[SwaRon] *Diwali Special*Ch5(last)Pg31 Pmz later - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
          AWESOME update yaaar
loved there first meet
and whtever swayam said to sharon i agree
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: an_skyfighter

          AWESOME update yaaar
loved there first meet
and whtever swayam said to sharon i agree


Thank you! :D
Means a lot to me πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
U r wrong khushi . . . . . 23 likes till now πŸ˜‰

she's still searching alone time . . . . . .

but shivam intrudes her privacy . . . . . . . He can't keep himself from hurting her 😑

got ur gift in return . . . . *public insult* . . . 😈

he deserves even worst

but swayam ko sharon dikhane ke liye itna hi kaafi hai πŸ˜†

ohhh . . . . Rockets are the ultimate spoilers . . . . . . But here- an excuse for a meet πŸ˜‰

he burned his hands for saving her . . . . . . & even confused her that why would he do this 😳

awww . . . . . She's applying ointment πŸ€—

majnu ka lecture kaam kar gya . . . . . . . She looks happy πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yogini64

U r wrong khushi . . . . . 23 likes till now πŸ˜‰ Haha yes. Turns out I'm wrong and I like that for once πŸ˜† 

she's still searching alone time . . . . . .

but shivam intrudes her privacy . . . . . . . He can't keep himself from hurting her 😑

got ur gift in return . . . . *public insult* . . . 😈  karmo ka phal toh milna hi tha. Kehte hai na. Karma is a ****

he deserves even worst

but swayam ko sharon dikhane ke liye itna hi kaafi hai πŸ˜† lol more than enough! 

ohhh . . . . Rockets are the ultimate spoilers . . . . . . But here- an excuse for a meet πŸ˜‰ I too hate them but used them for good this time :p 

he burned his hands for saving her . . . . . . & even confused her that why would he do this 😳

awww . . . . . She's applying ointment πŸ€—

majnu ka lecture kaam kar gya . . . . . . . She looks happy πŸ˜ƒ kaam kiya toh... after all.. it's majnu with his talks <3 

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Posted: 11 years ago

thank you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I added a bit of chapter 3 in here just to add it. And they meet! Let me know how it was please :D 

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It looked amazing dear. This story was a treat to read! πŸ˜‰ But once again I did not receive  a PM.. πŸ˜­

Anyways.. Coming back to the update. I really loved the way you portrayed the confused reactions of Swayam. πŸ˜† They were mind blowing. πŸ‘

But but , the main highlight of the Chapter was the slap! πŸ€£ Dude. I am so glad you stood up for herself out of her self-pity and did the needed to that wreck! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Khushi, you write wonderfully!  Keep it up Girl..

Cheers,
Nivriti πŸ˜³
Edited by NocturnalBeing - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update!!!
Loved Swayam's confused concern !!! 😳
Shivam That creep again!!😑 Loved Sharon's slap πŸ‘ 
 
Eagerly waiting for the next update !!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
 β€οΈ it !!!!!! πŸ˜ŠEdited by sanj.98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I LOVED IT .SHARON SLAP TO DA CHUCHINDAR CREEP SHIVAM WOW πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ
AND SWAYAM WAS CONFUSED
LOL PLEASE UPDATE IT ASAP
Edited by bhanumathitanha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😊😊the update is really awsome ...
And ya thnx for the pm 😊