AsYa Two-shot: Secret Desires (Updt Ch 2 pg7) - Page 8

NICEEE!!! LOVED IT ... ONE HEATED UPDATE MUST SAY...

Is this an end to this beautiful piece of work. I so wish I could get more of it.. I genuinely loved it... Really, breathtakingly awesome... Mashallah.. You are an amazing writer.. I would love it if you write more.

It was superb, do write more pleaaase 😳

loved reading your OS

Nice update...do pm me wen u update plzz

i hope when u wrote "THE END" u didn't mean that it was the end of ur story! please update ur story! u may have heard this before, but u have this refined flow of words when you write, like a professional writer. i must say, i LOVED ur story and thoroughly enjoyed the use of rich vocabulary. please inform me whenever u update next. till then, maybe i'll keep re-reading the chapters. ❤️ 👍🏼 Edited by quetre - 10 years ago

loved it! very detailed description! tks enjoyed reading!

THIS WAS AMAZING! I can't believe I didn't find this earlier! So well written! The way you show them opening up to each other and how Asad makes her aware of her strong attraction and feelings for him. Brilliantly written. Loved it! 

Omg, this is simply AMAZING! 👏 👏 👏 I enjoyed it SO much, especially the 2nd part! 👍🏼 I loved how Asad was being such a tease! 😉 And I also loved how he knew and made Zoe aware about their feelings for each other. 😳 And the kiss? Omg! This was sooo awesomeee! :) Beautifully written, superb job! ❤️ Love it. <333

so perfect