#4 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 19-22 - Page 95

Originally posted by: Roxxy47

Swayam actually made a parantha , Wow ...haha!

As i said before i am liking the new Taani , i still stuck to my words 😊...aww yay! I'm really happy to read this :D

Kria interacting with Smriti , that's good...Thanks!

The boys can never change , Swayam ko Taani ke naam se tease kar rahe the , inka kuch nai ho sakta 😆...Sahi kaha.. inka kuch nai ho sakta 😆

Sharon's determination was great But a shock as well for others 😆...True.. good yet shockful

"Kriya" , the name brought old memories back...It does and will continue to ;)

Wow we have a new character in this FF , Naina...

Kya entry dekhai hai uski , saved by the great 'Kriya' 👍🏼...

Kis tarha se phasaya Kria ne un boys ko 😆...

Got to read about happy moment for Kria after quite a long time...

N ya kria has a right to smile n needs a friend physically close as well 😊... happy you agree! I'm glad you liked the scene here :D

Rey's behavior is getting unpredictable , kabhi rude baat karta hai toh kabhi Sorry keh deta hai , Kria ki judaai ne kya kya kar diya hai 😛...ahahaha! Rightly said. Bichare ki kya haalat ho chuki hai..

Sharon being the 6th dancer , ahan lets see what happens next...

Both parts were Superb 😃...Thank you so much!

Loved them ❤️...

It's alright if u can't make Kriaynsh meet by New Year ,i'll be waiting for that part 😊.And once again thank you for understanding!

Originally posted by: samee12

nyc one yaar
but missed KR a lot

Originally posted by: shaani2209

two updates back to back, hmm...yea..

chapter 21:

Swayam waking up at sharon's thought was niceee n with the hope that he holds, justifies his optimistic behavior..well done part..thankyou!

ROFL at the kitchen part😆 good to see that in this matter u have made taani in ur FF totally opposite from the one in the show...haha, glad to know!

nice to see kria finally opening up a bit to her mother..yes.. about time na?

the intro part of taani-gang was nice to read...nil freaking out n boys reacting was amusing part.. Thanks for the view 🤗

chapter 22:

changes in sharon were nicely brought out... Thanks again xD

i liked that you dint rush out in showing the changes in sharon, nicely handled part..I can really rely upon you for ardent views for SwaRon! :D So big thank you di.

it wasn't abt dance alone but it was abt dil and dosti too, was a well put part..really liked how u put that :) Yes.. glad you did!

thanks for making taani have so much logic, and she reasoning out the pieces she was not understanding...Yes, she needed to here. I could not keep the one we have in the show..

Kria standing up for an unknown person n the whole situation was nicely done..

nice to see that kria has a person to be with...a new frnd to smile with :) Yes... someone needs to be physically there..

simmi-sharon-rinni part was wonderfully put...i miss this frndshp in the show :( Same. They are not shown at all nowadays. Mostly it's just the duo and Neha now. =(

looking forward to how things shape up with the whole 6th dancer thing in progress...Thanks... I hope to do justice yet again..

thanks for the pms :) No prob!

Originally posted by: aishu3003

awesomeee update👏

loved ittt😊

waitin for d nxt part😳

Originally posted by: deetha

laalbatti naam change???? achi hai!!! eee... haan.. acha laga na? 😳

now coming to updates...

i loved both as usual *yawn* har baar yahi bole thak gayi... kuck aur bol do ;-)

chotu comment deti hun kk coz guests aaye hue hai and wo nursery dekhne gaye aur mai net urf kar rahi hun... no problem! hahaha tum bhi kounse time pe aati ho re :p

so...the part which took my whole attention is the feared kriya but acting brave and the "one sec rude nd next sec polite rey!!"these where their real characters... loved how u bought them back... Im glad to know this DD. Sachi me :D

lub u :*🤗 LY2 <3

waise naina ...koun hai wo ladki maine kahi dekha She used to play a role in DMG and Geet as far as I know.. She might have done few other shows.. these are two shwos she is most commonly fomous for.. Naina was her role in DMG.

Originally posted by: samee12

luved it
it's smthng tht gives immense pleasure to read FF
ths is lyk d most wanted wrk i do wd my net
thnks 4 making me fall in luv wd reasing stuffs,, tooo


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Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Wow. . .
Awsome update . . .
Lovd it. . . .

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

both the chapter awesome and loved it...
update res of the chapter soon...

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Awesome update and thanks for the pm :D Naina is really sweet, happy that Kriya has got a new friend

Nikki <3

Originally posted by: asmaju

50 Likes in a day!!

I just love it..