omg am I dreaming? someone pinch mehey aniee how are you dear? u have started new ff. the banner for the ff is beautiful. i very much liked it. the first chapter... π did geet say like that? Geet maan singh kuranaπ π poor girl... lets see what will happen... your writing skills improved a lot dear.. good progress.
part 2 is also very nice aniee. poor geet facing so many embarrassing moments and shocks after shocks give her a break π . by the way it will be our lil. secrete. why did maan write the name like that? π
Originally posted by: maanmeet1
Wow...don't knw bt I became geet while reading it...I had cold hands n don't knw wht was going in my mind n heart...I felt like I was dying for his one look...
While sins r being committed by her, is he gonna b part of it too? How foolish n childish dat she took his notebook bt how adventurous n cute...having something dat belongs to him...Needless to say u have made me crazy again vd dis updt...totally loving it...did he do it purposely? Could u pls updt soon...
thank u sooo muchohhh god... i have no words for this wonderfully penned down update...
each and every expression and word were so beautifully written... loved it to core...OMG... Maan defo is in love with her secretly... ohhh her name in his note book the way she said...and their interaction part... it was just fab...so the first sin is done... ohh what can she do whn she is so much compelled by her heart...No sin dear Geet... you have just done Greed with Maan's stuff.. its no sin... it's Maan's and he is yours... so no worry...I loved the update and eagerly waiting for second sin...π
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