: 2012-12-19T00:24:45Z
ekta ki serial mei women only will be mahaan not men so there is no wonder priya mahaan banna...Smilewhat say guys...comming to update awesome by the way veen aap ki bak bak ya patter pater bhi mujhe bahut accha laga good going continue soon...Clap
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