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Originally posted by: epiphany.
I know I do not follow your other fan fictions and I am a kiss arse for that but let's just say, I cannot come around to fan fictions much. But I had made it a point to save this particular PM and come here to review it anyway. 😳 And I will follow, I swear on my cyber Potter possessions. (:
Anyway, so you start. The character sketch is very nicely detailed. It is written with enough depth for the reader to easily visualize your characterization. It is not very different from the show but let's just say, I like the addition of characters you've made. What I did not understand was why you've named such a mellow piece of writing 'Adrenaline Rush' but by the time I ended reading the prologue, I figured it's referring to the romantic tension between Swayum and Sharon. And boy, isn't their tension in such affairs! Yes, there is. So I am looking forward to reading, yeah?Thanks for the PM. Let the chapters come!Kankshita
Hey my lovelie. It is really pleasing to know that you liked my character sketch. I took me a painful one week to come up to it, seriously.
Well, it does refer to such tensions, 😉 and you very well understood it! 👏 And now you really have to read it ahead! 😆 [You would somehow, the deal ain't openly announced yet!]
Anyhow, well, have let the stage open. Let's see how soon the updates come. 😛
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