[SwaRon] *Diwali Special*Ch5(last)Pg31 Pmz later - Page 11

Amazing update
wished sharon would have slapped him twice or more than that
loved swaron meeting
eagerly waiting for the next part

woww awesomeee👏

loved it

Hey Khushi, Happy Diwali to u...Im sorry I hav been very erratic with my response to ur work these days...have really lost the interest to cum to IF mostly...but u hav been very persistently sending me PMs nevertheless...I admit i checked this one out, out of guilt more than anything else...but trust me Im gonna enjoy reading this one...u hav always been a storyteller with a mature approach and I find that very much here too...Swaron work by u is a wonderful reading experience..I enjoyed both chapters very much...esp the last portion when Swayam revived her depressing spirits with his encouraging words...luk forward to the next update now!!!    

Originally posted by: GayatriJethani

Amazing part

loved it

Reserved

Will definitely edit this in a day. Sorry.

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

I added a bit of chapter 3 in here just to add it. And they meet! Let me know how it was please :D 

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It looked amazing dear. This story was a treat to read! 😉 But once again I did not receive  a PM.. 😭 You got that figured out now 😆 

Anyways.. Coming back to the update. I really loved the way you portrayed the confused reactions of Swayam. 😆 They were mind blowing. 👏 Thank you so much!! 

But but , the main highlight of the Chapter was the slap! 🤣 Dude. I am so glad you stood up for herself out of her self-pity and did the needed to that wreck! 😃😃 Haha thank you! 

Khushi, you write wonderfully!  Keep it up Girl.. Aww, thank you so much!!

Cheers,

Nivriti 😳

Originally posted by: Joshua_TANHA

Nice update!!!

Loved Swayam's confused concern !!! 😳

Shivam That creep again!!😡 Loved Sharon's slap 👏 

 

Eagerly waiting for the next update !!!!!

Originally posted by: sanj.98

 ❤️ it !!!!!! 😊

Originally posted by: bhanumathitanha

I LOVED IT .SHARON SLAP TO DA CHUCHINDAR CREEP SHIVAM WOW 😉😃
AND SWAYAM WAS CONFUSED
LOL PLEASE UPDATE IT ASAP