Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 1) - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome, plz update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update !!! Khushi is finally in shantivan !!!!! N arshi love story is gonna start !!!!!! Wow ! Pls pls pm me !
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update!!
 
so khuhsi will come & live in shantivan now...
felll bad for her though...
& ASR..u need some serious spanking!😆😆
 
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am again not able to send the required number of PM's as I  apparently don't have sufficient number of posts on the forum 😕

Sorry for the inconvenience. I hope you still read the story and comment.

Please buddy me for future PM's.


Edited by Anony_mous - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update..
Looking forward to the next parts!!
update soon..😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice story. Cant believe this s ur first story. Ur writing is so good. Waiting to know how their love story is going to bloom.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc concept , n Khushi in Rm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey!
 
Hats off to you! Seriously! With every update this gets better and better in terms of the emotions and feelings of various characters, which are portrayed exactly how they should be. Perfection! 👏
 
I understand Arnav's plight. He's been decieved, betrayed, hurt ... all in the past and thus has built a guard around himself for self preservation. Having said that, he should atleast try to not take his anger and bitterness out on others especially Khushi.
 
Beautiful stuff ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
 
 
Edited by ASRandKKGSRFan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...
Arnav has serious trust issues...
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Posted: 11 years ago


I generally linger on after an update to tweak any mistake in spellings or layout.  These early comments get me immensely  thrilled :)

My favorite comments are when you guys tell me that I don't look like a first time writer or when you discuss the update in a little detail 😳

Thank you again. And please please please Buddy me for PM's.


Edited by Anony_mous - 11 years ago